Millions of People Were Killed at the Beginning, and Violence in the East Shocked the Internet

The author's writing is so beautiful, come on! But there are too few updates. It would be better if there were more updates [smile][smile][smile]

Come on, the writing is very good, Huo Qubing, Li Taibai and so on. I think you can write about it. Will there be benefits in the future? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

A good story has a perfect ending. A perfect story is a pity of flaws. Bai Qi is the most famous among the four famous generals, not only for his invincibility, but also for his regrettable ending. Just like the final battle of Handan, everyone knew he could win, but in the end it left people with endless reveries. Bai Qi was sentenced to death. To put it bluntly, it actually made him sublime, leaving future generations with endless sighs. If the author changes this, to put it bluntly, and it feels good for a while, the number of readers in the future will only decrease. If you want more readers for the book, you have to create a better character. For example, the heroine is just a witness and bystander of history. She has just traveled through time. She is powerless to change. If you can write about her initial powerlessness and then her determination and ability to change slowly, major things remain the same, but small things can be changed. This can be considered a good story. A few suggestions, the author can take a look at it.

The description of the battle between Zhao Kuo and Changping is very good, but the description of Sister Zhou and the protagonist is insufficient. I hope the author can take advantage of the double penetration and add some interactions to enrich the character played by the protagonist. Since it is a live broadcast, it is normal for the anchor to want the audience to get more information, and it is also reasonable for the protagonist to want to cash in some modern technology and knowledge through Sister Zhou! Five-star praise, I hope the author will keep up the good work @ Mengmei Bingbing [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Not bad, not bad. It describes the ups and downs of Bai Qi very well, and then just tighten the grip on the disappearance of Chinese history [laughing evilly] I hope to see my idol champion Hou soon [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Absolutely, all the supporting characters have flesh and blood, and everyone is as imagined in their hearts. All the factors and reasons for the Battle of Changping are vividly written. Zhao Kuo is not an armchair strategist on paper. How can a person who can stand up to Bai Qi be a waste? The ending of Bai Qi's chapter may be the best ending for Lord Wu An. His body was shrouded in horse leather and the whole country was in mourning. King Qin and Bai Qi were not aware of each other and the king and his ministers knew each other. [Like] [Like] Like. Looking forward to the arrival of the First Emperor Chapter. Come on, author! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]o(＾▽＾)o

A very good book. This first part has changed my views on Bai Qi and Zhao Kuo... I used to only know that Bai Qi was called the God of Killing and killed many people. I thought he was a cold-blooded and ruthless person. Now I know that he is not a cold-blooded and emotionless person. He may also have his own helplessness...; I only know how to talk on paper, I know that it is shallow, but now I know Kuo's talent...; The author's writing style is also good, and there are even some chapters that have a high reading threshold, so you need to enter with caution (it's a shame that I'm good at classical Chinese literature, otherwise I really wouldn't be able to understand [smile]) The introduction to this book should be quite long, but there is still very little written at the moment. I hope the author can update it soon. There will be a lot of free power generation for love! No matter what happens, I will continue to follow up [smile][smile][smile] I can only say that I highly recommend it!

Since reading this book, I feel that my classical Chinese writing is getting better and better. The author of this book is definitely a college master. It is so awesome. This classical Chinese writing was written for me and I was stunned for a moment.

Five stars, my favorite general is Bai Qi. Reading this book, my eyes turned red twice. Come on, author, please update quickly. I ran out of power today and will send it to you tomorrow.

The writing is very exciting, but there is one thing that makes me feel very dissatisfied. The person played by Lu Ren is Bai Qi, but the book repeatedly emphasizes that Lu Ren is Wu Anjun in the eyes of others. I think the name should be changed back to Bai Qi, or Lu Ren's name should be mentioned occasionally [rolls eyes]

Awesome! Big cheers for the author! You should pay attention to rest while updating more. It doesn't matter if you update less during the New Year. After all, only one worry-free holiday comes once a year. [Eat melon][like][like][like]

I started reading novels in the third grade, and this year I am a sophomore in high school. I have to say that it is very exciting. Although some parts have different logic, are long-winded, and have repeated conflicts, they are still quite exciting. I hope the author can complete it. After all, there are too many good novels that are unfinished... I also hope that I can continue to write about some famous people (The First Emperor is not It must be mentioned that the remaining ministers are not simple, like Li Si and others, in the subsequent Chu-Han conflict, the bloody killings during the period of Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty, the clichéd Three Kingdoms, etc., And even the Tang Dynasty Yu Xiongnu, Ming Dynasty Fury Mobei...) Are all personal opinions, I still hope the author has a happy New Year, and it must not be unfinished!

It is very beautiful. The various psychological descriptions and details of the characters in the book are well described, and the characters' personalities are fully depicted. From the description of historical events, it can be seen that the author has a serious understanding of historical events and has his own understanding. Especially the understanding of Zhao Kuo: in history, Zhao Kuo was an arrogant person who lost all the national power on his own, but in this book, Zhao Kuo is a man with extraordinary abilities, loyal to the country, and a man who dared to sacrifice himself for the lives of his subordinates... I can feel that every flesh-and-blood character survives in this book. Hopefully the author can maintain and improve so we can better understand history.

