A New Talent Every Ten Days

It should be difficult to write later unless I create a new picture

In fact, the writing is not bad, the writing style is quite good, but there are too many dialogues and few descriptions of characters and scenes, which results in a poor sense of immersion. It's a pity to end it hastily. If you polish it carefully, it should be a good novel.

I hope it can be faster. If we keep this speed, it will be fine. I have seen a book not updated for three days.

The concept is okay, but it's too short. I'm looking forward to the next one.

But the attributes are very strong, but I am impatient. I must at least take down the princess and the Immortal Dynasty.

Although his talent is a bit unreliable, he is experienced and writes well.