Ultimate Evolution: Starting with a Mental Mutation

For the sake of your hard work, give yourself a five-star review, it's not too much [laughing]

Overall, it's just so-so. The plot of the story is very ordinary and unremarkable. Although Golden Finger is very novel and detailed in describing the abnormal state of the protagonist, and looks very good, the plot in the book affects the potential of the whole book. Other aspects are still very good... But I don't have too much expectations. Judging from the writing style of this book, the description of the character's personality and emotions, communication, and performance are relatively rough. I can only give a rough outline and do not write a unique character performance. The description of the protagonist is slightly better, but I don't think it is very good. It is average. There are no flaws and nothing good. It is ordinary. However, the protagonist's abnormal state, Golden Finger, and the mental stance are quite novel and quite good. In terms of plot, it feels very bland. Some of the conflicts in the article and the way the protagonist resolves them seem very natural. They look like conflicts in everyday novels. Although the description in the article is very practical, it seems that it really doesn't make you get into the feeling. I think the protagonist's reaction is too calm and bland, and it feels a bit natural. Let's take a look at the setting. The book is generally centered around the protagonist's abnormal state of meditation. The setting based on this is the only highlight of the book. It is very novel and interesting. Other than that, the writing and plot are relatively ordinary and bland in my opinion. However, looking at the development of the plot and the revelation of the meaning in the article, my evaluation today is likely to change, because I saw mentioned in the article that I feel that the latest updated chapter is in the early stage of development. The protagonist's strength and all aspects are now relatively stable and powerful. I feel that the next few chapters may enter the middle stage of the explosive state of plot and writing. Therefore, I am looking forward to the progress of the author's writing and plot. Taken together, this book is rated four points because the writing and plot are a drag, but the potential is still well developed. The setting is amazing and novel. Originally, it should be rated three because of the drag and plot, but because the potential and setting are superior, it is rated four. Assuming that the writing and plot are improved and the plot is developed well, it has the potential to be five stars.

Personally I think it's pretty good, I think it might be popular

Very nice, a bit on top. Well written, please continue to update. The author should set a goal of 1 million words.

The plot of this book is quite good, but the details need to be considered a little more. The protagonist needs more training, and the love aspect also needs to be interspersed, otherwise losing will be boring.

It's okay, but what my cousin did doesn't seem like something a scholar would do, but it's normal for a person to behave like this when he suddenly gains strength. It is also in line with the normal novel that the protagonist suddenly gains strength, and then deals with the enemy forcefully, and finally the people around him are retaliated, and then the protagonist wakes up and realizes that strength is not the only thing.

Come on author, it's great

Very interesting to write. Although it is said that there are still people who can achieve the protagonist's early stage abilities with similar effects. For example, memory. I heard that there is a "memory palace" that can improve memory later in life, but it is very difficult. But some people are also born with "hyperamnesia", and some are born with super high IQs. As for physical fitness? This protagonist has not yet reached the limit of human beings, so there is nothing to compare with.

A very good book.

Well written. But the author is obviously young and has too little understanding of reality. Need to strengthen common sense of life