The Endless Journey Begins with Naruto

It's a very nice and novel setting. It's the first time I've seen the road of ninja. If you stick to it and keep reading, it's definitely a magical book. It's definitely the number one attraction for people who watch Naruto.

Five-star praise, at least I think it is great among Naruto novels. Why is this novel basically praised but only at 7:00? [What] More and more rubbish

It would be great if the author could update more than twenty chapters every day without eating or drinking. It is a very interesting Naruto fan novel.

Personally, I feel pretty good! There is no black third generation and no third generation cleansing! Then I add a little bit of my own creation, and it's actually pretty good! Also, cheers for the author! Happy New Year (✪▽✪)! The author also gave likes to everyone who posted a paragraph! ✌

It's really rare in Tomato not to engage in conspiracy theories, so I like this [learned]

So what about little Hinata, author, why did you forget the goddess Hinata, ah ah ah [angry] [angry] [angry]

When I first learned about Ino Shikacho, I always thought Choji was a pig. Until Choji turned into a butterfly. Tsk tsk tsk, Dingci is so handsome when he turns into a butterfly.

Why are updates so slow? Main mission: Thousands of people wrote in blood, begging for updates (1/10000) Main mission: (14/10000)

Brothers, the author is more beautiful than Diao Chan, better in writing than Xi Shi, and is proficient in all kinds of literary and military skills. Such a good girl must not be pampered by us. Brothers, give me a chance to marry her home and squeeze updates like crazy. Brothers, please leave a comment if you agree ❤️

It is not the fusion of the time traveler, Menma and Naruto at all. From a character point of view, Naruto swallowed up the time traveler and Menma...

I can't say how good it is, but at least it doesn't have any bad points in the early stages. As for the writing, it's a bit immature, but the author is a novice, so I understand, and the time jumps a bit too fast. My suggestion is to add a little bit of daily life, preferably the protagonist and Hinata (what bad intentions can I have?) Finally, I wish this book will get better and better, come on (ｖ＿＿＾) v

Brothers, what is our slogan, author~add~more

One chapter a day? Are you making a fuss [angry] It's not enough

The writing is quite good. It can be seen that the author worked very hard to collect information. Even if you have not watched the anime very much, you will have a general understanding of this novel. Regarding the issue of too much science popularization, I think some people will find it annoying, and some people will like it. If you don't like it, skipping the science popularization will have no impact. The main reason is that the author's efforts and rigorous search for information and popular science are worthy of recognition.

I don't understand why the main character was asked to awaken the Wood Release. After the awakening, he only pretended to be useless in the Chuunin exam and was tricked by Obito once, causing Konoha to fight for more than a year.

Great, neither black nor white, just right The first 200 chapters are pretty good, but the author shouldn't explain the skills in detail as if we haven't read the original work.

It can be considered a masterpiece of Naruto fan fiction.

After reading more than ten chapters, I still don't know what the protagonist's eyes are capable of. I only know one Susana now. Will the remaining 4 be mentioned later?

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It's very beautiful, I just hope it doesn't end badly.

How can I put it this way? The short story of this book has a very strong sense of déjà vu, and the transition from one plot to another is very sudden. But overall, this book has good potential, but it needs more practice in terms of writing.

This book is one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read. Come on, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch.

Brother, if you haven't watched Naruto, don't write anything [I understand] the Sage of Six Paths also evolved the Rinnegan from the Sharingan! Have you not watched this episode? [What]

Come on, author! If you are too tired, take a good rest……………………(❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ* [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Awesome, I like Naruto like this the most! Play decisively and don't forgive Obito! Naruto who doesn't target Hokage and only cares about his family! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

The plot is reasonable and there is no brainless hacking of the third generation. When reading online articles, it depends on the author's performance of the third generation. In general, excellent online articles will not be brainless. Intruding into other people's world can be regarded as self-destructive behavior, but looking at it, the whole Tomato novel is qualified.

I deduct one star from you. The reason is because you can only write one chapter a day.

The characters are well drawn, there are no bad actors

Author, please hurry up. You don't want to give five-star installments, right?

You've been doing it for a long time and you're not very good. I'll catch up to the finale. You have to update tomorrow. I'm a hacker. If you don't update, I'll hack your network.