After I Died, My Ex-Husband's Younger Brother Went White-Haired Overnight for Me

The plot is still very good and the writing is very natural. After the rebirth, the heroine gained relief and learned that it is very important to let go appropriately and not to worry too much. The male protagonist is really pitiful. I don't know how he has lived all these years. I feel so sad [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] I just feel that there are too many words to describe the psychology of the male and female protagonists, as well as the psychological activities of the supporting characters. Some of them are actually not necessary to be written in too much detail, but they seem a bit verbose. I hope it can be more streamlined and the plot can advance faster. I feel that the number of words in each chapter is very sufficient, but the content is a little lacking. Big cheers for the author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Only after I tied it did I realize that this was a newly opened article. The author writes well, and the angle is different from other rebirth novels. It is not the kind of rebirth and revenge novel that opens and closes, but like a story unfolding from the memories of the past life. The author's characteristics are still very distinct. He said that sometimes writing each development part in detail will interrupt the ongoing dialogue and main line. So dozens of chapters later, the story is still on the first day of rebirth and breaking off the engagement, haha. Overall, recommended.

I burst into tears when I read it, because the writing was so deeply rooted in people's hearts that I felt that they were not paper figures, but real people. It is a masterpiece! Ahhhhhh [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] The writing is so delicate and delicate, it would be a pity not to make it into a TV series, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh [loving me] [loving me]

I like this kind of daily life without awkwardness and no big scenes! I'm just tired of chasing updates [face covering]

They are all very good, very beautiful, the writing is delicate, and the story is eloquent. The reason why I deducted one star is because the maid Zhuiyue felt that the heroine was too kind, and she forgave her again and again. At the beginning, she did not serve her fiancé for several days because she was in love with her, and she did not think that the heroine was the saddest person, so she raised her heart. I don't know if the heroine will be "very kind" in the future. After all, I can't stand Our Lady of the Stage.

The writing is delicate, especially the psychological description is rich. However, too much psychological description can easily lead to a slow pace. Many people say that it took only one day to finish dozens of chapters. In particular, the same part of the memory may appear several times in different people's mental activities. It can still be a little more streamlined ~ it will read more smoothly.

Don't miss it, damn, I guarantee you will definitely like it after watching it [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing] Although the heroine is not a modern person, her thinking is very forward, and the maid next to the girl is also the same. It really shocked me, I really like Xu's father and Xu Lang, haha😊 So does the male protagonist, it's so heartbreaking. Just imagine that the female protagonist brings three big dogs, (Tibetan Mastiff) Xu's father, Xu Lang (Husky), the male protagonist (German Shepherd), and Yuanbao (Alaskan) [star][star][star]

Love it! ! Some people may think that the words are trivial and verbose, but I think it is really not easy to find such a book with such delicate and rich writing in today's fast-food reading (especially romance online novels)! This is the first ancient Chinese novel in my opinion where the heroine is truly gentle but not weak, meticulous and thoughtful, and has an overall perspective. None of the supporting characters are useless or flat, good or evil, black and white, the construction is very realistic and clever!

It's very interesting, it flows smoothly, all the characters and things are clearly explained, the progress is a bit slow, but it's very interesting to watch. The male protagonist is both a milk dog and a wolf dog, and the female protagonist is her only salvation. The female protagonist is a few years older than the male protagonist. Because of what happened to the male protagonist, she treats him like a biological brother. She is easily soft-hearted and distressed towards the male protagonist, and she is very indulgent towards him. Later, she found out that her rebirth was due to the male protagonist seeking it from her own life span and luck, so she finally confirmed her feelings for the male protagonist. The two soon connected and secretly got together. The heroine's father and younger brother are also very interesting. They are all mean to the heroine, and of course the hero is the same, but the hero knows how to make the heroine soften her heart. When the heroine is angry, she will look aggrieved, with big wet eyes, looking at the heroine pitifully, saying I was wrong, my sister doesn't want me, does she look like a poor bitch, can the heroine not be soft-hearted [laughing]

The author's writing style is very delicate, and each character he describes has his own story line. They are not supporting roles for the sake of supporting roles. Each character is very full. I am looking forward to the film and television version of this book. My favorite characters are Xu Chong and A Lang. They are indeed father and son, both have pure and good characters! I feel most sorry for Ayu in his previous life, but... What he asked for in front of the Buddha in his previous life was fulfilled in another world.