[She Pursues Him + Soft, Needy, Spicy Little Trouble-Maker vs. A Cool, Refined Young Nobleman with a Hidden Dark Side + Sweet Flirting and a Little Angst + A Mad, Ruthless, Possessive Villain]
Li Qingyun's eyes and brows curved with a tender smile. Her soft, jade-white hand traced his Adam's apple, laced with an ambiguous intimacy, as she puckered her lips and tried to move closer.
"Princess, please mind your propriety." He lowered his eyes, but not away from her. The corner of his mouth twitched, and his throat tightened with burning intensity.
Li Qingyun blinked, gazing at him with watery, tender eyes. She pouted. "What propriety? You're my consort, after all."
He looked up and caught her hand, then leaned over her. A deep smile played at the corner of his brow as he whispered in her ear, "Make sure you remember that, Princess."
I like the setting, and I also like the writing, but I feel like there's a lot missing in the middle and it doesn't feel right. Is this really an article written when I was in junior high school? It's really good. 🥺 Also, can I modify it and add more to it and publish it again? Woo woo woo