Traveling Through 20 Years: Suddenly Discovered That There Is an Extraordinary Game

Let me explain here. Some readers reported that some of the actual pictures were not very good, but they did not say what was not so good. I guess there may be too much foreshadowing. After all, there must be realistic foreshadowing. Otherwise, which side is reality? Which side is the game? The proportions between the two sides cannot be too disparate. I apologize to all readers for the trouble I've caused so far, please forgive me [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Also, please type a few more words when you say something is wrong, and tell me what is wrong, and I will have a direction to correct it. I can only stare without saying anything [thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking] Update progress: Chapters 1-15 have corrected typos. I read the most recent chapters before posting them, so there should be fewer typos. Note: I will take one day off on March 8, 2023. If something happens in class, please help Shangfeng with some planning [I'm about to cry]

A rare quality article in Tomato, with self-consistent logic and a story that unfolds slowly. However, the protagonist's combat power is a bit vague. He is only at level 2 but feels that he can fight with his attribute strength and level 4, so his combat power is a bit unclear. I think the story world view of the novel should be more grand. Maybe there will be 8-turn or 9-turn masters in the future, and the combat power levels should be clearly defined. It's a good article! !

It's very beautiful, with a very innovative theme, and there are few updates. It's very interesting.

The first three pictures have a clear theme of Tang San-style protagonists. There is nothing to say, a villain is a villain, no matter how many reasons there are.

This book is very beautiful and very brain-burning Mainly reflected in the situation where after attending the class reunion, the two drivers arranged by the rich second-generation classmates failed. After being rescued He suspects that others save him to harm him After using your ID card to take a bus to other cities, go to a black hotel to disguise yourself I call the protagonist a genius for this operation The seedling of a villain, an indispensable figure for the rise of a villain

Brushing attributes in Novice Village is what I like better.

It's wonderful, but there are too few. I'm afraid it will be difficult to attract people to come and see it in a short time.

It looks pretty good, and the further you go, the better. Very exciting, very imaginative

Come on, the book you wrote is the most worthwhile and interesting book I have ever read.

The story is good, the plot is also good, and I don't want to be picky. Let's talk about the shortcomings that I don't like, that is, there are too many explanations in the back. The content in the front is rich and full, and some stories and explanations are completely eye-catching, but in the back, there are too many explanations, and they are explained every few paragraphs. For example: Who is the person wearing xxz and being with, it is Lin Mo! , Another example: this spell is difficult, explosive and requires a lot of effort, but can the protagonist do it? No, because the protagonist has xxx xxx, so the protagonist can still use it many times. Another example: it wouldn't work if it were an ordinary person, but it would work if the protagonist was the protagonist, because the protagonist is awesome. Things like this appear too frequently, and in order to bury the plot and bury the plot later, sometimes I will feel dizzy while watching it. This is a matter of opinion. I think it is okay. Except that the explanation affects the perception very much, as if I have been treated as a fool and told me this and this... Overall, it looks good The real world is still a bit of a failure. Qingzhou City is almost over, and the real world is not mentioned much, as if it has been forgotten. The corresponding author seems to have changed. There are many typos and repeated water characters. It is currently changed to 4 stars. If you really can't stand it, the final evaluation will be 3 stars, which is very disappointing. There is no more follow-up from Qi Feng

Very good. Although the category is relatively small, the author is very detailed and has a certain knowledge of ancient literature in terms of occupation and skills. The comments are a bit outrageous. The character of the protagonist is okay. In fact, the first part would be better if it were written as Huang Sanxian successfully massacred the village. The protagonist is given a main line, just like Ji Xin, but this treatment is more humane. It is quite good and deserves five stars.

I really like this novel. I almost never skipped over 600 chapters. The protagonist is cautious but not cowardly. The group scenes are also well written. The protagonist has the style of the protagonist and the supporting roles have the style of the supporting role. Moreover, the author likes to add some truths into the text to make me understand. It makes me understand why the protagonist does what he does without having to think hard.

It's good for now, the storyline is progressing in an orderly manner

The book is very good, but the rating is a bit low. In fact, I wasn't ready to read the book when I first read some of the poisonous points mentioned in the book reviews combined with the ratings. Then I saw that the poisonous points were mentioned at the front, so I tried to read it and then discarded it if it was not good. After reading it, I found that it was not actually a poisonous point, but the perspective was different. The book describes some behaviors of ordinary people gaining extraordinary powers, which may not be too grand and honest. However, considering that people are actually selfish, the author's description is not wrong. The protagonists depicted in the novel are not stereotyped, as long as the writing is good enough to bring them into the book, it will be interesting. Finally, I want to say something to the author. I feel like I could add some life-oriented chapters, otherwise the protagonist would be constantly downloading dungeons to deal with dangers and it would be easy to get tired from reading. Also, the book was well handled at the end and ended when it was time to finish without any delay.

The world view is grand, the logic is self-consistent, and the protagonist's abilities are rich and reasonable, not brainless. However, I feel that because it is too ambitious and the goal is too far-reaching, the author is a bit out of control, and his ability is slightly lacking, and he needs to continue to work hard.

