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Should the author consider doing more @ [I'm about to cry], I chase you every day, for fear that you will run away one day, I will never keep books, please do more and give more gifts [laughing]

Who is the heroine? Xiao Ai? Hope it is

It's pretty cool, come on!

Author, who are you? The Guinness World Record is typing 807 letters per minute. Calculating that each Chinese character requires six letters, you can type about 134 letters per minute. Since you are not a Guinness World Record holder, let's calculate it as 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep standard is eight hours, and you spend about two hours eating every day, and another 40 minutes going to the toilet. 20 Minutes to wash up, exercise, two hours to trigger inspiration, and then remove one hour of free time, you should have nine hours to type, and type approximately 435,780 words. Calculated based on at least 2,000 words per chapter, you can update 217 chapters every day, but how come you only have so little content every day? Honestly, are you deducting it? Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like you???? [Angry] [angry]

Too little, author, please stop running away, please [crazy][crazy][crazy]

Why are you such a useless ninja?

Come on, come on, Ai Jiang and the protagonist don't have much daily life.

It's very interesting and the ideas are very novel, but there are too few of them at the moment. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you! 😄😄😄

During the war, even the children from the ninja school can go to the battlefield. The strength of these genin is too weak. It should be very easy for the genin to kill a group of ordinary people. Their speed and reflexes are not what ordinary people can keep up with.

It's not enough. I will be sent to Wudang Mountain. I will never be able to read your novels again. . .

I've almost finished watching it, but I haven't seen anything about ninjas. Apart from the clone technique and the body stick, even the transformation technique can be fake. I haven't used it once [smile][smile]

The writing is good, and the setting is also very good. I was disgusted by the system text, especially the system that constantly refreshes the sense of existence. It has more scenes than the protagonist, which especially affects the continuity of the plot. However, the system in this article is basically invisible, which is still very good.

What can I say, this book is pretty good. It's just that the Naruto element is a bit lacking and doesn't appear often.

It's okay. I hope it gets better and better in the future [blowing kiss] It's still too early to tell, I hope it can be more detailed.

Come on, author, I hope it won't stop

Good luck to the author, the writing is very good. As long as you don't give up, you will be very good.

The setting is good, but the writing style needs to be improved. 5 Stars for encouragement!

The writing is very good, which is rare among Tomato fans. As long as it doesn't end badly, it will definitely get a high score [Like]

Come on, come on, come on

It looks like I'm in a lot of trouble

If you are the first one to see this type of writing, no matter how good the writing style is, please give me five stars and a tip to support the new type of online writing. But I would like to make some personal suggestions here. First, you don't need to write a second time travel. You can travel to Conan and give the Hokage system to avoid the black account problem. Second, in terms of age, the reader can feel more immersed in the age of around twenty years old (i. E. College student age, many plot characters in Conan are from Toto University). Third, there is no need to deliberately weaken Naruto's combat power, which will make Naruto fans unhappy. You can limit the protagonist's ability acquisition. For example, the protagonist only has simple B-level and C-level ninjutsu, and Susana Daibutsu in Conan is very interesting.

The idea is great, but the writing and logic are not very good. Keep up the good work.

This book can be said to be the only one of its kind. It's very interesting. I hope I'll work hard to update chapters 1 and 2 every day.

This plot is good! Why is the score so low? (Is it because the update is slow?)

It's very interesting. It's not like other Conan fan fiction that makes Ai and others a sucker for them. Why did he become a eunuch so suddenly?

The protagonist opens the Sharingan!

Not bad, come on = one hundred chapters

It's too little. If you order more, I'll give you a five-star rating.

It looks good [like] but I don't know why the rating is so low

It's my life that limits my thinking Naruto and Conan 666