The Calamity of Immortality: I Forge a New Heaven for Humanity

It's quite satisfactory. When Xiuxian was not released before, there was nothing outstanding and no big poisonous points. However, when Xiuxian came out, it was a bit unexpected. Since the Xiuxian you described in this world can turn into a monster and also said that the aura is poisonous, to be honest, if you can write well, the poisonous aura will make this book successful. If you don't know how to write, the plot will be a trap after watching the plot of the poisonous aura. Your spiritual energy is poisonous. The trap is really big. Up to now, you have only described the disadvantages of cultivating immortals, and then disappeared. Why would people continue to practice since they will become monsters? Instead of reopening the path of cultivation and finding another way to survive, I hope you can write about other ways of cultivation. The whole world is so big. As long as you dare to think and write, there will be something to watch, instead of writing about the human race like this now. Idiot, the world is so big that there will always be a few favored men to change the world. Now speaking of the poisonous aura, there are people behind it, so it is the devil from outside the territory. The world may be a breeding ground. Suppose the will of the world wants to save itself and breeds a few favored men to save the world. Instead of jumping into the abyss like now, knowing that it is an abyss, the whole world is really worthless.

As long as there are no rubbish spots, I won't spray it, but you did.