Traveling Through JOJO: the Insect Arrow Penetrates the Heart at the Beginning

Although some places are not very well set up, it is indeed a very good-looking JO book. The main disadvantages are the protagonist's stand-in, high panel, and ridiculously strong abilities. It would be better to have a younger brother panel with ancestral abilities or a more normal panel. The two stand-ins have a lot of A's... It just looks like... And the "snake" is the one who is dating the protagonist. I don't like it very much. The writing of that part is not good, and there is nothing else. I also set up a new stand-in myself, mainly because I thought about it in other novels. Now I forgot about the panel and so on, so I can only think about it once... Stand-in - Atlantis force e speed e Range a Precision c durable a growth b The ability is to summon blue bubbles, which can parasitize on other items, copy and absorb the properties of the item (such as the hardness of iron, the high temperature of fire) and hatch a swarm of fish. The fish swarm attacks the enemy in a surrounding posture. After each fish is sacrificed, the remaining fish will be strengthened evenly, and it can even combine all the power of the fish swarm into one and turn into a whale. Or a shark (it will automatically turn into a whale when the stand-in is in a good mood, and a shark when it is in a bad mood). It has grown (the stand-in will become stronger later, but not yet (subdivided emotions can turn into more large or powerful fish)). Bubbles are plural. When the bubble is broken in this form, the body will be injured. After hatching into a school of fish, it will become a long-distance operation type and will not be injured. The stand-in is a little girl who looks to be only 15 years old. She has silver hair and gray eyes (although silver hair is often called white hair, but this one is indeed silver gray). She is not in good health and cannot be injured. Once there is a slight wound, it keeps bleeding and cannot be healed. She must go to the hospital for treatment. She also has a heart disease and her body cannot feel pain.

I personally like this kind of system-like novel very much, because it is difficult to grasp the relationship between the system and the protagonist in system novels. It always makes people feel that the protagonist is the puppet of the system. It is good to directly downplay the system, because it will make you forget that it is a system novel. Most of the system novels are purely brainless and invincible. If you read too much, you will naturally feel bored. The protagonist's ability is neither weak nor strong. If it is too strong, it will make people feel boring. If it is too weak, it will suddenly feel aggrieved (unpleasant). The author has a good control over this aspect. For me personally, I have not felt bored in terms of combat and abilities. There is also the relationship between the fandom and the original work. The fanfic will definitely not deviate from the original work, but if you follow the original work completely and do not grasp the timing of the protagonist's insertion, you will feel very boring. After reading this book, I personally feel that the protagonist's insertion is very good, and the personal plot of the protagonist does not deviate from the scope of the fanfic, but also has the randomness of the original novel. I have no idea to recommend, come on, author!

A slightly interesting collection of jojo fanfics. The main character basically just follows the plot, and a lot of original characters and plots are interspersed during the process. Coupled with the original plot that has been slightly changed, this book can be regarded as a good original fanfic. The writing style, to put it simply, is okay. The descriptions are all in place, and the author's ideas about certain characters are also added. The characters' various personalities and classic actions and words are clearly described in the article. I must be very familiar with JOJO. The plot in the article can be said to be very interesting. It is based on the original work, with a certain degree of rewriting and influence. It is interspersed with original plots and characters, as well as the existence of stand-ins. The atmosphere is really easy to bring in, and the conflicts between the new characters and the plot are basically not very big. It feels very natural, which is very good. Let's set it up. The awakened double avatar at the beginning is a bit far-fetched... There are not many other bugs, and they are basically reasonable. The avatar's copying and deprivation abilities are used in the front, and the bugs are described later. The two abilities can be used on one person at the same time. Well, overall this book is very good. The writing is stable and the understanding of JOJO is very deep. The plot is also very smooth. It does not blindly follow the original plot, but also has its own original plot. The settings in the text are also very precise. The protagonist's stand-in was also carefully considered and identified by the author. It looks really good, five stars for high quality.

The writing is very good, and there is no one in the protagonist team except the protagonist. I feel that I like this kind of lineup. If I can continue writing, I will give five stars every time. It is really good.

