Lin Qingqing died of rage after losing match after match in Honor of Kings. When she woke up, she found she'd transmigrated into the hapless third senior sister of a Mary Sue novel.
In the novel, the female lead, her junior sister, got whatever she wanted. She also loved snatching Lin Qingqing's things, putting on a fake, pitiful act, and throwing a tantrum whenever she wanted something. In the end, all of Lin Qingqing's opportunities went to the female lead. And then...
The senior brother who'd taken a liking to Lin Qingqing was bewitched into having her spiritual root dug out and given to the female lead.
Lin Qingqing certainly wasn't willing to be a complete sucker. She'd just transmigrated, and she was already leaving.
The junior sister, a fake innocent, said, "I only wanted one of Senior Sister's herbs. It's fine if she won't give it to me. I never said she had to. And now you're angry, Senior Sister?"
Lin Qingqing sneered. "I'm not angry. Should you be? I'm your senior sister, but my opportunities? I'd give them to a dog before I'd give them to you."
What kind of sucker gives a fake innocent their all and hands over their opportunities? Who cares about being an inner sect disciple? Whoever wants to be a sucker can do it. I'm done!
Third Senior Brother: "It looks like Junior Sister died."
"We forgot to bring a coffin."
Second Senior Brother: "No problem. Let's have Eldest Senior Brother make one. He's an old hand at it."
Eldest Senior Brother: "It's fine if she's dead. I can make a coffin. We'll take turns keeping watch over it."
Junior Sister: "? Having you all around is such a blessing."
The subject matter is very good. I don't know if the author is in a hurry. There are either too many words or too few words, or there are typos 🤦 🤦. People who read it have to use their brains to understand the words. Can 🤦 be more rigorous? It's a waste of subject matter.
Looks good, Jue Juezi
There are many typos, many sentences are not fluent, the plot is quite nonsensical, and many places are completely wrong.
It's a bit like a primary school student's writing style, it's really...