In Those Years, I Lived Forever and Became Invincible Starting from the Martial Arts Gym

What a great book. Come on, author, don't cut off the roots [eating melon]

I have read Chapter 19 so far, and I really have a lot of emotions. It's a five-star movie. I don't know if it will open a harem in the future, or if it will be like many martial arts books. But reading a novel is worth it if it makes you happy in this moment. I think if I travel through a world like the protagonist, I can enjoy the fruits of my own efforts. This journey is occasionally boring but meaningful. Especially in this world background, it is really happy to have a little bit of strength in the palm of your hand. There is a system that will not let you fail. He is like a noble person or close friend of yours. He will help you and avoid detours. The happiest thing is that you work together to climb to the top. I have given up on writing. I can tolerate casually saving people just because I am moved by them. But the back part is even more obscene, and the diaosi can't stand it anymore.

The writing is quite good, but the number of words is too few. Two million words first? Ignore what some people say, your book, the author, has a good grasp of the rhythm, characters, and emotions, and the overall flow is very smooth. It may seem bland but feels very comfortable, and there is no awkward plot. In addition, there is no female protagonist who has good reviews.

I think the early game is pretty good, but in the mid game it's a little bit poisonous, meddling in other people's affairs, saving people, and participating in dynasty battles. The later writing was good, especially the death of my master, senior brother, and friend, which brought me to tears. It was very touching. It's a pity again

Although this book has an immortal golden finger, it is not written in the mainstream immortal style at all. It is closer to the traditional fairy tale. The protagonist is also affectionate and meaningful, which is quite rare in today's novels. To be honest, modern novels are like assembly line production. It is really difficult to find a different one. I hope the author can keep writing.

In chapters 56 and 57, the Holy Mother's heart suddenly overflowed. But the senses in the early stage are so good, especially the sentence "Disciple does not have to be inferior to the master" and the words before running to the master. It is the most upright view of three things I have ever seen in Tomato. At the same time, it is not lacking in caution, which is really good! Moreover, I get along very harmoniously with my master, and the conflict and persistence between the two senior brothers are particularly well written! So I kept looking down! In Chapter 59, the protagonist is lowered. For a series of tasks that can be done later by someone else or done by oneself, he is preparing to resist the damage of a monk who is preparing to kill him because of a misunderstanding. Skip these few pictures and take a look again! … I don't have the energy to read anymore. The plot before Chapter 46 is indeed worthy of five stars. Goodbye.

Not bad, much better than ordinary immortality novels, not lacking in blandness, but also magnificent, the protagonist is smart and never loses his virginity, attaches great importance to love and righteousness, and the most important thing is to always do things with a clear conscience. The sad thing is that the ending is too heartbreaking, and it ends abruptly just when it feels like the subsequent story would be more exciting... Alas!

Overall, it's pretty good. It's rare that the protagonist has his own views and ideas and always sticks to his original intention. There are still a lot of details that need to be improved, such as time, typos, the time is really confusing, and there are unnecessary routines. For example, the master Chen Changqing really didn't need to be so late. The protagonist is very powerful and did not suffer unnecessary pain to highlight it. Fortunately, there is no more later. The mentality change in the later period was done better, not abrupt and in line with the character [Like]

Immortality stories don't have to be limited to Gou. Many types of things can be added later to allow the protagonist to experience life in different identities [eating melon] [eating melon]. Just like using the so-called "adopted son" identity to save the two siblings and wishing them to ascend the throne is also a kind of life [evil laugh] [evil laugh]

Recommended, first of all, this book is a rare true story without a female protagonist. The protagonist is also rational and will not show off his cultivation while talking about sex. The plot is also good, a rare masterpiece, but the author is a bit slow in updating. Come on, author!

It seems to be very good so far, but with so many tasks and so many titles, will I forget or miss them later?

There are a little less people, but I think it should be popular. Changsheng Daozi made me vomit.

I think the writing is quite good. Since you are an immortal, there is nothing wrong with following your heart as long as you have a certain strength.

It's my type. It looks great, come on!

What will happen if a task is released (called System Dad)?

A novel about relaxing life without a female protagonist. The protagonist is affectionate and righteous, but also rational and decisive. Choose the right path while working hard and enterprising in order to protect yourself; be courageous and resourceful when a crisis approaches, and follow your heart; tenderness and forge ahead coexist on the road of seeking strength, be relaxed and relaxed, constantly gain feelings and strength, perfect yourself, and live out your life!

It's good to read, but I've been short of books lately. Otherwise, the wave of first-level skill rewards at the beginning would have almost persuaded me to quit.

It's pretty good. Maybe there are some flaws between the siblings. As for the setting, I can only say that this is a book written by the author. In his own world, it is not every book you have read. Don't impose the routine you always know on others. I am usually too lazy to comment on this book. Few people have read it. After reading it, encourage the author. Come on.

I feel like the writing is pretty good. I can't say it's not bad, nor can I say it's very good.

Although there are some minor flaws, this novel is really rare in today's tomato environment.

It's in line with my taste. Maybe most people prefer Gou Daoliu and don't like such coerced progress. It's a bit passive. It may also be that many people are reading books, so they didn't read it. Anyway, come on!

I can see this, the description is pretty good

This is the first time I have the patience to read it from beginning to end. See you in the author's next work [Sending my heartfelt wishes]

It's a bit of a short book, which is a pity, but I personally feel it's pretty good, just a bit short.

It's a pity But this book! Worth a look.

It's over, it's almost interesting. There should be more exciting and colorful worlds and stories later.

Very good, I like it very much. It's just a little lacking, it would be better if it were written more.

It's pretty good, but it's a bit sparse. There's a bit of a knife at the end. I really like fantasy genres without female protagonists [grievance]

This book is awesome and is the best longevity novel I have read recently [Adoration]

This thing is about true immortality cultivation, not mindless killing spree.