If nothing else, you have to read the book by yourself. My personal opinion is that it is very interesting. The plot is wonderful and the author is really imaginative. It makes people amazed. I hope the author will continue to write such excellent books. Come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

It's really good. The description of the characters is great. Don't mention the Holy Mother to labor and management. It's normal for modern people to not change their minds. Whoever makes the decision will spare the 400,000 soldiers. There is nothing poisonous about it. The writing style is not bad (but the classical Chinese can be less, some people can't understand it). Also, the author should update me faster! ! !

Personally, I feel that the characters are described very well, especially Zhao Kuo. He is neither negative nor overly praising. He portrays the spirit of the army and is very passionate. It really made me teary-eyed, and I hope to write about Yue Fei again later (I have always thought that there should be many written about Yue Fei, but I have never seen it. If the author can write about Yue Fei, her writing style will definitely not insult Yue Fei in my heart) (I have never thought that Yue Fei is a foolish and loyal person. If you can write about Yue Fei, don't write Yue Fei as a foolish and loyal person) The author is really good at writing. I can't understand why the rating is so low. He is full of passion and tenderness. The part about trapping Zhao Guo Jiang's soldiers described Bai Qi particularly well. The most important thing is that the author is a girl [laughing evilly] [admiration]

Good book, a really good book. Although it is a system article, the author's focus is largely on the plot, and there is no text about the system or the comments from netizens. On the contrary, every time I write a barrage, it basically breaks the solemn atmosphere and explanation in the prose. Every time I write about reality, I'm laying the groundwork. Not watery at all. The author put a lot of effort into the plot, and it can be said that the writing style is excellent. My language expression ability is limited, but this novel is really a good book in Tomato. I hope everyone can take a look, come on, author! ! (First time writing so much)

After reading the comments for a long time, I realized who the author is? I can, it's really beautiful \(//∇//)\, so, sisters post [admiration]

I picked up a book randomly in the morning. I originally wanted to read it casually, but then I found that I couldn't stop reading it. The author's writing style was not bad. Some of the plots in the book were the same as the historical texts in my impression. (It includes the classical Chinese part) So please update it quickly! (Although it is an imaginary world, it still does not affect its beauty)

This is the first time I read a book like this. The author took my time to read it, and I accidentally read it for so long~ It feels good~ Come on (I will add this last bit of love when the book is finished) (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on

This book is very good. It's just a fleeting chapter in a history book, but here I got a glimpse of the magnificent life of Lord Wu'an. He used Wu to secure the world and rule the country with Wu. He was called Lord Wu'an!

This is the most authentic ancient text I have ever read. In this book, you can see that although Bai Qi is suspected, he is still 100% loyal to the country. He would rather die than surrender. He is a Zhao people with an iron frame and even the wisdom of the ancients. He is different from other people. His article, this article gave me the first feeling that it is true. He can well embody the wisdom of the ancients and express it in classical Chinese. Generally speaking, it is very good. It is the kind of feeling that suddenly ignites when you look at it. Even watching Bo Ren can't cool down. What? Renew? You have to know that the number of words in an article is not about the number of words, but about the essence.

A very novel live broadcast, with two protagonists, two time travels, and one person traveling through the system. Because the system cannot tell his identity, the "people from his hometown" are around him, and he can hear and see, but cannot "speak". A person travels through time ignorantly, is cared for by others, and is shocked by history. But there is still a common problem with live broadcasts: who is the guest and who is the audience? The readers are. No matter how many viewers there are in the article, no matter how good the "side protrusion" is, it is just self-indulgence and will destroy the beauty of the entire story. Storytelling is storytelling. Prioritize. There is no audience in the storyteller's story, there is only the audience. (The storyteller is just an example. If you don't tell the story, you can't have an audience.)

Absolutely amazing, so beautiful, the author will update it a lot! I want to see [adoration][adoration]

I can't comment, I can only say that the writing is very good. I am looking forward to the part where Bai Qi dies. Everything in the previous part is to pave the way for his final ending, and it just so happens that the ending where he dies will be the pinnacle of his character. In fact, the death of every person he plays should be very regrettable, because only regret can create this character. How many people really like to see those perfect endings?

The author's writing is very good. This chapter of traveling through Bai Qi uses classical Chinese, and occasionally a bit of vernacular. The basic skills are very solid. The content of this book is also very good. It is highly recommended. Thumbs up [like][like][like]

I've been a bookworm for 15 years. I've read a lot of nonfiction in recent years. If I can't find a good book, I just click through it. This one is good, but there are too few. I finished it in one morning. [Pause face] [Pause face] [Pause face] Update soon.

This book is so top-notch that it made my scalp tingle when I read it. The writing is really good.

It's good-looking, the writing skills are very deep, and the information in all aspects is relatively accurate. Although it is a time-travel and fault-travelling, it is very rigorous from a new perspective. It's just that this update is a bit less, but it's also because there are more ancient texts, which seems a bit sparse. More would be better, author! ! ! ! ! !

It is a rare fictional historical novel that uses classical Chinese as the narrative, history as the context, combined with subjective and objective factors, cultural charm and the humanistic spirit rich in Chinese characteristics. It is both rough and detailed. It can describe a certain thing in detail and summarize it. There are additions and subtractions, and the details are appropriate. The story has twists and turns, the character creation and description are quite good, the author's writing style is wonderful, and the historical and literary background is excellent. It's quite wonderfully written.