Urban Film and Television: Cashback Starts with Ode to Joy

Give the author some encouragement. But this point of being a butler will dissuade many people. Writing online articles is a little bit different. The story should be gradual and the characters should become stronger little by little. The author is a bit impatient. In the end I can only say come on.

Really well written

Well written, I like it 😍

I got everything I needed to, it's pretty good, at least I personally like it. Also, can you add some business war plot? I hope the author can think about it. Thanks

Scumbag fandom, no matter what the setting is, just collect it. Don't drive the car to the kindergarten. You can add a few TVs and put in the five-star reviews. Come on, the author. Smile can arrange it.

I saw Chapter 186. This book is good and you can read it. I generally don't read systematic books because they are too exaggerated and the plot is completely unreasonable. But the plot of this book is handled well, and the whole story makes sense. But the system actually gives you a lot. In fact, even if you give a novice a gift package to enhance his physical fitness, and then buy five robots. The protagonist is also invincible and doesn't need that at all. Moreover, given this point, the protagonist still needs to study hard, struggle, and pick up girls. It's more interesting, and I think it could be longer. Personal opinion. Not bad to watch.

Very good, the male protagonist has an online IQ and is very high, and he does things logically. There is no need to worry about collecting a harem. Five stars did not run away. Updates are accelerated.

It's so good-looking. The initial capital of 18,000 yuan is doubled every day to 19 trillion yuan a month. It is also planning to enter the entertainment industry and directly monopolize the entertainment industry. When the charisma is maxed out, he still acts like a transparent person. When the charisma is full, the real estate agent's attitude does not change at all. Wu Mei treats the protagonist as if he is a transparent person. There was an accident in the elevator and the protagonist even sang a song. Let's not talk about the problem of oxygen in the elevator. A stranger said in the accident elevator that I will sing a song for you [awkward laugh]

In your book, the space used by the system is too large, and the protagonist is too dumbfounded. Not very fond of it.

The style of this book is very different, and the author's perspective is novel, which makes people understand the big brother's way of thinking. However, no matter how classic the novel is, it cannot satisfy everyone's appetite. Stick to your own writing ideas, and don't return ideas back and forth. Otherwise, you may lose readers who like this type of writing. If you want to learn from experience and change the way of writing, you can change it when you open the next book. At the end, say "Come on, believe in yourself" [Salute][Salute][Salute] I have followed many, many chapters, and I have almost forgotten that this is a systematic novel. I have been making turrets since the 100th chapter, but it still lacks the ups and downs of the story.

The speed is good, come on

I really like the Ode to Joy fanfic. I've been waiting for this one for a long time and it's already falling apart after only a few dozen chapters. What about the fusion of multiple worlds? Since you are a novice, don't take too big steps. Five Odes of Joy are not enough for you?

The author said that a newcomer wrote the book, and I feel that it is true. The book has a strong flavor of a newcomer. There are several shortcomings in writing astronomy, film and television articles for beginners. One is with the plot. If you watch it more, you will find that some novices will be particularly active in following the plot instead of extracting plot characters and arranging their own plots. Or to put it another way, the protagonist's participation in the plot is not significant. You will find that whether the protagonist participates or not has basically no impact on the plot. This is because novices are afraid that if it has a great impact on the plot, the original plot will not be used later. The second one is that it is too deeply influenced by the original plot perspective. To put it simply, it is licking the protagonist. The protagonist is a billionaire. Among the five beauties, apart from Andy who can take a look at it, the other four are also considered weak? Can the protagonist still blend in and please, and lick the cancer to the bone? Also, the protagonist's attitude towards Fan Shengmei is not right, and he dislikes her worshiping money. Please, the protagonist's most important thing is money, and a woman who can be dealt with with money is such a good breaking point! Then use Fan Shengmei to win five beauties one by one. Isn't this better than going up and licking them directly? Because Wu Mei is the protagonist, the protagonist is a billionaire who licks a few ordinary people. Because Fan Shengmei did not perform well in the original novel, the protagonist hates her. You are writing a novel, so don't always follow the original plot perspective! The third plot protagonist's halo problem. The protagonist of the original plot has a halo over the protagonist, and the end will never be too tragic, and the protagonist does not dare to abuse him. I said, if it really doesn't work, the author should read a few books about Little Liu Bei and learn from them how to torture the protagonist in the plot. It's such a big cheat, but your protagonist is pretending to be innocent. I really can't stand it! Although the shortcomings of a novice are obvious, since you are a novice, it is not easy to give the score too low. Let's give it four stars!

What did the author write about? I've written more than thirty films, but I haven't won a single heroine.

Author, come on, the content of the novel is good, please finish it. Ten million. Don't stop reading halfway. It's not that you don't trust the author, but that I personally have read several novels before. They are all discontinued after writing half of them, so I invite the author. Please do not stop updating in the middle. Please finish writing this book. Thank you. After watching it for so long, I have a question, will this kind of content not be blocked?

