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The author writes very well! Keep up the good work But there are still some deficiencies in the expression. I can't fully feel what the author wants to express, or the expression is distorted, but overall it is very good, keep up the good work! (For example, the author can reconsider the characterization)

This book is very suitable to my taste, especially the aspect of summoning subordinates. I hope the author can create a hidden power later, and there will be many fighting saints! You can name this organization Heaven.

Don't stop updating, keep writing. It's normal for every book to have negative reviews. You should also think about how many people like your book, so update it quickly.

"It's a good Dou Po fan novel. The overall plot is gentle. The plot in Yun Yun's story is boring. There are some poisonous points but the author listened to his opinions and eliminated them. It's not a big failure. The author will listen to the readers' opinions." Early rating ☆☆☆ (the plot is average) Yun Yun's appearance ☆☆ (the plot is boring and a little bit toxic) After Chapter 60☆☆☆☆ (the chapter content is better) The current overall evaluation: 7.6 To 8.6 Points. "The biggest advantage of this book is that the plot is gentle and engaging, but it also has a shortcoming. There is no special explosive plot with ups and downs. The author will listen to the comments and be among the best in Tomato Fighting fan fiction." [In this place where tomato novels are so sparse, this book is relatively well written, so I gave it a four-star rating]

Compared with Tomato's other fighting articles, I feel much better (if you don't like my personal opinion, please don't comment) [Thinking][Thinking][Laughing][Laughing]

Tomato Dou Po Fan is indeed the best book I have read. In my personal opinion,

I didn't read much about Dou Po doujins before. I only read Dou Po doujins from the Zhutian genre. This book is the first Dou Po doujins I've read. I think it's well written and makes me want to read more. [Like]

It's quite good (♥∀♥). I've read many novels. I can say that this one is still attractive to me. I must update more about the author. I like your novel very much. Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on. [Working on the manuscript] [Working on the manuscript] [Working on the manuscript] [Working on the manuscript]

As a reader of Fighting to Break the Sky and as the author of this novel, the author hopes to describe more scenes of the protagonist fighting. I feel that the number of battles for the protagonist is very small. Most of them are fought by summoned martyrs. Secondly, I personally feel that the combat power system is slightly broken. I hope the author can adjust the combat power system to deepen the character portrayal of Xiao Yan and Yao Lao and make the original characters more accurate. Overall, the author's writing is pretty good. Readers are very happy after reading it. The main line hopes not to deviate from the original work. As a reader, I also hope to see that our male protagonist is a pentagonal warrior. I saw a previous comment saying that it was the first time for the author to write a book. I thought it was great to be able to write like this for the first time. Keep up the good work and I will support it! [Laughing] @

Not bad, the rating is too low. This should be at least an 8 or above book.

Hurry up and update the author. I think it looks very good. I give you a five-star review. Please don't maliciously pull ratings.

This novel can be said to be the best I have ever seen among Tomato Fighters. It is not as brainless as other novels. It does not even have the most basic logic, and there are not many typos. It is also separated from the main line and develops independently. It is really good.

Yes, the subject matter is relatively new and the writing is okay. But where is the Xiao family [thinking]

It's so beautiful. It's the best among fanfics.

It's been a while since I've seen Doupo, it's very nice.

It's very good. It's written according to the development from childhood to adulthood. It's not the kind of sudden skipping.

This book is very well written. Please give the author a boost and update it more. I don't have any gifts for my students, so I can only make up for it with five-star reviews. I beg you, the author

Oh my gosh, this book is really good to read, mainly because the main character is well portrayed.

I have read Chapter 156. Although I have not read Dou Po, the quality of this fanfic is quite good. Although there was a period of time when the protagonist was having a bad time and having fun, it was back to normal. Anyone who likes to read business novels should like this style of writing. But it's a pity that the book is gone. I hope the author can find a good place to resurrect the corpse and look forward to the follow-up plot.

The subject matter is really good, but the technique is like Green Pheasant, and the sense of immersion is not that strong.

Update, @ three times a day, finish the new book as soon as possible

Very good, you will feel very comfortable after seeing it

Author, I give you five stars. I just ask you not to be a eunuch, and the writing is very beautiful. Come on.

I like this type of novel very much. It made me return to Dou Po Shang Qiong. I feel very comfortable that the protagonist did not deliberately change the plot.

Very interesting, thank you to the author

Okay, no copyright, it's a very nice book

It's very interesting. Unlike other authors who just end the story at will, the author gives us a different ending. Praise! ! ! ! ! !

Very good. The system father arranged the tasks for Yuqing's son very well.

This is my first time reading a Dou Po fan novel with this theme. It's quite interesting.

Even though the abbreviation is constantly changing, I can only say that the author is really conscientious, the plot is compact without losing the content of the plot, the writing style is also very good, the book is a good book, the person is a good person, and it is beautiful [Chigua]