A fever burned out a soul from another world. Student Bai, who had been at the bottom of his grades and had a hard time with his brain, suddenly performed very well in the college entrance examination and became the top scholar in the province. He used to chase men, but now men can't catch him, leaving only a male classmate: Sure enough, his sincerity was paid by mistake.
Bai Zhi: Get out of here, don't disturb my study, don't do basic exercises.
Male classmate: ……
small theater
Bai Zhi: I want to eat and drink water
Someone: Well, eat me...
Bai Zhi: Shameless...
Someone: I just want you. Why do you want face?
As a CEO, this was the first time I met a little girl. She completely ignored me and really wanted to conquer her.
Bai Zhi: You are older than me.
Someone: It hurts so much when I grow up...
Later, someone really fulfilled what he said and doted on her to the core.
Reader comments
Sorry, I will just express my thoughts. There is no malice, please don't criticize. First of all, it can be seen that this is really my first time writing a novel, and the writing style is very immature. There are too many useless layouts and introductions, and it is easy to fail to highlight the key points.
And some small details should be consistent. Just like when the Bai family knew the heroine's first place result, it would be best if many schools came to call frantically and slap all the classmates in the face. To be honest, this kind of plot is boring but exciting, otherwise the effect will be greatly reduced when it appears again later.
Also, I feel like the heroine's character is a bit... Weird? I can't sum it up, so I want to know what the heroine's character should be. Otherwise, I always feel that it's not very enjoyable to watch, and I always feel that the heroine's character is a bit contradictory. Finally, the heroine's quarrels with others are really... A bit childish.
The overall starting point of this article is good. I think there is a lot of room for development, but some pitfalls are too sloppy. Just when I was about to get excited, the pit disappeared.
The above are all personal feelings, so don't worry about them. If you don't like it, don't spray it, thank you.
Come on, author!
Sorry, I will just express my thoughts. There is no malice, please don't criticize. First of all, it can be seen that this is really my first time writing a novel, and the writing style is very immature. There are too many useless layouts and introductions, and it is easy to fail to highlight the key points. And some small details should be consistent. Just like when the Bai family knew the heroine's first place result, it would be best if many schools came to call frantically and slap all the classmates in the face. To be honest, this kind of plot is boring but exciting, otherwise the effect will be greatly reduced when it appears again later. Also, I feel like the heroine's character is a bit... Weird? I can't sum it up, so I want to know what the heroine's character should be. Otherwise, I always feel that it's not very enjoyable to watch, and I always feel that the heroine's character is a bit contradictory. Finally, the heroine's quarrels with others are really... A bit childish. The overall starting point of this article is good. I think there is a lot of room for development, but some pitfalls are too sloppy. Just when I was about to get excited, the pit disappeared. The above are all personal feelings, so don't worry about them. If you don't like it, don't spray it, thank you. Come on, author!