I think the previous setting of the protagonist can be changed. Because Lao Ma was scolded as a white-eyed wolf for having his relics embezzled, it can be changed to Lao Ma's investment in the protagonist, so that it will not be against the rules to join the official later. If you want to highlight the ruthlessness and caution of the protagonist, you can use the identity of the time traveler + the condition of the premature death of his parents. The favor a person receives is not how much others give him, but how much that person thinks he has given to him. You can completely use the identity of the orphan + the precociousness of the time traveler. To enhance the image of the protagonist, it may conflict with the later ones. After all, I just watched it today [Chi Melon] [Chi Melon]

It is a weird and terrifying fantasy novel with very novel ideas, especially the combination of formation runes and space exploration in the later period, which is eye-catching. At least the routines and incident stories in this book are something I haven't read before. It's not like other novels. I can tell at a glance how the process will go and what will happen. They are all old-fashioned routines. This alone deserves a five-star rating. As for the many people who can't see it for an hour and give it one star because they say they are old horses and joining official organizations, I can only say that they respect it but don't understand it. Lao Ma's plot is to foreshadow the protagonist's money-grubbing and cowardly character. Later, when he is infected by like-minded people, his character changes and grows. Isn't this the growth-oriented male protagonist you want? Of course, if you like invincible writing, let's talk about it. Join the official organization. Many book friends like the lone wolf. Look at the background of the story. The protagonist knows nothing. If he doesn't join the organization, he won't survive the 30th chapter. Moreover, the lone wolf also develops independent forces. According to the story background and world view of this book, then this book will become a mindless novel.

It's good, the logic is pretty clear, but I was a little confused when I saw the store. The woman appeared too suddenly, and I don't think the author's book can fill the gap. I plan to write four books. I hope the author can continue to write. Mainly because there are many books that have buried the book. I haven't filled it in, or just stopped updating it, and each of the four books seems to be related. I have read a lot of novels, and there are not many novels that can be written that are related to each other, let alone good ones. I hope the author can grasp it. If he can't grasp it, it will be a bit of a trap. [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

It's quite interesting. The pen pal has a lot of imagination. Keep up the good work and follow up.

It is actually written by the author himself, and the various updates are very comfortable to use. The world setting is a little flawed, but it doesn't matter. It is worth watching. By the way, some people think that the protagonist is not kind and not a lone wolf. I don't think it is suitable. You can not read it. There is a collective, and at least as a working man, I still like to have a good platform.

It's a very nice book, I think the author wrote it very well.

This score is a bit low. This book is better than most similar books. ; But it is not worthy of scrutiny. In terms of comprehensive level, it is quite exciting. In addition, the protagonist is very smooth, (half-shuangwen, system cheat flow).

The subject matter, routines, etc. Are quite old-fashioned, but the arrangement is very good, and there are no particularly bad points. However, there are really many typos, and I have not changed them for more than a year. Overall, it is average, and his writing in this theme is pretty good. I have read more than 200 chapters so far, and it is pretty good.

The author's writing skills may be weak at the beginning, but it gets better as time goes by. And there are no big logical problems. You can basically find the answer by reading the next chapter. All in all it's worth a look [note] [note] [note]

It's still good. It belongs to a good book. Let me express my opinion. I read the latest update from the beginning. At the beginning, the protagonist described by Xiong Shan at the beginning still has some not rounded places. I feel that there are still some small loopholes, which does not affect the overall reading. Later, the writing gradually becomes better. Slowly, the world line has moved up, the level of contact is higher, and the senses are better. This book is worth reading and chasing. I give it full stars. Come on, Mr. Xiongshan. I hope you will write better and better in the future.

The book is okay, but the author always forgets to determine the correct grade. Once the equipment is upgraded, the quality will be improved. The skill of Fire Feather also alternates between gold and fortune. The training of corpses has also been laid for a long time. Starting from the fourth level of evil corpse, to the fifth level of great evil, and finally started to practice to become the fourth level of great evil.

The writing is very good, and the early stage is very attractive. I am very surprised, why is this book not popular? I was a little weak in the later period, maybe because I didn't do well just now, or maybe because my results were not good and the results were over, but overall it deserves a 5-point encouragement. Another point is that the heroine is a little bit abrupt. The relationship between the two has no beginning and no end. I feel that it is okay to write it or not to write it, so I think it is okay not to write it.

If you want to write about confusion, you can't just write about confusion. You have to write about graduates who failed the postgraduate entrance examination and public service exams. You have to write about new employees who have just been laid off. You have to write about travelers who have left their lives in heaven and earth. You have to write about the wanderers who bid farewell to their loved ones and go to distant places. You have to write about you and me at the crossroads.

Are there any books of the same type? There are not enough books to read.

Yes, it's quite interesting, but the author's progress is very slow, so I don't think this book will last long and needs to change the outline. Although my writing ability is not very good, leave this arduous task to me.