Quick Travel: the Flirtatious Daily Life of the Vixen Host

How come the story about that venomous boss is gone after only a few chapters?

Generally speaking, the writing style is relatively young, but the identities of the characters in the planes really poked me. The male and female protagonists fell in love at first sight, and there was not much process of developing feelings. In the first plane, the male protagonist and his brother both liked the female protagonist. I watched the rest and reviewed them.

It's great. Please keep updating. The one with the sharp tongue hasn't finished updating yet [crying]

The author needs to work harder, improve his writing style, and make the characters more three-dimensional. Here are some suggestions from me. First of all, the plot that the heroine receives should not be so sloppy. It is like the introduction of a novel to give everyone a general understanding of the situation and try to write it as succinctly as possible. There is also the first world. The male protagonist is a doctor who has been harassed by the female protagonist for a long time. His attitude towards the female protagonist cannot change so quickly. Some stories must happen in the middle, preferably some big events, and he must change his mind towards the female protagonist. In this case, the transition will not be so blunt. It is best to add a psychological change (this will make the story more interesting). Secondly, the experience of love should be richer. What you write has the feeling of a primary school student playing house. Here I suggest you read other authors, which is the kind of pulling feeling when writing about feelings, the kind of pulling that wants to refuse but welcomes you (of course, this will be a little difficult, but if it is written well, it will be very popular) If you can't write about your emotional experience with that sense of pulling, you can try to start with the heroine's role. For example, if you are playful and lustful, you can write about being pure and ignorant without knowing how to seduce people. If you improve the writing style later, you can also add some dark sides to the heroine on this basis to highlight the character and make the character more three-dimensional. Finally, I hope the author will work hard! !

Looks good, keep up the good work!

Very pretty, hehe😁

Super nice and recommended

Good-looking people are still staying up late, but good-looking people are already awake

Very good, not much text but interesting

Very nice, keep up the good work [Like][Like][Like]

Come on! The author is great