Twenty Years After I Transmigrated, I Suddenly Discover a Supernatural Game

Let me explain here. Some readers reported that some of the actual pictures were not very good, but they did not say what was not so good. I guess there may be too much foreshadowing. After all, there must be realistic foreshadowing. Otherwise, which side is reality? Which side is the game? The proportions between the two sides cannot be too disparate. I apologize to all readers for the trouble I've caused so far, please forgive me [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Also, please type a few more words when you say something is wrong, and tell me what is wrong, and I will have a direction to correct it. I can only stare without saying anything [thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking] Update progress: Chapters 1-15 have corrected typos. I read the most recent chapters before posting them, so there should be fewer typos. Note: I will take one day off on March 8, 2023. If something happens in class, please help Shangfeng with some planning [I'm about to cry]

A rare quality article in Tomato, with self-consistent logic and a story that unfolds slowly. However, the protagonist's combat power is a bit vague. He is only at level 2 but feels that he can fight with his attribute strength and level 4, so his combat power is a bit unclear. I think the story world view of the novel should be more grand. Maybe there will be 8-turn or 9-turn masters in the future, and the combat power levels should be clearly defined. It's a good article! !

It's very beautiful, with a very innovative theme, and there are few updates. It's very interesting.

The first three pictures have a clear theme of Tang San-style protagonists. There is nothing to say, a villain is a villain, no matter how many reasons there are.

This book is very beautiful and very brain-burning Mainly reflected in the situation where after attending the class reunion, the two drivers arranged by the rich second-generation classmates failed. After being rescued He suspects that others save him to harm him After using your ID card to take a bus to other cities, go to a black hotel to disguise yourself I call the protagonist a genius for this operation The seedling of a villain, an indispensable figure for the rise of a villain

Brushing attributes in Novice Village is what I like better.

It's wonderful, but there are too few. I'm afraid it will be difficult to attract people to come and see it in a short time.

The story is good, the plot is also good, and I don't want to be picky. Let's talk about the shortcomings that I don't like, that is, there are too many explanations in the back. The content in the front is rich and full, and some stories and explanations are completely eye-catching, but in the back, there are too many explanations, and they are explained every few paragraphs. For example: Who is the person wearing xxz and being with, it is Lin Mo! , Another example: this spell is difficult, explosive and requires a lot of effort, but can the protagonist do it? No, because the protagonist has xxx xxx, so the protagonist can still use it many times. Another example: it wouldn't work if it were an ordinary person, but it would work if the protagonist was the protagonist, because the protagonist is awesome. Things like this appear too frequently, and in order to bury the plot and bury the plot later, sometimes I will feel dizzy while watching it. This is a matter of opinion. I think it is okay. Except that the explanation affects the perception very much, as if I have been treated as a fool and told me this and this... Overall, it looks good The real world is still a bit of a failure. Qingzhou City is almost over, and the real world is not mentioned much, as if it has been forgotten. The corresponding author seems to have changed. There are many typos and repeated water characters. It is currently changed to 4 stars. If you really can't stand it, the final evaluation will be 3 stars, which is very disappointing. There is no more follow-up from Qi Feng

Come on, the book you wrote is the most worthwhile and interesting book I have ever read.

It looks pretty good, and the further you go, the better. Very exciting, very imaginative