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The pace of this book is very fast, which gives people a very comfortable feeling. There are not too many long explanations and more direct narration, which also leads to the plot progressing very quickly, but the advantage is that the author controls the plot very well. Although there are some inappropriate places, it is still very good overall, because he has made up for me all the difficulties in Harry Potter, which makes me feel very happy. When I first read the original novel, I was devastated. Now I finally see a novel that can make up for all the difficulties. I am really happy. The final ending is really heartwarming.

I really like this book, just like what Silin said at the end of the war, not a single thing is missing. Dumbledore will no longer fall to his death from the tower, Snape will no longer die in the Shrieking Shack amidst everyone's disdain, and the Weasley twins will no longer be separated from each other. It is a true victory. This is probably the best ending among HP fans I have ever seen. (Although the emotional line is a bit far-fetched)

Although I have read many Harry Potter fanfics, this one is the best I have seen. Moreover, the author only used thirty-two chapters to write to my heart.

It's very interesting. The timeline is a bit fast, but it's really interesting. I've never read the original novel, and I've always known them in the fanfic. When the author wrote about the sacrifices of the war in the original novel, it was really sad. It's the only novel I've read in the fanfic that touched me deeply.

Although this article is very short, the story is exciting and everyone has a good ending. The author used just dozens of chapters to make up for the regrets of Hogwarts. I really hope that the author can write more articles.

The story is perfect, there is no confusion anymore...

There are too many regrets in the victory in the movie. It is a victory of death and defeat. In this book, it is indeed a perfect victory. Everyone has the most perfect ending. It is a very relaxing short article.

I really like this book. It is concise and clear. The plot is not draggy. There is no misunderstanding between the protagonists. The difficulties in the original text are also eliminated. The heroine is very strong. The plot is short, but very exciting. I hope the author writes more articles like this. It is really great.

Anyway, it is very well written in all aspects, and the author's writing style is very good. In short, it makes up for all the regrets in the entire Harry Potter book, as well as the note in the small box that Slim found near the end. It was mentioned once, but it appeared again later. I don't know how to put it, but it feels very moderate.

Their story is wonderful, realistic and illusory, a very unique fusion that is both inconsistent and wonderful. Moreover, the story of the heroine and George is also okay. However, the author writes that the two of them spend very little time alone together, and there are very few sweet moments. I hope he can write more in the next book.

This book is really difficult for me to describe accurately in one word. Everyone has his own happy destination. The description of Draco running toward the light made me cry. Thank you very much to the author [sending my heart][sending my heart]

To be honest, the article is very short, but I especially like [adoration][adoration] Come on!

This is the most perfect ending of any HP article I have ever read. It really makes up for a lot of regrets. In the end, "to our most perfect victory."

This book is a godsend, okay~ Although the article is relatively short, it is concise and clear, and the author's writing style is also good. After the war, everyone ended well, except Voldemort. I just love itヽ(爱´∀'爱)ノ

I really like the ending of this article. It is not a death-defying victory like in the original work, but the most perfect victory, with no one dying and no one leaving. A perfect HE ending.

Why is the score so low! It's really beautiful! I saw the tenacity and unchanging perseverance from the heroine. She was able to persevere. It was really amazing. Everyone had a good ending.

I was not optimistic about this novel by the author at first. I prefer the heroine of Snake Yard and Seid in Harry Potter fan fiction, but after reading this novel, I think this novel is very good.

Let's just say it's true, I'm very happy. This book really made up for a lot of my regrets. Cedric the Dragon and Fred didn't die, I'm really happy

It's like a fairy tale, but it makes up for the regrets of all Ham fans.

Wow wow wow, although the author has omitted a lot of content, I really like the ending [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

This book is very good, I like it very much [adoration][adoration][adoration]

The plot flows smoothly. All members of the Order of the Phoenix are alive, and only Voldemort is dead.

I dare say this is the shortest but best-written book I have ever read.

I have to say, this is the best Harry Potter fanfic I have ever seen [Sending my heart to you]

This is the best fanfic I've ever read so far

To be honest, this book is really well written. How good is it? It's like after I read the physical book, I have been sighing, is their story really over? This book restored my feelings at the time, that is, there was a small part in the middle, almost two fragments. I felt a little sad, but I was not particularly sad, but at the end I cried for some reason, and finally gave the author a thumbs up! Compare your heart❤

The golden eyes flash, the spirit of victory; under the sun, there is the joy of victory. At the end, everyone is intact and laughing. The author's writing style is very good, but the length is too short. I look forward to the author's next masterpiece.

The author has greatly explained what it means to be short and concise. This is really a perfect victory. Although there are loopholes in some details, it doesn't matter. It is a work that fulfills the dream, fulfills the dream of sitting, and also fulfills the dream of the readers. Except for the protagonist who suffered a lot of heartache, there are no misunderstandings, no sacrifices, no uneasy intentions, and everyone is very happy.

This book is really beautiful and fills all the gaps. [Crying][Crying][Crying] Let everyone have a new ending

The pace of the book is very fast, there are no long chapters, and it is suitable for impatient friends. The heroine is not a virgin, and the only shortcoming is that there are few emotional lines. Maybe it's because the victory was defeated by the original work, but when I saw the victory, I wanted to cry [crying]