The Game Is Coming: I Have Become a Girl and Awakened My Double S Talent

Very good, keep working hard

It turns out that you can still write book reviews for yourself? In fact, I am really flattered that I can get recognition and love from so many people when I write a novel from scratch. Of course there are criticisms, and I can accept them with an open mind. I know that [the author writes a book for the first time] it's not because some parts of my writing are bad and there are obvious mistakes. I hope that my first book will get better and better with your reminders and guidance until the story is finished. I give myself four stars because I know I still have many shortcomings. I have room for improvement I hope that when I write hundreds of thousands of words or one million words, I will finish it I can recognize myself. Change it to five stars Witness again thank you again

The writing is very good, but I can only give it four stars at the moment. It's not because there is any problem, it's mainly because I'm afraid I won't be able to remember the QAQ for each skill at level one. Also, update! The stocking up is almost over QAQ

It's well written, keep up the good work, but I'm a little curious about one thing: which talent effect allows the protagonist to skip levels and wear equipment? I don't think I saw it.

Come, the author, read with me my solemn oath: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherish time like gold, be unyielding, strive hard, advocate first-class, and strive to create brilliance It looks okay, but there are some words that you don't know what they mean if you don't look carefully.

It's a good online game article. The plot is natural and smooth, without any messy or pretentious plot. It's very comfortable to read. I highly recommend it.

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It looks good. I hope it will be updated to more than two or three hundred chapters. I hope it won't stop updating.

This book is pretty good ^ω^ Although it's not perfect, it's not bad. I don't understand why the rating is so low ⊙ω⊙ Author, come on, don't rush the ending (ง•̀_•́)ง. At the current level of 30, I think there is still a lot to write in the future. Those who love reading will not leave, and those who can't stand it will not be able to stay even if they want to. Come on ^ω^

First of all, let me explain it to the author. The equipment level should be the level of that piece of equipment. Players do not need to reach that level to wear it. Secondly, when Aotian appeared, I thought he was a brainless villain. I even commented on it, haha. Finally, come on, author, come on! [Pouts]

The plot is very reasonable and is a masterpiece among online games. The explanation and design of talents and data are very good, and they are not eager to realize the game world like others, but proceed step by step. I like it very much.

It's not bad, but it's probably the author's first time or he hasn't written a novel for a long time. There are a lot of fluent and grammatical errors that are common among newcomers. It would be nice to revise them [Like][Chigua]

It's pretty good now, and the content is okay, but if the author added the person I wrote about, I would like it more [shy][shy]

The book is very good, I am very satisfied, but it is not enough to read. Build a building and let me tell you a bedtime story. Once upon a time there was a quail Other quails lay eggs in the morning only it's in the afternoon So others call it late quail eggs

I have read Chapter 294. The author has stopped updating for 11 days, and I don't know if there will be more updates. The data processing in this novel is quite realistic, but there are not many epic-level equipment with skills, and the protagonist Goldfinger is a bit novel. There are also a lot of foreshadowings in the online game world, waiting to be unveiled. Personally, I think it looks okay, but the protagonist's schedule is a bit suffocating and he is always in a tight state. Everything else is fine.

The writing is very good, but can the protagonist gain abilities quickly in reality?

Come on, well written

Looks good, not toxic at the moment

Very nice, I like it

Well, I think it's pretty good

Personally I think it's okay.

I hope to change the character of the protagonist and improve my IQ

I want to praise a lot of rainbow farts... Well, that's it.

Very good, keep up the good work, author.

Very nice, I really like this kind of book!

Come on, author! Lin Li, wife, come on! ! ! And... I sincerely wish the author's favorite v graduation [cool]

It feels good, it suits my taste When will there be a magic that resists the rogue skills of those bosses? Just a murloc leader of over 20 levels can cast infinite silence. Wouldn't the higher-level bosses behind have a lot of rogue skills? For example, a skill that rebounds negative buffs received over a period of time?

It looks great, good luck to the author!

Still pretty

Awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Boss! ! ! ! ! Worship! ! ! Awesome! ! ! !