After Being Transformed into Cannon Fodder, He Got Together with Bai Yueguang

Super awesome! The plot is not too slow, I really like it. I haven't found a story like this in a long time! Recommendation [Admiration] I just hope the author will update it soon [Flying kiss] [Flying kiss] [Flying kiss] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

The plot is not procrastinating, the characters have their own personalities, and everyone has what they want to do. The protagonist does not give up and is calm. It is good to be calm. It can be done more slowly, but I hope that the protagonist will not collapse in the later stage and the character will not be unfinished! Don't mess up! Don't mess up! (Say important things three times.)

This type of book is hard to find in Tomato's female channels. The writing is delicate, the characters are well-created (Mo Mo is so gentle), and the author's details are full, unlike ordinary male-friendly books. And because it has two male protagonists, there won't be any harem plot like in male videos. All in all, it's very, very good ~ [Adoration] The author should update more, it's not enough [I'm about to cry]

It's very interesting, thank you to the author^ω^ The author must continue to maintain this, and I would like to bring you a treasure book.

The beginning is quite awkward, and the writing is average, but the plot logic is pretty good, the IQ is online, and the villains are not that simple. The author should be young, and he will get better and better as he writes slowly. You can keep watching, it's not bad, you can follow it

Look good. I really like Fu Sinian. Who knows? I really can't refuse a gentle person. Www. Gentleness is the ultimate skill.

Super pretty! The plot is not procrastinating and the characters are well created! They all have brains, and there is no such brainless villain who can be found in trouble. Shuang Nanwen, there are not many surprises, it is just right, not sweet and not cruel [laughs]

(Lightning protection: this is a Narcissus novel) It is sweet and sad, the story is wonderful, and the plot is perfect. Mo and Li fell in love after several lives. In the first life, I died because of my goodness, leaving behind the good me. In the second life, I fell in love with you who was kind and killed you. In the third life, I gave up my paranoia and sealed the devil just to be with you, but you gave up my life because you made me a god. How will I survive without you? Then I will go back in time and start again. We are one and we love each other. You are my kindness and I am your obsession. The main text turned out to be be. Fortunately, the extra chapter is back again, otherwise it would be very uncomfortable.

(It's so beautiful that ten stars are not enough) I was attracted by the introduction [Thinking] It was not interesting at first, but I was a little patient because of the introduction. I started reading, and found that it had nothing to do with the introduction. I was a bit shocked, and it was not a counterattack article. I was surprised and confused. (Real emotions) One page can last a long time. (I thought it was the life of an ordinary practitioner, and I still don't know. The male protagonist is a time traveler. I think the mutated ice spirit root is a bit ordinary, and he has lost his spiritual veins. I can't read [shocked][shocked]) It was very painful to read the first few chapters. It was too boring at the time, so I didn't continue reading. It wasn't until two months later that I started reading again. (Because I had some free time, I expected him not to waste my good time. The result lived up to expectations, and I regretted it a bit. Why am I so stupid that I watched it so late and almost missed a good movie) When I saw the fifth chapter, the male protagonist and the male protagonist finally met. I didn't expect that the male protagonist gradually became stronger. I also looked forward to continuing to watch. I didn't expect it to be so good. The progress of the male protagonist is a bit fast, but I like that kind of fairy cultivator, with a little love😘😘😘[Sending Hearts] I love the character of the male protagonist who is cold and polite with a little flirtation from time to time. The plot is wonderful and too smooth (I hope Li Daglacier can understand his feelings). I have nothing to say. The plot is very exciting. I recommend [Blowing Kisses] [Blowing Kisses] [Blowing Kisses] Big boost to the author! 🌺🌺🌺 The original title was "Her Brother Dressed as the Female Protagonist and the Control Group" which really confused me at the time. I didn't even know who the female protagonist was? I thought the heroine was Tang Yao, but I figured it out later [Send Heart]

I've finished reading it, it's good to watch. But how can I put it, when I saw Tang Mo falling off the cliff in the second half and being constantly eaten, I was really tortured. [Cry][cry][cry][cry] It's considered a spoiler. If you don't mind, you can stop reading this comment. [Learned] The emotional line at the beginning is very good, but at the end, Narcissus pops up. Although it is a very novel idea, it still feels a bit like a sudden idea. I was used to watching the love entanglement between two people before, but suddenly it became my love for myself... Also, the later shaping of the younger sister was not very good, and it felt like she was too much of a tool-man type and was holding her back. Alas, after reading it, I felt that I had experienced an experience inexplicably. It still looks good. [Full] The bitten body was mutilated [crying] I shed tears when I saw it in the middle of the night. The deepest memory.

