To Become an Immortal, Start with Senior Sister and Add More Points

The writing is very good, and the plot concept in the front is also quite good, but the clone in the back is a bit poisonous to me, especially using the clone to pick up girls, it feels very awkward.

How do you feel that the author gets better and better the more he writes [Thinking]

There are too many heavenly beings. If all heavenly beings like Zhang Sanfeng and Xiaoyaozi were reduced to two or three levels, there would be no sense of peace.

In the early stages of cultivation, I rode a rocket to heaven and then got stuck.

If nothing else, I just want to criticize Li Qiu Shui. I always like her.

Hang in there. There are always people who like to watch,

Although the book is bad, the ending of turning into ashes is acceptable.

I was not surprised that this book was blocked that day. I only hope that the protagonist can break through and collect all the golden elixirs quickly! ! !

Low rating, well written. A bookworm of more than ten years passed by.

Very good, why is the rating so low?

Not bad, good, good

This book is very good

This is my first time watching this version👀👀👀👀It's pretty good

It's a very interesting and refreshing article. The storyline is well described. It's not blunt or disgusting. It's quite fun.

The writing is indeed wonderful. One less star means that the power of the pig's trotters is too high and low.

This book is good. Anyway, I like it very much. I feel it is very relaxing. It's good.