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These five words are written to inspire the author, and I hope the author can continue writing! But I hope the names can be clarified in the future. Mothers like Brother Shan should not be called Sister-in-law Xu. Sister-in-law and brother are of the same generation! Also, you are called aunt before you get married, and you are still called aunt after you are married. You will not call auntie sister-in-law just because you are married. Auntie and sister-in-law are not of the same generation! It's not like you change your name to uncle or aunt after you get married, and besides, uncle, aunt, and parents are also of the same generation! (I really tried my best, but I just want to complain once I see it. It affects the reading experience too much, but the author writes, five stars, I hope the author gets better and better!)

Every chapter I write introduces how to make a dish. I feel hungry when I see it [eating melon]

The story is pretty good. I hope the relationship between the two of them is a little more pure and there won't be so many people who want to destroy it. I like to be a couple for the rest of my life, even if it's fake.

The first half of "Sending Hearts" written by Five Stars starts from the time traveler, and I feel that the plot goes too far. On the contrary, it would be better if the tone of the whole text was duller. There are indeed some ups and downs in the later plot of the plot, but it doesn't quite fit into the plot, so I felt confused while watching it [heart-wrenching]. But the writing is good and the protagonist's character is vivid~ It's just my subjective opinion, so cheers~

Overall it's pretty good to watch, but I was a little confused and couldn't understand some of the plot. So what's going on with the queen? And why did the time traveler come and what happened when he left＼(◎o◎)／! Can anyone help answer this question? Curious

"A cappella" is really hard to swallow [I'm about to cry] and I'm really sorry that the Seventh Prince is not with General Qiu, but the Seventh Prince should have a good home in the end. Finally, Chu An and Moran Jiangjiang Niangnian, I have been waiting for a long time [Grieved]

This book is very well written, but the name "brother" is too feminine. In fact, you can distinguish the names of women and "brother", otherwise it will be a bit unclear whether it is a woman or a brother. I hope the author will take a closer look and don't think I have too many things to do. [Shy][shy][send heart][send heart]

I thought it was going to be over [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

All right, I still have some regrets. It's a pity that Qing is sad [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

It's good, everything is good, but not everything is perfect, there are a lot of hidden feelings that are hard to get over, that's all

Not bad, but the ending was not handled well

The plot jumps very quickly later on, and I feel like some things were rushed to the end without being explained clearly, but I still like the subject matter.

Very good and wonderful

2023.7.11 It's okay, but the ending is not very good. It doesn't feel like the ending. It feels like it's over before it's over.

Why is the rating so low? I feel pretty good

It's still ok, recommended.

What a twisty story

It's not bad, but there are still some holes that haven't been filled in, and it's a bit confusing. Also, Qing's ending was so tragic, so sad╰(⇀‸↼)╯!

Not bad, is the score a bit low? ? ? 2024.05.09

The plot of the story is quite innovative, and the overall article can be connected, but sometimes there are some things that are not consistent. The two protagonists are quite likable.

Please write a side story about the general, please It can really be called a buried book. Maybe I personally prefer this kind of book, so I like it very much.

Regret... I'm sorry for Qing Juan, I'm sorry for the fifth prince, I'm sorry for Qiu Qiming

Okay, come on, come on

Very interesting, thank you to the author💪💪💪

Good-looking, great-looking

The ending is a bit rushed

The author writes really well.

Very nice, I like it

It's pretty good to watch, and the plot is also very good!

And to my taste, I like to watch