Taking Over Shinji’s Body: Saving the Heroines of Fate

Four stars, because in the star chapter, Emiya saw the crow clone and said, "What kind of magic is this?" This is the world of magic, and magic is not the name of the power in this world.

Initial rating is four stars. For a novice author, it's pretty good, and the writing is really good. So let's talk about a few places that may affect readers' reading experience. The first one is that it's not exciting enough. To put it bluntly, many people who read the original work want to make up for their regrets, so I feel that although the author wrote his own ideas, it still doesn't feel exciting enough. The second is that the combat power setting is not perfect enough. Some abilities are very strong in the original work, but cannot achieve the effect that readers want when applied to the protagonist. It is easy for readers to lack a sense of identity when reading. The third thing is that I marked a place for the shadow clone to accompany my girlfriend. The shadow clone is self-aware, and it is easy for people to feel that they are cheating on themselves. Finally, come on, author, there are a lot of comic books, but there are many that I can't stick to. Don't be a eunuch, I will keep reading.

So pretty ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Very interesting, come on, author

I feel like the writing is very good. Come on, author.

Come on, it's really pretty

Well written, keep it up!!!