Battle Through the Heavens: I Become Xiao Yan’s Backer

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, not for pleasure, and will be made into steel through repeated tempering. I will be worthy of readers, worthy of my youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship. I can code diligently. I am the keyboard in the dark and the guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding day and night.

The author is still in the new book stage. I have read a few chapters. Generally speaking, the subject matter is relatively new. It may also be the author's first time writing a book. Some parts are still a little imperfect, but for novices, this is already very good. I hope the author can continue writing. Recently, most of the novels on Tomato are the same, and the title of your book is The material is indeed good, but the setting is still not very good. For example, the four-year-old child and the thirty-year-old uncle in the book are brothers, which is a bit too ordinary. It is okay to call them uncle and nephew. Of course, this is just a small opinion of mine. The author can refer to it. After all, many people nowadays will analyze a novel word by word to catch mistakes. I hope the author understands. I have a small request here, I hope there will be no female protagonist 😂

The author writes very well! Keep up the good work But there are still some deficiencies in the expression. I can't fully feel what the author wants to express, or the expression is distorted, but overall it is very good, keep up the good work! (For example, the author can reconsider the characterization)

This book is very suitable to my taste, especially the aspect of summoning subordinates. I hope the author can create a hidden power later, and there will be many fighting saints! You can name this organization Heaven.

"It's a good Dou Po fan novel. The overall plot is gentle. The plot in Yun Yun's story is boring. There are some poisonous points but the author listened to his opinions and eliminated them. It's not a big failure. The author will listen to the readers' opinions." Early rating ☆☆☆ (the plot is average) Yun Yun's appearance ☆☆ (the plot is boring and a little bit toxic) After Chapter 60☆☆☆☆ (the chapter content is better) The current overall evaluation: 7.6 To 8.6 Points. "The biggest advantage of this book is that the plot is gentle and engaging, but it also has a shortcoming. There is no special explosive plot with ups and downs. The author will listen to the comments and be among the best in Tomato Fighting fan fiction." [In this place where tomato novels are so sparse, this book is relatively well written, so I gave it a four-star rating]

Don't stop updating, keep writing. It's normal for every book to have negative reviews. You should also think about how many people like your book, so update it quickly.

Compared with Tomato's other fighting articles, I feel much better (if you don't like my personal opinion, please don't comment) 🤔🤔[Laughing][Laughing]

As a reader of Fighting to Break the Sky and as the author of this novel, the author hopes to describe more scenes of the protagonist fighting. I feel that the number of battles for the protagonist is very small. Most of them are fought by summoned martyrs. Secondly, I personally feel that the combat power system is slightly broken. I hope the author can adjust the combat power system to deepen the character portrayal of Xiao Yan and Yao Lao and make the original characters more accurate. Overall, the author's writing is pretty good. Readers are very happy after reading it. The main line hopes not to deviate from the original work. As a reader, I also hope to see that our male protagonist is a pentagonal warrior. I saw a previous comment saying that it was the first time for the author to write a book. I thought it was great to be able to write like this for the first time. Keep up the good work and I will support it! 🤭 @

Well, it's good, at least on this website, it's still manageable, but the updates are a little slow. It's so hard to find books. I searched for a day and found one, then I finished it in half a day and then continued to look for books 😢

I didn't read much about Dou Po doujins before. I only read Dou Po doujins from the Zhutian genre. This book is the first Dou Po doujins I've read. I think it's well written and makes me want to read more. 👍