Sequence: Starting from Madman and Promoting

With Mysterious Pearl in front of me, the world view of this novel basically follows the Mysterious World View. However, as a time traveler, the protagonist's understanding of the world view is extremely low, which can be said to be unreasonable. Moreover, the protagonist is said to be an ordinary person, but as a normal person, he is extremely lacking in how to deal with others, unlike modern humans who have experienced an information explosion. The transformation of the protagonist is not too obvious. The transformation of a person is instantaneous. After experiencing the time travel and the digestion of the magic potion, a large number of illusions will impact the protagonist's world view. Just like the change in mentality of humans in the fleeing fleet in Three-Body Problem. But overall it's a good book, good luck to the author

Give yourself a five-star rating (don't be afraid of being proud O. O)

To evaluate this novel, simply speaking, it is worth reading. The content is quite brain-burning. Take your time like tasting wine. The beginning of this novel is as unreal and realistic as a dream. Very few people write like this.

Very well written! ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧It would be nice to update more

Let me tell you my point of view. A good Western fantasy, supernatural and mysterious novel should have a rich world view, such as a history with clear logic, characterization of small characters, and mysterious organizations. Money and its purchasing power, different local customs and food. It is mysterious enough but needs to be revealed step by step. These are the foundations of a world. In addition, there must be a rigorous extraordinary system, (such as the promotion of various abilities, the law of extraordinary immortality, the law of mutual attraction of the same sequence) and the equipment system (you can consider that magical items like the Lord of Mysteries have time, and the negative effects and use costs of sealed objects with powerful abilities are greater. The production and use of one-time equipment "talismans"). In addition, there is a money system, such as the exchange of information knowledge and extraordinary materials and items. In the later stage, money can easily collapse. Be sure to pay attention to this measurement. In addition, the protagonist must first be on the side of justice, but he must not be too holy in his actions. He must have a good grasp of justice and kindness, and must have IQ and decisiveness in killing. As for the heroine, it's enough to have one, but it's okay to not have one, as you can shape the quality of the other supporting women. There can be multiple partners. It's also good to create a funny pet or character, which can have a good effect, or one or two noble people. As long as the principle of equal exchange must be pursued. In terms of plot, you can first be involved in the extraordinary world, and then step into the extraordinary step by step and unveil the veil. Let the protagonist gradually grow up through events with a sense of suspense and mystery. Occasionally, in order to strengthen yourself, it is necessary to take risks and go to ruins (that is, download a dungeon). Try to turn the tide as much as possible. But you must also pay attention to a certain degree, and you cannot blindly write cool articles. The fighting should not be too boring, and don't be pretentious. It should be reasonably written so that the protagonist uses his own abilities and brains instead of relying on external things to jump through the ranks. Finally, the name of each person in this theme is very important. It should not be too difficult to remember. Or you can connect the character's occupation with the name, making it easy for people to associate. He may not be able to remember the person's name, but when he mentions what he does, he will remember it. Finally, this update is for you. To be honest, it is too little and too slow, no matter what the reason. Then, the writing style is generally average. In many places, the third person narration is used all the time, which seems a bit unsmooth. (For example, what happened to Lin Rui in the next sentence, and Lin Rui is added in the next sentence, and this is still the case) These are just my personal opinions, not guidance or suggestions.

Overall, it's pretty good. It's just that the beginning is a bit confusing, and many people may not understand it, but once you get past that, there's basically nothing to discourage. Also, I personally feel that it is a bit rushed. The promotion to sequence 8 is still a bit fast, but it still makes sense. The author can consider slowing down the pace.

Come on, author, it looks very good at the moment

Well, it's a bit brain-burning, but it's not bad. I'll give it five stars [smile]

A very talented author, but talent does not necessarily mean perseverance. Come on! It is best not to stop updating until it is finished. It's okay even if the writing is a bit rushed and unfinished. But at least there is an ending.

Come on, this is the second good book that surprised me.

A book you can read with your mind! But why doesn't anyone watch it⊙▽⊙?

Keep at it, I can redo the early plot in the future

Not bad, just a bit short

Not bad, not bad. The preparation for the protagonist's emotional change is quite good. The plot is also reasonable. The only drawback is that there are so few and there are no ratings.

It's very nice. Except that I feel like the Goddess of Destiny has nothing to do with the Church of the Night, there's no problem there.

Not bad, there are some typos, and the Eastern code names and speaking habits appear in a Western background, which is always a bit inconsistent [Chigua] Looking forward to the follow-up There is no point just because of the code name, it is purely a point. By the way, this violation can be written as foreshadowing or changed in the future, otherwise it will be a bit abrupt [face covering] Overall it's good, you can check it out

It's okay, it's pretty good [note]

Very well written, come on [learn it] It was still a little bit worse, but I felt like it changed later [eating melon]

It's pretty good, but it's too short. It's just one picture a day. I really don't think about adding a few more pictures [Learned]

It's okay, but there's too much foreshadowing in the early stages, and not much about the extraordinary.

I think it's okay

Money is the prerequisite for development along the way. Strength is fundamental to survival. Is it life or results.

I just read the first few chapters and they were quite interesting.

I half understand it, but I really want to watch it.