Four stars are for the plot and writing, one star is missing because I saw Narcissus ➕be at the end (even if we meet again in an extra episode) The first and middle stages of the story were really well written (but the upgrade was too fast). It seemed like I was experiencing his life with Tang Mo. I also really liked Yan Li's way of life because it was very consistent with the real world of cultivating immortals. Later, I saw that Xie Zheng and Yanli were the same person. It was really... Then I saw that Tang Mo and Yanli were also the same person. Well... Finally, when I saw the ending, I let out a long sigh... I can feel that the author wanted to write a very grand world view, but I don't know if he wanted to finish it quickly, so that the end of the article felt a bit sloppy. At the end, the person named Cang and the person behind the scenes were gently brought away. I really felt sorry for the suffering that the protagonist experienced in the early and middle stages. The extra chapter describes the reunion of the two male protagonists, but there are still many people who have not been explained in the follow-up, such as the demon king (I forgot whether he was a king or an emperor) and his wood princess. In the middle of the article, Tang Yao's ending was well written and gave readers an explanation. The ending is much different from what I expected, but the plot and writing are very good. I hope the author's future works will get better and better.

Not bad, not bad. Although the main body of the plot is still relatively old-fashioned, the internal details, emotional interweaving, and character traits are very complete, and the contrast is also very sharp. It will not make people feel tired, nor is it delicate or artificial. The development of the plot is not sloppy, and it will not be affected even if you jump to watch it. The biggest highlight should be that each character's personality, behavior, speech skills and psychology are all well coordinated without giving people a sense of disharmony. The author obviously thought carefully about it during creation. The whole article is not sloppy, the characters have different personalities, and there are not too many "Long Aotian, Mary Su" routines, giving ordinary readers a sense of "everyone is a hard-working ordinary person". The emotional lines are also very realistic. Appropriate initiative and imagination happen to be what a person who has just started to have a love affair has. Entanglement and confusion are also indispensable in relationships. There is no sense of inconsistency in matching different characters. Coupled with the author's speaking skills, each character is more three-dimensional from the side while still being interesting, and it also allows readers to better understand the details of the characters. To sum up, this article has been very complete up to this chapter. It can be seen that the author's intentions are high. I hope that the author can maintain it in the following chapters. I also believe that the author will be more attentive to his love work and give readers a better impression. By the way, I want to vote for the author and get free gifts for my sisters [cool]

It's very beautiful, but there are very few emotional lines, but there are more at the back. The more you look at it, the better it looks. It's so good-looking. My wife is so good-looking [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]It looks good. It looks good. It looks good. It looks good. It looks good. Look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, go home [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen] [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen] [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen] [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen] [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] Did you get your eyes [lick melon]

After reading about 40 chapters, the writing, plot, logic, etc. Are all good, but the male protagonist is too peaceful. He clearly knows that his family is cannon fodder, and just wants to avoid the female protagonist, without any precautions, and seize opportunities. He looks anxious. Later, he knows that the female protagonist is reborn, and he does not take it seriously and does not try to seize the opportunity from the female protagonist. Until the female protagonist harms her. His sister almost died, but he didn't want to take revenge. He just thought about not going to the high-end continent and just avoid the heroine. He looked frustrated, but in the end, she didn't avoid the heroine and sent him to the high-end continent and poisoned him... He went to the high-end continent and was soft on the enemy. Only when he was called upon again did he realize that his attitude was about to change... How long had it been! The old man wouldn't seize the opportunity... He wouldn't be happy even if others asked him to become a disciple. Shouldn't he seize the opportunity to become stronger? The eggs of the spirit beasts rolled to my feet, and there was no contract... It made me scratch my head. The male protagonist's mentality is really "peaceful". I read the review again and found that it ends in be. I can't stand the knife, ugh.

It's really good [shy][shy][shy] I won't say more, I have to hurry up and watch the plot! ! ! I hope the author will update it soon! ! ! ! ! It's really not enough for me [adoration][admiration] Damn, I really like, I really like this kind of double male protagonist, it's totally my hobby, not at all those pitiful little things who are to be ravaged by others, he is really good, this writing style! ! ! Anyway, I really like it, I really like it [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] The author will update it soon, otherwise I will really cry (//∇//) I really want to see it, I really want to see it [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

The content is rich, and Yan Li and Tang Mo have a long road of emotional frustration. It can be seen that they love each other very much. Even if they hurt each other and blame themselves, they don't want the other to get hurt. They have been in love and killed each other for several lives, even though they knew they were the same person, it did not stop them from loving each other deeply, and they abused each other in many ways. Yanli who forgot about each other still fell in love with Tang Mo. They all witnessed their love for each other, and the deputy CP also gained his own love. There are more than 300 chapters, and some of them are understood in some detail. It is still very interesting to read.

Come on, the author, I hope the plot will not be too lazy later on. Although there are a little few emotional lines now, the writing is really good. I really like this article written by the author. Also, I hope the author can give Tang Yao a better ending. Apart from the protagonist, she is my favorite character. Who made the author's Tang Yao touch my heartstrings? [Shy][Shy][Sending Hearts]

I think the extras can be used as the main text, with a complete main plot and explanations for family members and friends, and the most important thing is! ! There is a happy ending, and I feel a little regretful that I didn't see the intimate side of Yuan Yu and Qing Long. I know that Yuan Yu also likes Qing Long from the bottom of his heart, but I haven't seen him express it truly. He has been waiting for Mo Mo to recover from his heartache. I feel a little regretful that the relationship between Qing Long and Qing Long was not described in the later period. It was very frustrating for them.