This is the best JOJO article I have read. The plot is lively and interesting, especially the fights and character dialogues are immersive. The adapted plot is also very beautiful [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

I like Jojo very much, the writing is great, but I feel that the author's innovative stand abilities are too single, which makes me feel like reading an urban supernatural novel. Each stand ability in Jojo is very vivid and has different meanings for each ability owner. Each enemy can use the stand flexibly and attack unexpectedly. This is one of the reasons why I love Jojo [Blow kiss]

This book is great. The protagonist is invincible but not too invincible (probably!). Copying someone else's avatar is something every JOJO fan would want to do. Come on, author (ง•̀_•́)งDon't stop updating

These are some of the best Jojo novels I have read. Some books are so beautiful, why aren't there any? Not many people watch it, and there are also few people who rate it.

It's a rare good book. The author is better than Araki in writing stand-ins, but there is no passion in the battle, and there is no setting situation. The logic is basically reasonable. It beats 99% of Tomato authors. There are other advantages that I won't go into detail. All in all, it's pretty good!

Hey, author, what I see now is that it has not been updated for 15 days, and it may not be updated in the future. However, the author has already unlocked the perfect ending and has no regrets. This book is very good (´∀｀*), and it can be regarded as a relatively high-quality fanfic on Tomato. The author I guess there is no ending, so I thought about it and created an ending of my own. "At the end of the story, he witnessed the birth of the Golden Requiem and the endless death of his boss. He smiled. He decided not to wander anymore and run the gang with him. "Meow" "What's wrong? Hungry again? "Joker, what do you think of him?" I, the clown, quickly added some cat food to Lucky. He looked at the people who had realized their dreams and looked back at their past experiences. He felt no guilt. "The sixth part will not appear, just in case the priest is dead. It's a pity." Ah, I can't witness Parts 7, 8 and 9. Fortunately, I have you with me. Lucky, "Meow~", I watched the sunset and ushered in my own ending. Under the shining of the sunset, the cat cafe in the corner, although inconspicuous, was also shining brightly." My hair! Be thicker! Finally updated! Master Tao, I am done! I saw endless life! ! ! Thank you my Lord! Praise my Lord! The author is not dead! ! Updated! !

It's very interesting. I hope I can keep writing and don't want to be a eunuch.

Regarding this novel, I just want to say that it is well written, and the author's writing style is also good in describing the personality charm of those people, [shy] [shy] But for someone like me who has never read Jojo [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh] this novel still has a lot of poisonous points, [admiration] [admiration] After all, I also learned about it on Kuaishou, [laughing] [laughing] so I clicked on this novel with a little interest. So in general, this novel has both advantages and disadvantages [make a face]. For me, who knows a little bit about Jojo, [note] [note], this novel is okay, but for those netizens who know Jojo very [like] [like], it is indeed a rare novel [Thinking]

This is the first jojo fanfic I've read The protagonist's stand-in name is quite nice (Song of Life and Death/Heaven and Hell) The beginning of the story is good (traveling to Dio's bunker and starting as a captured "minor character"). Since this is my first contact with Jojo fandom, I still can't accept the plot of starting with Dio/Diavolo's soul/body/second personality [face covering]. I like to watch this kind of plot where the protagonist gradually comes out of his own style. The content of the story is very regular and interesting, and the content of the words, things, and thoughts that the characters say, do, and think are very realistic. The author's metaphors are very wonderful, very flavorful, and very comfortable to watch. The only drawback is that the update is a bit slow, and the story of annihilating snakes is too long to be honest. In fact, it can be shortened to 15 chapters. Haha [face covering] I don't dare to watch the first battle of the small plane. I'll give it a month or two and then watch it. Finally, I would like to ask if there are any other fan jojo novels that you recommend? Write a follow-up review and check your reading time [laughing evilly] By the way, I'm going to find time to read it carefully. The author's writing is really great. What's even more touching is that I still insist on updating. Every now and then, I update one, two or three new chapters. I love this author to death [laughing evilly] [like]

This Jiujiu series is particularly good-looking, with 7 points focusing on daily life and 3 points focusing on combat. Moreover, the protagonist reacts like a normal person, and all the substitutes added are very natural. Moreover, the system is not too strong or too weak in terms of auxiliary effects. The character of the protagonist is also somewhat different from the cold and cold character of most protagonists nowadays. It is only the score that limits him. After all, JoJo, who can write more than 2 million words, is definitely not simple at all. He didn't follow the protagonist group weakly, nor did he talk about how to seize the body or travel through Dior like others. All in all, this is a very good novel, but the score limits his upper limit. Sorry, I may not be able to read your novel anymore, but I still like this five-star novel very much. The character description is very detailed and the actions are normal, so I will stop for a while.

