Transmigrate to JOJO: From the Start, a Bug Arrow Pierces My Heart

Although some places are not very well set up, it is indeed a very good-looking JO book. The main disadvantages are the protagonist's stand-in, high panel, and ridiculously strong abilities. It would be better to have a younger brother panel with ancestral abilities or a more normal panel. The two stand-ins have a lot of A's... It just looks like... And the "snake" is the one who is dating the protagonist. I don't like it very much. The writing of that part is not good, and there is nothing else. I also set up a new stand-in myself, mainly because I thought about it in other novels. Now I forgot about the panel and so on, so I can only think about it once... Stand-in - Atlantis force e speed e Range a Precision c durable a growth b The ability is to summon blue bubbles, which can parasitize on other items, copy and absorb the properties of the item (such as the hardness of iron, the high temperature of fire) and hatch a swarm of fish. The fish swarm attacks the enemy in a surrounding posture. After each fish is sacrificed, the remaining fish will be strengthened evenly, and it can even combine all the power of the fish swarm into one and turn into a whale. Or a shark (it will automatically turn into a whale when the stand-in is in a good mood, and a shark when it is in a bad mood). It has grown (the stand-in will become stronger later, but not yet (subdivided emotions can turn into more large or powerful fish)). Bubbles are plural. When the bubble is broken in this form, the body will be injured. After hatching into a school of fish, it will become a long-distance operation type and will not be injured. The stand-in is a little girl who looks to be only 15 years old. She has silver hair and gray eyes (although silver hair is often called white hair, but this one is indeed silver gray). She is not in good health and cannot be injured. Once there is a slight wound, it keeps bleeding and cannot be healed. She must go to the hospital for treatment. She also has a heart disease and her body cannot feel pain.

I personally like this kind of system-like novel very much, because it is difficult to grasp the relationship between the system and the protagonist in system novels. It always makes people feel that the protagonist is the puppet of the system. It is good to directly downplay the system, because it will make you forget that it is a system novel. Most of the system novels are purely brainless and invincible. If you read too much, you will naturally feel bored. The protagonist's ability is neither weak nor strong. If it is too strong, it will make people feel boring. If it is too weak, it will suddenly feel aggrieved (unpleasant). The author has a good control over this aspect. For me personally, I have not felt bored in terms of combat and abilities. There is also the relationship between the fandom and the original work. The fanfic will definitely not deviate from the original work, but if you follow the original work completely and do not grasp the timing of the protagonist's insertion, you will feel very boring. After reading this book, I personally feel that the protagonist's insertion is very good, and the personal plot of the protagonist does not deviate from the scope of the fanfic, but also has the randomness of the original novel. I have no idea to recommend, come on, author!

A slightly interesting collection of jojo fanfics. The main character basically just follows the plot, and a lot of original characters and plots are interspersed during the process. Coupled with the original plot that has been slightly changed, this book can be regarded as a good original fanfic. The writing style, to put it simply, is okay. The descriptions are all in place, and the author's ideas about certain characters are also added. The characters' various personalities and classic actions and words are clearly described in the article. I must be very familiar with JOJO. The plot in the article can be said to be very interesting. It is based on the original work, with a certain degree of rewriting and influence. It is interspersed with original plots and characters, as well as the existence of stand-ins. The atmosphere is really easy to bring in, and the conflicts between the new characters and the plot are basically not very big. It feels very natural, which is very good. Let's set it up. The awakened double avatar at the beginning is a bit far-fetched... There are not many other bugs, and they are basically reasonable. The avatar's copying and deprivation abilities are used in the front, and the bugs are described later. The two abilities can be used on one person at the same time. Well, overall this book is very good. The writing is stable and the understanding of JOJO is very deep. The plot is also very smooth. It does not blindly follow the original plot, but also has its own original plot. The settings in the text are also very precise. The protagonist's stand-in was also carefully considered and identified by the author. It looks really good, five stars for high quality.

The writing is very good, and there is no one in the protagonist team except the protagonist. I feel that I like this kind of lineup. If I can continue writing, I will give five stars every time. It is really good.

This is the best JOJO article I have read. The plot is lively and interesting, especially the fights and character dialogues are immersive. The adapted plot is also very beautiful [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

I like Jojo very much, the writing is great, but I feel that the author's innovative stand abilities are too single, which makes me feel like reading an urban supernatural novel. Each stand ability in Jojo is very vivid and has different meanings for each ability owner. Each enemy can use the stand flexibly and attack unexpectedly. This is one of the reasons why I love Jojo [Blow kiss]

This book is great. The protagonist is invincible but not too invincible (probably!). Copying someone else's avatar is something every JOJO fan would want to do. Come on, author (ง•̀_•́)งDon't stop updating

These are some of the best Jojo novels I have read. Some books are so beautiful, why aren't there any? Not many people watch it, and there are also few people who rate it.

It's a rare good book. The author is better than Araki in writing stand-ins, but there is no passion in the battle, and there is no setting situation. The logic is basically reasonable. It beats 99% of Tomato authors. There are other advantages that I won't go into detail. All in all, it's pretty good!

Hey, author, what I see now is that it has not been updated for 15 days, and it may not be updated in the future. However, the author has already unlocked the perfect ending and has no regrets. This book is very good (´∀｀*), and it can be regarded as a relatively high-quality fanfic on Tomato. The author I guess there is no ending, so I thought about it and created an ending of my own. "At the end of the story, he witnessed the birth of the Golden Requiem and the endless death of his boss. He smiled. He decided not to wander anymore and run the gang with him. "Meow" "What's wrong? Hungry again? "Joker, what do you think of him?" I, the clown, quickly added some cat food to Lucky. He looked at the people who had realized their dreams and looked back at their past experiences. He felt no guilt. "The sixth part will not appear, just in case the priest is dead. It's a pity." Ah, I can't witness Parts 7, 8 and 9. Fortunately, I have you with me. Lucky, "Meow~", I watched the sunset and ushered in my own ending. Under the shining of the sunset, the cat cafe in the corner, although inconspicuous, was also shining brightly." My hair! Be thicker! Finally updated! Master Tao, I am done! I saw endless life! ! ! Thank you my Lord! Praise my Lord! The author is not dead! ! Updated! !