Mo Mo really makes people like and feel sorry for him. He has many adventures and treasures, but at the same time he has also experienced many difficulties, which I could not have expected, but he has survived them all. Yanli is really good, he gives Mo Mo enough love and security, and is willing to do anything for Mo Mo. He is very worthy of Mo Mo. The plot is still very good. Although there are not so many exciting plots (especially in the early stage, Yan Li hardly appeared [face covering] [face covering]), but the author really portrayed the two people very well. It is worth recommending ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

I really like this novel🥰🥰. This novel is also the first novel that I have rated since I started reading Yang Persimmon. When I first read the first part, I thought it was a male video if I hadn't read the introduction in advance. The plot of the novel is very good. I often told my friends about the plot of this novel when I was in school. The author's rapid update speed is also rare among the novels I have read so far. Every time I come back from school, I can read many chapters. As a student who is squeezed by the school, this feeling is really satisfying. (Just my personal feelings💦) Finally, I wish Yanli and Tang Mo to hold hands and grow old together. ❤️🥰🥰🥰The author is going strong✊, the author is going strong✊, the author is going strong✊! (Say important things three times)🥰🥰🥰 Damn, I really love it🥰! ! ! To be honest, it ended too quickly. I'm looking forward to the next novel👀🥰🥰

Oh, I couldn't get enough of how it ended so suddenly. I really like Mo Mo so much. He is gentle and kind, but not the Holy Mother. Yan Li is only gentle to Mo Mo. Even after knowing it, he still comes back again and again just for the ending of a short love. I just cried to death. Author, you have no heart. If it weren't for the extra story, I would have sent you the blade directly. Bringing the topic back, I have to say that the author's writing style and imagination are very good. The process of Yan Li and Mo Mo getting to know each other and their concepts are very good. The only bad thing is that Yuan Yu and Long Yu did not get married, and Xiao Long cried to death! This plot also twists and turns again and again, but there are foreshadowings. It is a very intriguing plot that makes you guess for yourself. It is so exciting to watch! ! ! ! All in all, this book is really good, both in terms of plot and characters! ! ! Author I love you! ! Publish a new book soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's very interesting to watch. I really like the protagonist's character. The characterization is profound. The plot gradually becomes more complicated and has many twists and turns. The language description is vivid and interesting, and the content is detailed and appropriate. (A bit like Narcissus, the writing is not too awesome)

Personally, I think it's pretty good. It's from a male perspective, but it's more female-oriented. Maybe it's because of the two male protagonists [Thinking]. I don't have three views. It's just that the two male protagonists meet too rarely. [Rolls eyes]. It's the kind of love line that's long. Anyway, it seems like it doesn't have my thunder and lightning. It's just a bit short. I'm looking forward to more updates [Blowing kisses]

It's very interesting. The plot is compact and counter-conventional. I rarely watch ancient movies, but this one is an exception. The ending is really unexpected, which is a bit difficult to reconcile. But the extra chapter is he, and in my heart, the extra chapter's ending is = he. Five-star praise, worthy of Amway [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's really beautiful! Although I haven't finished watching it yet. But this is the first time I have seen a story about cultivating immortality that is so good. It is a book with two male protagonists. The previous ones about cultivating immortality can all be published as separate books. [Shame face] Plus it has two male protagonists. It's hard not to like it [please update]

(Personal evaluation, don't criticize if you don't like it) This book is very good. It gives me the feeling that everyone in the book has a lover, and they love their lover so much that they become obsessed with it. In my eyes, the biggest villain is the heroine. She is the ultimate villain. The other villains are not so much villains as they are just people trapped in love. The author's writing is great and every character is lifelike, but there is one thing that is really sad. [Cry] Cry to death [Cry] [Cry] [Cry]

The quality is very high! This article is neither long nor short, and the plot is very interesting ~ There is no cliché plot, every step is unexpected [laughs] The author's imagination is really strange [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it] The writing is good, and it is pure high-quality in 🍅. It is really comfortable and satisfying to read this kind of article, keep up the good work! Looking forward to the new work [Learned][Learned]

Wow wow wow, it's so beautiful, there are so many twists and turns, I almost burst into tears I really didn't expect their relationship to be like this. Fortunately, it worked out in the end Sprinkle flowers🌸Spread flowers🌸 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸

I really recommend everyone to watch it! It is a very good book. The plot has ups and downs. It may be a little sad in the later stages, but it is very good at the end. It is also a bit sad at the end, because the main character disappears for a while, and then returns later. Anyway, his ending is well written, and the extra chapter is also very good. The author can stir up the emotions of the crowd. Anyway, it makes you emotional while reading. Anyway, it is the kind that you can keep up with. Anyway, I think it is quite good-looking. This is me. I don't have much patience until the end of the book, but I am the only one who has the patience to finish this book. The others were all finished after reading a little, but this book is the one I read completely, except for the time when I first started reading the novel, but this is the only one that I have the patience to finish after reading the novel for a long time.

I was so excited when I read this book [Sending my heart to you] I really like the story lines of Tang Mo and Yanli. I am almost dying of anxiety about their stories [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] The author will update soon Who is as good as me? I raised him for 2 months and finished [Making faces]