A fever gave her the soul of someone from another world. Bai Zhi used to be a struggling student with a poor head for school, but suddenly she aced the college entrance exams and became the province's top scorer. She used to chase after men; now they can't get her to spare them a glance. Her male classmates are left lamenting: “Turns out I gave my heart to the wrong person.”
Bai Zhi: “Get lost and let me study. This is basic stuff, don't make a fuss.”
Male classmates: “Sob, sob...”
A little scene
Bai Zhi: “I want food. I want water.”
Someone: “Sure. Eat me...”
Bai Zhi: “Shameless...”
Someone: “I only need you. Why would I need my dignity?”
As a CEO, I'd never met a girl who could ignore me so completely. I really wanted to win her over.
Bai Zhi: “You're older than me.”
Someone: “That's better. I can take good care of you...”
Later, he really did follow through on his words, cherishing her with all his heart.
Sorry, I will just express my thoughts. There is no malice, please don't criticize. First of all, it can be seen that this is really my first time writing a novel, and the writing style is very immature. There are too many useless layouts and introductions, and it is easy to fail to highlight the key points. And some small details should be consistent. Just like when the Bai family knew the heroine's first place result, it would be best if many schools came to call frantically and slap all the classmates in the face. To be honest, this kind of plot is boring but exciting, otherwise the effect will be greatly reduced when it appears again later. Also, I feel like the heroine's character is a bit... Weird? I can't sum it up, so I want to know what the heroine's character should be. Otherwise, I always feel that it's not very enjoyable to watch, and I always feel that the heroine's character is a bit contradictory. Finally, the heroine's quarrels with others are really... A bit childish. The overall starting point of this article is good. I think there is a lot of room for development, but some pitfalls are too sloppy. Just when I was about to get excited, the pit disappeared. The above are all personal feelings, so don't worry about them. If you don't like it, don't spray it, thank you. Come on, author!