Online Games: a Hundredfold Increase at the Beginning, I Inherit the God King

It can be seen that the author still has good writing skills, but there are still two flaws. First, the writing style is too verbose. To be honest, I really don't dare to define this situation as hydrology directly, but it does give me the feeling of being grindy and long-winded. The second is the plot. The protagonist's path feels a little split. In this kind of novel where online games come to reality, the protagonist often remains anonymous and invisible in the early stage. This is because the protagonist needs to develop in the early stage, in order to avoid being targeted by major forces and affecting the speed of development. (Although the egg is often useless, he is still targeted by the major forces in the early stage). But one key point is that freedom and development are at the core of everything. If it does not affect freedom and development, there is absolutely no need to go to all the trouble and battle of wits to hide oneself. The protagonist and plot you wrote, in my opinion, have gone astray in this regard. They are hidden for the sake of hiding. For example, the answer to a certain math problem requires drawing, so the protagonist bought a set of professional drawing tools to answer the question. It was because he was full. A lie requires a thousand lies to make it true. The protagonist's chaos skills and thousand-change skills are enough to allow him to develop stably under the eyes of various powerful forces. Moreover, the protagonist himself is a pioneer and has the advantage of cheating. In terms of the development speed in the game and the strength among the players, no one can match it. Why is it necessary to make up so many lies to compete with others? It is unnecessary to bother.

It's uncomfortable to watch, there's too much nonsense [sad]

There are holes in the data, and the author's memory may be a little short!

There is too much nonsense. It is very uncomfortable to listen to the book. I say goodbye.

A hundred-fold increase, such an explosive golden finger, but the protagonist is a legendary waste, procrastinating in upgrading, grinding in work, the author is happy with the number of words, and I will give you two words "WTF"

This book is useless. Originally, this book had a lot of nonsense but the plot was acceptable. However, the author has begun to mess up, and now the rating is so low. This book has basically been finished. If you haven't read it, I suggest you stop reading it. This book is not far away from being discontinued. This author has updated it every few days now, and it is obviously broken. It is estimated that this author will stop updating in a month.

So well written.

Too much nonsense, the reborn person is still like a fool, if he has skills, he just has to use his fists to hit him

It's too ink-stained and makes it uncomfortable to read. After reading thirty chapters, the plot doesn't develop much. It's all about various explanations. Are you afraid that readers will be too stupid to understand your book? So you need various detailed explanations. It is not easy for the author to write, so please add one star.

Playing a bad joke really pulls your crotch

Good, good, good

The chapters are a bit confusing, and the language is also a bit confusing when learning the skills of a female priest.

I got water numb and didn't do anything for more than 10 chapters.

What should I say? I have never read a novel as rubbish as this one.

It's full of all kinds of monologues and explanations. I don't know what I saw when I read it [Pout]

Not bad, not bad