One Piece Desert King

Guard what you want to protect, and don't let those guys succeed again! —Krokdal Thank you all for liking this book. If you have any thoughts or questions during reading, you are welcome to discuss or express your opinions in the comment area. [Laughing evilly] When I read the Alabasta chapter, I felt sorry for the character of Crocodile. Especially the god-like image when he first appears, and his powerful power to control nature are both shocking. As a world-famous great pirate, Crocodile had plans and strength, but in the end his success failed due to his own character flaws and the arrival of Luffy. In my opinion, Crocodile had several opportunities to maintain the results of the original plan and then win greater victories, but unfortunately these opportunities were missed. This book will show a more ambitious and powerful Crocodile, who pays more attention to his own strength and resourcefulness than illusory ancient weapons, and becomes a true king of the desert.

It's pretty good, it has that smell, but it's too little. I wish I could have more [face covering] [face covering]

Although I don't know why 7.0, Well, how should I put it? At least 9.0 Should go up. In the One Piece novel, this is a hero, and his combat power seems to be normal. There may be two problems. One is that one person can fight 1 million civilians, but the ideological struggle of the civilians determines that they cannot fight to the death. Seeing that the strong can If you can, just run away. In fact, the combat power may only be one of them. The other is to fight Blackbeard. But since the protagonist is not the original Crocodile, and he is in the desert, he has the home field advantage, and it consumes Ace. I personally think that Blackbeard, who just got the fruit, Maybe he is at the level of a lieutenant general at most. Don't use the redhead you beat as a child to measure Blackbeard's combat power. It's impossible to defeat a general directly, and it's impossible for a quasi-general. I personally think there's nothing wrong with him. There's nothing wrong with other battles. Character creation On the other hand, the protagonist is portrayed as a very ambitious person, and the character image of Blackbeard is also relatively full. I also think that one of the good points in the article is why he doesn't ask for the so-called secret fruits from his friends. It is absolutely impossible to rely on charity from others to achieve his dream. He is a bearded man.

The writing on pirate villains is top-notch, and a score of 7.3 Is totally unjustifiable! It has multiple female protagonists, but it is not a harem for a novice novel. The logic is clear, the director does the right thing and accepts women, and does not lick the protagonist. It is definitely an excellent dark novel, worth collecting!

Why don't you give the protagonist a different hand? It's so uncomfortable to break his hand. The technology in the pirate world can definitely clone the palm of your hand

After reading it, I thought the plot was quite interesting. Compared with most system literature, the various conspiracies and intrigues are more reasonable and high-end. It doesn't have the same sense of playing house as other fan fiction. Personally, I think this book is quite high-level in all aspects. I don't know why there seem to be so few comments.

It's not enough. It's not enough.

Okay, okay, that Fried Egg Fruit is really useless, why not give it to someone else? It just so happens that Alabasta has a way to inherit the Devil Fruit.

If you keep reading, this novel is quite good.

🐊Bin is really nervous. . Whether it's for kidney or heart care, it's all of good quality. . . I like to see the mature Robin Cat panic when something unexpected happens. Sister is really suitable for forced love🤤

It's great, it created a different Lao Sha, and the conspiracy is much better than the original. I think it's very well written. I brushed it again during dinner today. Such good writing, but updates are a bit slow.

Very pure and domineering. I'm not a die-hard fan of the original drama, but the plot of "Old Sha x Robin" and "Old Sha x Weiwei" is something I didn't expect [laughs crookedly] Okay, fans should create their own characteristics [Like]

It's a rare masterpiece of a pirate fanfic, it's so delicious that you can't miss it [laughs crookedly], but it's a bit short, which is really a pity. I heard that the author is taking the postgraduate entrance examination, so I wish the author good luck in the postgraduate entrance examination and a title on the gold list! Finally, Happy New Year (੭˙ᗜ˙)੭🧧🎉🎉🎉

It's hard to imagine that an author of this caliber would write an anime fanfic of this caliber on a website of this caliber. I hope Tomato gets better and better and has more high-quality books like this. I also hope the author will work hard to achieve high quality and a higher number of updates. Come on author.

I have read more than 40 chapters so far. They are very good. They are pure "villains". There is no small head controlling the big head. The descriptions in some places make people uncomfortable (benign, after all, they are the boss behind the theft of the country). In summary, it's a good book that shouldn't appear on Tomato🍅 [laughing]

It's very good to watch, and the character's personality is well grasped, but it's a bit lacking. [Smile]

So far, it seems to be well written

It's not okay at the moment

Update once a day? Do you have the author's address? Want to urge updates [punch hard]

How to put it this way, I basically don't bother with the beginning of the new book. I mainly focus on how the writing goes at the end. So far, the writing is very good.

There's nothing poisonous about it. Many people say it's just water, but in fact it's just a different taste, because not everyone watches fandom just for fighting, it's cool! Fighting is fun! I think Machiavellianism can also be used as a feature to attract readers with specific tastes. The cool thing about this book is the strategizing. There is no need to do things in public, but as a behind-the-scenes player. In fact, I personally like it. At least I think the logic is smooth and I can have the desire to read on. This is rare

Overall, it's very good. Lao Sha and Ming Ge are both my favorite villains. I also like the protagonist's form and style. But I have a question: why can Lafayette become the protagonist's confidant?

The writing is very good, why is the rating so low? A bit outrageous.

Want to take Hancock?

The more you write, the better. The front is average, the back is very good.

Worth five stars for not being a bad ending, top ten among fics

A great pirate fanfic. Crocodile, a character who has been killed instantly in other fanfics, has also been highlighted. The protagonist's behavior is relatively dark, which may be unacceptable to many people who like naval literature and Luffy, but this is also another style.

Very well written. It highlights the game between people's hearts. Also, the writing is excellent. The dialogue between the characters also feels very comfortable. This novel is worth reading. [Praise]

The protagonist operates the world chessboard and seeks various benefits. The various characters at least have IQs. Like it. This alone is enough to support reading this book. If it is poisonous, I think it is basically nothing, but it is missing a bit.

It's very good. I'm looking forward to the next plot. I hope the author will write it faster. It's too little.