Star River Mecha Master
星河机甲师
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.4M Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Fantasy High-Concept
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
589Chapters
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1Listens
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The plot at the beginning is poor. There is actually a killer organization in the realm of qi training. Everyone knows about it, and it has not been destroyed by anyone. I sold something to a shop I had known for several years, and the shop owner hired someone to kill me and steal the treasure. If the world is such a mess, can a 13-year-old kid still open a store for several years without any trouble? There is no such thing as a random killer and robber protagonist. And the one who activated the system was also speechless. His father didn't use it? It's okay if you want to make something new, but you have to be a little more rigorous. Either you start in a harmonious world and the protagonist opens a store normally. Or it's a chaotic world with a low-key development of the protagonist. Isn't it ridiculous that a kid with no background and no ability opens a store in a chaotic world? Speechless…
I personally don't like it very much. It's similar to a world of cultivation, but with high technology. It feels a bit inconsistent.