I Love You, But Only for Now

1. The story line is very messy. I hope the homework can be sorted out 🤔 2. There are a lot of typos... [He/She] Especially this one makes me a little concerned. I made a mistake once... I made a mistake several times... I hope the author can pay attention to this problem 😳😘 3. Are you serious about the character design 🥺? It's a bit wrong [Petrochemical]! I hope it can be changed. 4. Although I like to watch a little bit of cars, but there is really no need! In my opinion, when Gong kicked Shou out of the house, Shou had already broken up by default, so what Gong said when he went to the bar was inappropriate😅 5. The thing that I can't stand the most is Gong! I don't actually feel disgusted with those words and the like, and then swearing. After all, I still say them sometimes, but! I feel like the profanity-laced language is not very good... I hope the author can make some minor changes💕❤️🤦 Actually the introduction is pretty good! It's very novel, you can change the details and so on. The author is very polite and listens to advice! Hahaha! Hope it gets better and better!