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That said, I feel that there are a lot of inner dramas. I personally feel that football articles don't necessarily have to be cool, but it's really annoying for a grown man to cry all the time. I don't know if it's because you, the author, are such a person in real life, or for other reasons, but I really hate crying. I hope that the men's football team can be presented as a tough guy instead of weak. Crying and grievances can be replaced by anger and hard work. For example, I must get him back, refer to Cristiano Ronaldo. (Although I am a fan of Messi, I still approve of Ronaldo. After all, he is not a pervert like a lunatic, and it is impossible for him to win 5 Ballon d'Ors). We will shed tears only after we win. These are happy tears, which will resonate with people. Therefore, I hope the author can pay more attention to the details in this aspect. After all, football articles are mostly written by boys. Who doesn't want to be upright, strong and brave, even at a relatively young age. I hoped that I could be strong when I was in junior high school. Now I live alone without the support of my parents, and I have to support a family in the future. The same is true for the national football team. Finally, the author cheers for me.
Great writing, keep it up!
It has a few minor flaws, but it's still pretty good.
It's really good to read, and I can see that the author is thoughtful.
Nice. It's okay for the male protagonist to cry a lot, he's just showing his true feelings, and he's just a grown-up child.
Everything else is fine, but it makes me cry when I think of the protagonist being wronged.
Come on, football boy
So well written! Come on!
It has ups and downs, and it feels very good. The protagonist relies on his own efforts and persistence to play football.
That's great, but what about the protagonist's character? Emmmm~ What should I say? I love crying, self-doubt🤨 and denial. Still updated? Damn it, if you don't want to write it, just don't write it. If you write it, it's just rubbish.