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Come on, author, just write according to your own ideas. Your writing is very good now, so don't mess with it.

This book is good, novel, refined, and a different world of martial arts

Thank you all for your support! This is my first time writing about mixed martial arts. There are some shortcomings in some places. I hope everyone can understand! [Fear] Too many people have scolded me, and I can't even stand them anymore.

Ouch, what a great author. This book has given me a very good introduction to the world. Come on, don't stop updating. I hope to see the ultimate in kendo

This mixed martial arts book is good. Come on, the author writes it according to his own ideas. The fighting scenes are already outstanding among similar genres. Come on.

This mixed martial arts book is good and has a bit of flavor It looks great, why is the rating so low?

Let me go, this novel gave me a different feeling. Other novels gave me the feeling of going from weak to strong, one step at a time. But in this novel, ahem, the protagonist rises to the top in one step. As for the relationship, I won't talk about it, it's hard to say. I wasn't optimistic about it at first, but now I can only say that it smells really good.

Come on, author💪 Come on, update Very nice, please try to update it It's only 18 chapters, I'll go, it's too little💩

Having read more than two thousand books, I think this is a good book. Of course, the sense of the main plot is very strong. After all (constantly challenging the top ten sword masters), some details have been ignored. For example, the male protagonist suddenly gained the power of celestial phenomena, but the accumulation of this experience was a little brushed aside (the author actually said it, but I feel that I can write more, such as writing a few years later). The most exciting part is the duel scene, which is good. Yes, I just want to watch the process and the character's personality. This is very good, but it feels like it's a bit fast. As for the system, I don't think it matters. I just come out to have a bubble and advance the plot. As for the male protagonist's emotional scene, what do you say? There are many comments that are disgusting, and the feeling is inexplicable. Everyone has different feelings, but I just like this kind of thing. I have no choice but [currently working on the manuscript]. I have also had a similar experience. After one glance at a girl, you will look at her every time you see her. At first you feel disgusted and repelled, but after you have seen her a thousand times, it is really difficult to forget her. It should be love at first sight, but I am also like the male protagonist. I never said that I like her, but I don't deny it.

The author is awesome. The first part is refreshing and the second part is sweet. It really touched my heart. Personal opinion: Very good, very good. This book is so well written. The addition of the heroine is the icing on the cake. It's great. It's so sweet. Come on, the author is awesome. Update faster! ! !

This book is by far the best-looking mixed martial arts book I have read from Tomato. The protagonist does not always pick up heroines from famous books like others. It suits my taste very well, and there is no system that is better, allowing the protagonist to understand the realm by himself. In the later stage, be sure not to jump around or have a harem. The heroine is also well portrayed.

I finally found a book I can read. It's really good in the same genre [please update]

So pretty! When I first started watching it, it was because of the battle plot, but now I realize that what I like the most is the love plot. I really can't stop watching it, especially when the protagonist asks the Sword and Demon Sect for Huan Huan, he is so damn handsome! ! !

Author, this book is well written. Many people may criticize it, but I think the author should be happy, because when someone criticizes it, it means they have made an opinion. Of course, some people have no choice but to fight. Anyway, if someone criticizes it, it means that the book you wrote is popular.

The writing is very artistic. The only flaw is that the book is systematic.

Let's talk about the advantages first. The protagonist is very well portrayed. He looks like a swordsman in my mind. Although it is an invincible novel, it still has enough experience. You can clearly see the growth path of the protagonist. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The story plot is too compact, and many passionate elements are not fully expressed. The portrayal of the heroine is still lacking, and the character image is too thin. Maybe it was because I originally wanted to write a novel without a female protagonist. Personal suggestion is that the author can strengthen the description of emotional scenes or daily scenes to enrich the image of the heroine. Overall, it is a very good writing practice book for beginners. I also hope that the author will write better and better. [Praise]

It's very well written. Come on, I'll give you some super burning words. All the green ants and flowers have bloomed, asking if the sword fairy is safe at the bottom of the pond. I watch Avalokitesvara and watch at ease, I see the true martial arts and see the true self. I take off the old shackles of yesterday, and today I know that I am who I am.

I think it's so good. I stayed up late and finished reading Chapter 88. I hope the author will update it soon. I feel so empty now. It's really good. The author is great. Please, I hope it will be updated 10 times a day. [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Blow kiss]

I have the following comments on this book, in case there are any misunderstandings. It's just me being stupid. I have not been reading this book for a long time, but I was deeply attracted by its plot. I would like to express some thoughts about the plot. What are my thoughts? All readers should know. I was deeply fascinated by the writing style, but I also found a few imperfections. As for where? I think the author should know. I won't go into too much detail here. . In a nutshell: damn good looking

I don't know about the latter part. I read that the writing style in the previous part is very good. Although it is slightly different from the original work, the characters are described very delicately. I just don't know if it will be unfinished in the future. I hope the author can write more and avoid it being unfinished. I'll put the five-star reviews here first.

I rarely read books about martial arts, but in my opinion it's okay. I originally wanted to give you three stars. Considering that the author is writing for the first time, I'll give you one more star as an encouragement. I hope that better works will be published in the future to satisfy our old bookworms' cravings.

Any place, any time, super perverted, peak crime, the author writes well, author baby~╭(╯ε╰)╮

This book is suitable for people who have no books to read. Simple, easy to understand, pure, Simply ask with the sword, use the sword to ask who is the best in mixed martial arts in the world Don't worry about the rankings. I think it's good to kill time and read slowly.

I have to say that this book is the best martial arts fan novel I have ever read. The rating was very low at first, but now it has an eight rating, which shows that it is not because of my poor taste. If it doesn't fall apart in the later stages, it should be good. This book is pretty awesome. When I first read it, it was rated 7.8, And then it slowly got to 8.4 The day before yesterday. Now I read it and it was rated 7.1 Today. I'm afraid the author may have offended someone.

It looks good, I hope the author will continue to work hard💪

Although the ending is very fast, it is really fun. We fight all the way and have a female protagonist. I like this kind of thing. There is no need to write many emotional scenes, but having a female protagonist feels perfect. The first part of Wenjian is particularly beautiful. After the ascension, it feels a bit bland. The ending is almost okay. At least it will not be like that kind of infinite matryoshka. Come on author [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

This is my first time writing, I'll give it a death sentence. It's just too many people to read it, it's a bit inconsistent, and the balance of emotions and desires given by the system is not used at all. Logically speaking, novices should be more supportive, but it's all the same to me, so I'll count you as a veteran author with a million words. It's weird. Maybe it's because you're not good at writing, or maybe it's because I've only been reading for a few years. The author should also know that his writing is not good, and he was disgusted by the people in the comment area. Let alone what happened in the year in the book, who are you in the book? Who is the novel for? The Balance of Seven Emotions and Six Desires can be read and understood even if you are emotional, but I didn't expect it to be written like this. Even the emotional dramas in Xiuxian novels are better than this one. There is no plot at all. I just decided on the heroine and wrote it in a hurry. As long as you give me more support.

It's pretty good, only suitable for reading as a mindless article

Just for Li Hanyi, I'll give you five stars [laughing evilly]. Update quickly to increase your points.

It's so exciting to watch, please update quickly, brother, 10 updates a day! [Sinister smile]