Jojo's Awakening Substitute World

After reading this book, I just felt weird. First, the worldview is unclear and it is not clearly explained whether the two protagonists have traveled through time or are in the original world, and why they know other people's stand-in abilities. Secondly, the description of the plot is not detailed enough. It is very strange that the protagonists Bucciarati and Apakigan can say the same things as in the original work even though they have only been together for a few days. Thirdly, the character structure is not distinct enough. I feel that the two protagonists have no characteristics. They are just tool men who follow the plot and have no personality. For example, the golden spirit or the dark will, although not everyone has one or the other, it must be emphasized that the personality is not distinctive enough. Fourth, the battle was too sudden. There is no certain foreshadowing, no goal, just starting the war, which makes people confused. And the crushing force is too strong, either you die or I live. There is no description of the stand's battle wits and courage, and the step-by-step process of exploring the abilities of other people's stand-ins, so that the other person's abilities can be known immediately. The one who impressed me the most was Diavolo. He was so cautious that he would never show up unless he was forced to do so, and there was no way he would go directly to the big room. Diavolo has not yet confirmed the dangers of the protagonists and they directly go to the big size. Although it reflects his caution on the one hand, it still seems to be somewhat inconsistent with the character's image. Furthermore, if you don't read the epitaph, Diavolo is an extremely cautious person, and he won't take action easily until you read the epitaph. Fifth, and the most unclear point to me, why are there two identical worlds? It would be fine if the protagonist had the world of Seven Parts, but the problem is that he had the same substitute world as Dio, so what? It's strange that Pucci wouldn't have started preparing to go to heaven without Dio, or that his motivations are unclear. Pucci smoked Jotaro's disc just to go to heaven, and if Dio didn't die, Pucci wouldn't have to go to Jotaro and just go to Dio. But in this way, the same substitutes with the same abilities appear. What will happen if they meet together? And why does the protagonist want to help Jotaro? Why ask for trouble? Of course, if you say it opens up a whole new world by quoting characters and stand-ins, just think of me as farting. In summary, the plot is not rich enough, the characters are not vivid enough, the combat is not exciting and rigorous enough, the goals are not clear enough, and the emotions are not ups and downs. There is neither a place for fun nor a place for the protagonist to grow. The whole novel seems very short, tight, and illogical. The only plus point is that the scene description is pretty good. Two stars is the limit.

Three points. It is not easy for students to write stories. However, the content of the article can be changed. If you follow the original content, I hope it will write a battle of wits and not a tool.