Lu Feng, who was sent to the continent of Teyvat, lost his right arm due to someone's negligence, but he also gained a magical power that had not yet been fully awakened.
(Practice on the first book, please support me if you are interested, the character design may collapse)
Reader comments
Do you want to give the protagonist the entire Void Manzo [smile][smile][smile]
The content is wonderful, especially some of the details [laughing evilly]. But some details are not very good, such as "chief" and so on. The protagonist's identity is the apprentice of the Immortal, and in terms of status, he is no worse than Qixing. There is nothing wrong with writing about patriotism, but don't force it into it, as it may seem a bit awkward and inconsistent. The genre of the novel is not well suited to this form. You can write more about the content [laughter] and life, so that you can feel more immersed.
Very awesome, I don't know how to describe it now, anyway nb is right
@ During my day and night, I have successfully saved 8 yuan and 8 cents. I believe that during the days when the author updates, I will save more and more. Whether the author can get it depends on his own ability [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]
Come on, author
Let's do it quickly, okay?
Very well written, the ending is 5 million words
After watching it for a while, why did I have the illusion that the heroine is Ye Lan?
Five stars is a must. Sometimes I don't even know the author is in kaiche. It's so good [I'm full]
66666666666 The author has given you five stars for another book and this book, come on!
It's so good that I'll spend my whole life on it. This is the best novel I've ever read, bar none.
It's really good, keep up the good work, author!
Feel free to comment, but please don't attack others personally. I accept all criticism. The only thing that can break my defense is the big reviewer [Chigua]
The author writes very well, keep up the good work
It's okay. Come on, author.
Looks like good reviews, give it a try
It's very punishing. If the author is very punishing according to their original age, then it should be regarded as a magic change [Thinking]
Good, good, good, good
Please keep it up
Write well and make up for all the tragedies.
Why can't I find this book on my other phones?
Are you still there? Author, I haven't updated for so long. Do you know how lonely I am?
Yes, it's just that the relationship was too fast. I won Youla in two chapters [laughing and crying]
A very qualified Genshin Impact fanfic, come on, author
Do you want to give the protagonist the entire Void Manzo [smile][smile][smile]
The content is wonderful, especially some of the details [laughing evilly]. But some details are not very good, such as "chief" and so on. The protagonist's identity is the apprentice of the Immortal, and in terms of status, he is no worse than Qixing. There is nothing wrong with writing about patriotism, but don't force it into it, as it may seem a bit awkward and inconsistent. The genre of the novel is not well suited to this form. You can write more about the content [laughter] and life, so that you can feel more immersed.
Very awesome, I don't know how to describe it now, anyway nb is right
@ During my day and night, I have successfully saved 8 yuan and 8 cents. I believe that during the days when the author updates, I will save more and more. Whether the author can get it depends on his own ability [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] Come on, author
Let's do it quickly, okay?
Very well written, the ending is 5 million words
After watching it for a while, why did I have the illusion that the heroine is Ye Lan?
Five stars is a must. Sometimes I don't even know the author is in kaiche. It's so good [I'm full]
66666666666 The author has given you five stars for another book and this book, come on!
It's so good that I'll spend my whole life on it. This is the best novel I've ever read, bar none.
It's really good, keep up the good work, author!
Feel free to comment, but please don't attack others personally. I accept all criticism. The only thing that can break my defense is the big reviewer [Chigua]
The author writes very well, keep up the good work
It's okay. Come on, author.
Looks like good reviews, give it a try
It's very punishing. If the author is very punishing according to their original age, then it should be regarded as a magic change [Thinking]
Good, good, good, good
Please keep it up
Write well and make up for all the tragedies.
Why can't I find this book on my other phones? Are you still there? Author, I haven't updated for so long. Do you know how lonely I am?
Yes, it's just that the relationship was too fast. I won Youla in two chapters [laughing and crying]
A very qualified Genshin Impact fanfic, come on, author
Can I have a stand-in?
Hey, that's not bad
Good, good, good