Like, harem YYDS

Advantages: Dealing with things without ink or water, solving problems from the source, very comfortable to read Disadvantages: There are too many girls. I can accept the harem, but I can't accept that many. At the beginning, there was only Ode to Joy, so you only accepted two. I think it was handled well. Then the plot unfolded and the heroines of the dramas came in. You have a standard every time. I can accept even if you don't accept them all, but then you let yourself go a little bit, right? Among the piles, the most embarrassing ones are the wife, the lover, the Yang family, and the use of money to pressure people. Writing these will lose the flavor of the original drama, and you will not be able to integrate into the original drama. Above, if you can't keep reading, stop writing.

The overall feeling is pretty good, not quite like opening a book for the first time. On the contrary, I didn't think the robot was as bad as they said, but there was one thing. During the dinner party at the wine shop where Gan Jing and Xu Li were taken down, they said it directly in front of Jiang Haokun and Lu Yuan, and also directly asked Gan Jing to tell the protagonist to take care of her. It always felt that the logic did not make sense. In that situation, the reactions of Lu Yuan and Jiang Haokun were too wrong. It only makes sense logically if you arrange a system to accommodate auras and the like

The author is not careful at all, and starts to lose data in the third chapter. Decorating and buying a house is full of flaws. I really can't stand it anymore. If you don't write the book well, you'll spend all day pretending to be dumbfounded in the comment section. I turned the page to Chapter 9 and couldn't stand it anymore. The beginning is good, but the second chapter starts to be poisonous. It's a character problem of the writer.

All I can say is, happy little pornographic book [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile] Not bad, keep working hard, don't look at other people's faces, just write your own

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It's okay, the character dialogue is a bit lacking, but the rest is okay.

Pretty good, really. I have been watching Tomato for several years, and this is the first time I have encountered such a creative type. I really like it. This article has its own cool articles + city + entertainment industry, which are all integrated into it, which is quite enjoyable to read. In a life filled with so much pressure, it's good to have this little bit of fun to decompress and adjust your mentality. Still a newcomer. I just want to say "Come on, you can do it!" Qin Han Restaurant, housekeeper Zheng Liwan.

There is no doubt that the harem-shaped novel is enjoyable, but the author can consider the attendance rate of the system. Some things are inexplicable. If you want to add a plot, you can consider traveling with the whole family, doing some foreign things, enriching the details of life, and picking up foreign soil 🤔... If you have nothing to do, you can install 13 abroad, and if there is a big problem, let the system handle it (basically, you will have trillions of assets without any big moves, and don't let the system help the dark forces disrupt the situation abroad. Of course, as long as it is not outrageous, you will be happy)

Finished reading "Urban Film and Television: Cashback Starting from Ode to Joy" at 09:28 on April 16, 2023

The plot is fair, non-toxic, and a mindless harem novel. It is not like other novels that want to express and establish themselves. The author made it clear at the beginning that this is a mindless harem novel. It is not hidden. You can read it if you want and enjoy it all the way to the end. It is short and weak.

You can watch Demi-Gods and Dragons when it's mysterious

The writing is okay and the progress is fast. I only searched for the book and started reading it after it was finished. Keep up the good work, author💪!

Viewed 2 times Type fanfic, Shenhao World Variety Film and Television City, Ode to Joy, Mr. Good, Only Thirty, Love Is Back, Carat Lover, Love Apartment, Struggle era modern Goldfinger system, mall Attracting the daily life of Shenhao in the comprehensive film and television city, as well as the entertainment circle literary Rejection is a bit short, and no one will be accepted in the later stage. The writing is good, but it doesn't follow the original work entirely. Take out the characteristics of the character, amplify them, and write a sequel around this point. This way it won't feel fragmented when read. In addition to accepting female leads, she also likes to be a life coach. Some of the concepts mentioned are agreed with, and some can only be said to be logically consistent. The system has a weak sense of presence, with only the beginning and end appearing. After filling up the skills, he disappeared. The second time I watched it was the revised version. It seems that a lot of plot has been deleted and the story is a bit bland. It is recommended that you write less about national-level matters, and that business wars should be separated from the company to expand its scale. The protagonist opened a wine shop (Xiaoyao House), and met one after another, some through picking up leaks, and some through trading. It should be because the setting of the book does not have a specific story line, but advances through the heroines one by one. Male protagonist Yang Yu The character design is in line with personal preferences, he is proficient in music, chess, calligraphy and painting, and his IQ and EQ are both online. Multiple heroines (5+9+4+2+12)

Fan Shengmei has broken up with her family! Is Fan Shengmei like us happy? When a person is capable, he treats his family well and makes their family live better. Isn't this happiness? Fan Shengmei and her family are no longer together! ! ! Alas, I beg to differ