It is a very common book and is in line with JOJO's world view. The content is very exciting and touching, but I don't know if after writing Stone Sea, the protagonist will be able to live through the card of Puma Noro's world.

After reading it for so long, I realized that I have no comments👀 The original characters + stand-ins are eye-catching for viewers. It doesn't disrupt the balance too much (?) But also enriches the article. Although it was said that it was about fulfilling a dream and making up for regrets, Dio was a bit delayed and even persuaded some people to quit. The protagonist has a gentle personality and is a cat lover who doesn't poke any needles. But does the author still remember that the protagonist put away Dio's soul and planned to give it to Giorno as a father in five movies? Hhh Why does it show that I have only read Chapter 44 when I have not skipped a chapter and have been following the latest chapter...🍅This system is amazing

This book is well written, the plot is lively and interesting, and there are many original substitutes. It is worth reading.

Hui Chang Hao Ni has a reasonable plot and a slightly slow pace. Based on the original work, there are some magical plots (often) from time to time (substitutes will attract each other). The story unfolds in a very similar way to the original work. It is like a spin-off based on the original plot. It is very interesting. It is recommended that new friends finish it in one go, because the early stage of this work is a bit useless and will make people less interested. However, in the later stage, the continuity and processing of the plot are very good. The protagonist's strength is also a kind of hiding: "He has strong strength, but it is better to hide it in order not to fall over." It's a bit cool, but not much. Only the plot is very novel and attractive [please update][please update]

Tomato has a good article, there are many original avatars, and the intelligence warfare aspect is pretty good. However, I still think that the protagonist's avatar is a bit too open. It's like, in order to be able to successfully deal with all the villains that have been created, I feel that I can't deal with just one ability alone, so I made a avatar that can copy other people's avatars. In addition, in order to avoid betrayal, I directly created the surrender ability. In fact, it is because the protagonist is not charming enough or the ability to control people is not good enough. . In this way, the protagonist is safer, but is there less trouble?

I think this is the best Jo book. The author writes it very well. The causes and consequences, the order of events, and the characters are all top-notch. I tipped 14 yuan, hope to update soon [send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's very interesting. It adds a lot of new characters and substitutes to the original work. It's not like other fanfics, which just write the same plot, but the substitutes are a bit cliche. In summary, this is a good fanfic. What I'm saying is that the protagonist's double is a bit cliche.

This book is very good to read, the combat power setting is very suitable, and the story is also very exciting. Although it is a little bit toxic occasionally, but overall, it is a very good fan novel, and it is a dream come true regardless of the protagonist group. This is a good book with a vivid plot and exciting content. The more I read, the more I want to read and I can't stop. I hope the author will keep writing and I have recommended it to my friends [Like]

To be honest, this novel is a good novel except that the protagonist has always been loose and entered retirement life early, and the bloodline of the ultimate life form has a very low sense of existence and no sense of strength.

The content closely follows the theme, respecting the original work while adding its own style. A better ending can be obtained without destroying the timeline. A new organization is added to the original world view, which can avoid untopic things in the original text. The stand-in setting is also very good. Once the style of the original work is added, it also adds its own style. Hope it doesn't stop updating! ! ! That's cool! !

The content is interesting and will not get stuck. New ideas and world views are naturally combined, and the emotions are rich. I just hope that more updates can be arranged for the sixth season of Stone Sea.

Great, very exciting. Just use the name of the stand-in. Isn't it a bit perfunctory?

It's really good. The most important thing is that the author will correct the typos!

Very nice novel, it made my tie twirl

A very good book. I just started reading the extras. The updates are too slow. I hope to write about Sea of ​​Stones.

So interesting! Simply the eyes of heaven! Hurry up, I want to watch the sixth part to save Jotaro!