The Impoverished

After reading some, what attracted me was the plot of the story. I always feel that your description of the environment and details are not done well enough, at least as a reader, it doesn't make me feel like I'm seeing it right before my eyes. Mr. Lao She said that if beautiful words are used inappropriately, it would not be a pity to abandon them. Telling a story well in vernacular is a great success. In general, it is much better for you to write the story and characters well than to write beautiful words that are gorgeous on the surface but not good in appearance. A subject like yours needs to be carefully thought out. You can't publish it in a hurry. You need to revise it and think about it more. Keep up the hard work, I hope to see your refined version, I will always pay attention to it, come on!

This is a novel with a rural theme. There are no good guys and bad guys here, because they are all a group of simple farmers. Some of them are officials, some are doing business, some are knowledgeable, some are illiterate, some are poor, some are rich. But they have one thing in common, that is, they all live together, full of the atmosphere of farmers. They have love and hate. Sometimes they cry out for justice, and sometimes they praise corrupt officials. In their eyes, there is no ugliness or sin, only an ordinary and optimistic life. The novel will return to normal update status from today.