Forbidden Game: My Lucky Star Propelled Me to the Summit

It seems to be very good so far. I don't see any bad points. The writing is also very good. It is still written with intention. These points are enough for five stars. I also have some personal opinions. I feel that your book borrowed part of the model of Samsara Paradise but made your own innovation in the world view. This shows that you don't really want to use this book as a derivative or sub-genre of the Samsara Paradise book. In that case, it is important to have the highlights of this book that are different from that one and belong only to you. For example, what are the highlights of the Samsara Paradise book? I personally think that firstly, the numerical values of various equipment and plot characters are numerous and precise, and many of the previous settings will not be forgotten in the future. Secondly, the author has worked hard on fighting, and the fighting plot will not be unpleasant to readers even if it is a long time. Thirdly, the world view and plot of the book are relatively grand, because this type of novel, especially the one in Samsara Paradise, basically has no points that can be called poisonous. So as long as the writing is not stretched and there are some bright spots to make the book more enjoyable, there will be no shortage of readers. And that book basically did the best it could on the points mentioned above, so the fan base of that book is not small. As for this book, for example, as I said above, I personally think that in this book you can avoid some of the impressive points of that book, such as the diversity, complexity and precision of the data, and use the effort spent on it in other places to make that place the highlight of your book. Of course, this is just a personal opinion. Your work also requires you to think about how to write it better. If you keep writing, your writing style and ideas will improve, and you may not be able to catch up with or rival that book in the future. Come on (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's not bad, but the protagonist's talents and abilities still feel a bit uninteresting. He doesn't have direct access to superpowers or skills.

After looking at it for a while, it might not be bad.

You can do it.

Then you are busy first, young sister Jinshi, the Mining Bureau, okay

Come on, come on. The author writes very well.

It's not just a cool novel, it also has some thoughts and a passionate Japanese comic feel.

The writing is very good. You can tell that you are a newbie. Your writing skills need to be improved. The plot and ideas are quite good.

Worth seeing so to speak

As far as I can see, the author composition is extremely complex. I currently find that there are JOJO, Blade Ya, and Warhammer.