Rebirth: I Learned Magic at Hogwarts

Aaa, cheers for the author, it's very interesting, I hope it won't end badly [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's okay, but the content is relatively small, updates are not frequent, and the emotional line is not clear. There is a lot going on with Penello in the front, but there is basically nothing about her in the back, and there are more about Hermione in the back. If the heroine is Hermione, there are many stories, you can innovate (and I think Hermione is a bit OOC), but if the author can't handle it well, I suggest no cp (but you have too many cps in the foreshadowing, it is best to fix it)

Come on, author, don't let it suck.

It's very good. Neville's writing is very touching. Come on!

Very good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡Come on (ง •̀_•́)งUpdate!

[Adoration] Quick, quick, invincible, invincible, invincible

Very well written, keep it up.

Big cheers to the author.

There are a few typos, but overall it's fine.

Very nice ^ω^ This book is among the HP fanfics. I think it is the best book I have ever read. It is worth recommending. By the way, I would like to urge you to update it. Can you please update it more?

Dude, he's kind of handsome.

Very good. Don't be a eunuch.

Neville writes very well. Come on.

The writing is good, but it would be better to focus on the school. Peneiro has been missing for a long time [laughing and crying]

So far, the writing is pretty good. I still get a 9.5 Rating. The writing is pretty good, which is rare in Harry Potter fan fiction.