Hello, readers! This is my first time publishing a book. La la la! Please let me know if there is anything I could improve.
(A quick heads-up: the beginning is sweet, but the later chapters get angsty. The protagonist will become a bit of a sadist midway through.)
In a dungeon…
"Hm? Is she dead?"
A stunningly beautiful young woman prodded the corpse on the ground with a scalpel.
"Sigh~ She got off easy. Never mind, it's getting late. Yeye is probably waiting for me already. Someone clean this place up."
The girl tossed the scalpel aside, then called over two guards.
"Clean this place up."
She pointed at the corpse on the ground and left.
"Understood!" ×2
After the girl was gone, one of the guards looked at the person on the ground, who had neither skin nor a face, and promptly threw up.
The other guard could only pat him on the back to comfort him.
"You'll get used to it. There'll be plenty more of this."
The guard who had just vomited could only nod.
"Sigh, that human deserved it for sneaking into the Beastfolk territory to steal."
"Don't you think the Beast Emperor is a little cruel? Couldn't she just kill people like that?"
the guard who had just vomited asked, puzzled.
"Impossible."
"Why? Just because she's the newly appointed Beast Emperor?"
"Exactly."
"All right… By the way, what's her name? I only know her codename."
"Her name? If I remember right, she's called... [Black Sun, Dark Moon] Mu Siming."
The characters and plot feel good, but the author's writing style needs to be improved and it looks a bit uncomfortable. Leave it five stars for now, and be gentle when cutting later.
Not bad, support it with five stars
Please give some encouragement to the author of the new book. It feels so short.
How many swords will there be in the later stage? Is there a happy ending?
I've read Chapter 11 and it seems a bit strange. The subject matter is okay.
Five stars, take care of the new book 🙂🙂