Douluo************

Wang Po sells melons [blowing kiss]

Do more, do more. The one next door does three jobs a day.

If your book had been published some time ago, the reviews might have been better, but now it goes without saying that Tang San and Grandmaster's reviews are good. Well, I suggest you write another book in the same system as this one. If you don't start with Tang San, of course you can choose to start your own business or cooperate with Wuhun Palace. The reason for the suggestion is that for me, your Naruto and Douluo collaboration is the best I have ever seen, because I haven't read many others, and I really want to see you write a book like this. This is just a suggestion. I'm not a sailor, please stop complaining [I'm about to cry]

This book is not bad

The writing is good, the plot is not draggy, and the writing is very good. But can this update be faster? And those trolls, how much did you tip for this book? I gave it 2 stars and 1 star at first, and then started to come up with my own opinions. You know that there are so many settings that don't suit you, so you can open a book by yourself and write whatever you want.

Update soon, please, please, please, please, please, please, please.

The opening settings are all very good, but I didn't expect the apprenticeship later on. I really didn't expect that an adult time traveler with a systematic twin martial soul would kneel down and worship Yu Xiaogang as his master. Because you mentioned before that you know the plot, then you should know that Yu Xiaogang has nothing to teach you. If you are afraid of being banned, I think it is okay to maintain a certain relationship without being an enemy. There is no need for such a big golden finger to kneel down and worship as a disciple. The setting is 4 points.

It would be perfect if I didn't steal Xiao Wu

Come on, author, I'm very optimistic about you.

Very well written. By the way, those who don't like to worship the master can leave.

Three chapters a day, don't let me look down on you. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Not bad, cheers for the author

Fortunately, sincerely, it's not enough!

The author could write more words, thank you! Come on! Aoligai. [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Like][Like]

Overall, this is a great book! Come on! 😋😋

Personally I think it's good, but it's too short. I wonder if there will be a harem in the future, can you give me some spoilers?

The writing is pretty good, but it's too short. The author needs to work harder on writing.

Good writing, cheers author

I don't know what to say

Calm down and be secretly awesome

Good looking, highly recommended

It's very good, very nice. I'll give it a gift when the time comes.

Personally, I feel pretty good. It looks pretty.