Genshin Impact: I Lost a Hand from the Start

Do you want to give the protagonist the entire Void Manzo [smile][smile][smile]

The content is wonderful, especially some of the details 😏. But some details are not very good, such as "chief" and so on. The protagonist's identity is the apprentice of the Immortal, and in terms of status, he is no worse than Qixing. There is nothing wrong with writing about patriotism, but don't force it into it, as it may seem a bit awkward and inconsistent. The genre of the novel is not well suited to this form. You can write more about the content [laughter] and life, so that you can feel more immersed.

Very awesome, I don't know how to describe it now, anyway nb is right

@ During my day and night, I have successfully saved 8 yuan and 8 cents. I believe that during the days when the author updates, I will save more and more. Whether the author can get it depends on his own ability 🤔🤔🤔 Come on, author

Let's do it quickly, okay?

66666666666 The author has given you five stars for another book and this book, come on!

It's so good that I'll spend my whole life on it. This is the best novel I've ever read, bar none.

Five stars is a must. Sometimes I don't even know the author is in kaiche. It's so good [I'm full]

After watching it for a while, why did I have the illusion that the heroine is Ye Lan?

Feel free to comment, but please don't attack others personally. I accept all criticism. The only thing that can break my defense is the big reviewer [Chigua]