After Passing Through the Book, I Became Bai Yueguang, the Yandere Junior Brother

The character descriptions are vivid, the personalities are three-dimensional, and the plot is quite interesting. But I don't understand why You Wuyu didn't get entangled after knowing that Brother Huafeng was Qiao Yuran. I felt that he was too calm and seemed to accept it quickly. It's that he originally hates Qiao extremely and hates him, but he likes Brother Huafeng very much and wants to possess him. For example, if one day you find that your crush is the person you have always hated and hated the most, will you be very entangled in your heart, a little uncomfortable, confused and shocked?

It's really beautiful. Why is it so unpopular? I've been loving it recently. Someone wrote a bloody letter asking for more love scenes between Yu Bao and Xiao You [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

The plot is quite interesting. In terms of characterization, You Changyu's attitude problem may be a bit unfavorable, especially after knowing the protagonist's attitude problem when he fell off his horse. Then there are some plot issues. The plot itself is well written, and the pits dug are basically filled (except for the subplots of Yuhua Immortal Lord and Shen Wen). However, I personally think that the introduction to the demon world is not very clear. What are the demon lords and demon kings in the demon world fighting for? In other words, we basically don't understand the demon world and the major demon world characters. I think we should add more demon world perspectives and occasionally introduce demon world characters (and fill in the plot by the way). The writing is also very good in other aspects, which is great! And... Big update! ! ! By the way, so far we know that You Changyu's state is in the late Nascent Soul stage, but Qiao has almost become a god. It's a bit strange what state You Changyu is now.

Come on, author, I will keep reading (◍ ´꒳` ◍), this work is very interesting

It looks good, don't be fooled by the low score.

The emotional drama of this article is very well written, but there are too many sub-CPs, which makes a single person physically uncomfortable (😭send me one too). The character of the protagonist is really realistic. For a novel written 23 years ago, it can be considered excellent. You Changyu's character is very touching and I love it. Fortunately it was he, otherwise I would have sent the author a razor blade. I have read so many books, and this one is really my favorite Bai Yueguang. When I finish the college entrance examination next year, I will release the You Changyu cosplay😭😭😭

The plot behind it is so exciting, some parts made me blush [Adoration]

I have read many similar novels, but this one is really different. System 333 My Little Baby is really well-behaved and cute and does not cheat the host. It avoids many pitfalls for the protagonist and is always thinking about the host. There is no old-fashioned plot of forcing the protagonist to destroy the cultivation level. Once the protagonist knows the vest that the protagonist has suffered, the hatred and other things are gone. The other god system does not reveal any trouble. It is really sweet, just a pure and passionate young couple. I really like the author's last words, "Life is so bitter, and there is no need for novels to be so bitter. They might as well be sweeter."

It's beautiful😊, if you like it, I will follow it until the end~

Highly recommended, it really suits my taste |･ω･｀) The only drawback is that there is too little! Woohoo, wow, come on!

I especially like this kind of forced love for ancient cultivators and yanderes. I have to look for it for a long time every time [crying]. Finally, I met someone who suits my taste again. The author will give you a lot of support. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

I love this writing style. It's really beautiful. Every setting touches my heart. They are all what I like to read. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's not bad. Overall, it's at least finished like this, but Wen Yuhua's character design and overall logic are hard to describe. Um... I feel so uncomfortable. I really feel a little awkward, so I gave it four stars. Don't comment. After watching it, I felt good and uncomfortable, not sad. It seems to be a little inconsistent with my three views. I think I am righteous, but I just don't mean anything. All bad people should be punished, which is different from what I imagined. It's really uncomfortable and awkward! ! ! ! ! !

I finished reading it in one go. Although the man holding the knife in the middle was always looking at it with his mouth [awkward laugh][awkward laugh], but the rest is happy, haha, mainly because I like to read this type of article, it's good👍🏿, give it a five-star rating, and keep up the good work in the future

It's really good to watch. The protagonist's character doesn't blindly regard the other person as an ancestor. He has his own ideas. The writing style is also very good and the plot is smooth. In short, I really like Qiao Yuran's character! I also think the author's writing style is quite good!

Super super good-looking, I really like it. I especially like Qiao Yuran and You Changyu. The ending of the story is a bit sad. I thought You Changyu only has seven years to live and is about to die. I didn't expect it to be he at the end. I almost cried to death. I also like the senior brothers Shen Wen and Wen Yuhua. Brother, I actually don't know if the senior brother likes the junior brother, because he left the junior brother behind and ascended on his own. Later, after the junior brother's death, he collected his loose soul and raised him for hundreds of years, and accepted him as his apprentice. Later, they liked him and got together, and probably also liked him. Junior brother, otherwise we wouldn't be together. I just don't know that my senior brother said he has no regrets, but I still don't know the reason. I also really like the original heroine Yan Shuangyue. I think she is very cute and loyal. I also like Bai Qingqing and Xu Qing. Curious Jiang What happened to Qiu and Jiang Ji in the end? Is that black snake Jiang Ji himself? He also feels sorry for Jiang Qiu's experience and likes Junior Brother Liu Heng very much. I wonder what his future will be like and whether he has found his partner [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

It's so exciting, cheers to the author!

Oh my God, these are so realistic. I really hope there will be a comic version. I will definitely follow it! ! ! ! I hope the author will consider it and please give it some thought [top post][top post][top post][top post][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

I felt that the rating of this book was not low, so I read it, but the logic at the beginning of this article is not very good. There are many contradictions after just reading a few dozen chapters. It may also be due to the author's inexperience at the beginning. Maybe it will be better in the future, because I think it has a lot of good reviews.

Emm... I don't know how to describe it, but it's a very good novel with two male protagonists [face covering]. The author's writing style is very good, and the descriptions of certain aspects are really great. I hope you will continue to work hard and look forward to your new book! [Laughing out loud]

Very good, I rarely read a complete article. Although there are many shadows of novels in this article, the plot is not bad and the length is moderate. Although it is a bit unreasonable in the early stage, it is okay in the later stage. Although I hope they will be for several deputy CPs, they failed, especially Shen Wen and Wen Shuhua. When I watched Erha, I was moved by their feelings. Now thinking about it, I suddenly feel that they are good, but they all failed... Although, overall, it is better than many authors. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, it's pure nonsense, you are right to refute it.

I haven't finished reading some of them yet, but I will finish them! Zundu looks great! Is there anyone who can tell me about when it will be spoiled [crying][crying][crying], I really love being spoiled! ! ! !

I like it a little bit but I don't like it anymore. I really want to watch it. I love watching it, but it's a little lacking.

Each has its own characteristics, the relationship between the characters is clear, and the emotional changes are clear-cut. Jiang Qiu is very cute, Liu will repay his kindness, and Qiao is still very sensible in other aspects. Except for love, he is really half-knowledgeable.

After watching it, it's really good. When I didn't lose the armor in the early stage, I actually thought that something would happen after the armor dropped. But after the armor dropped, the emotional line became more obvious. Hahaha, it was great. In the later stage, it was a bit broken, but I can accept it. I actually cried a little when I saw Xiaoyou said that he wanted his senior brother to forget about him. Sure enough, the greatest love is selfish love. I hope my lover lives well. When I thought about it later, I was really a little overwhelmed. I was really afraid that there would be another big sacrifice. The extras are also very interesting and the subtitles are very enjoyable. Overall, this novel is really good. I felt satisfied after reading the whole thing.

This is the first time I write a book review for this book. The description is so powerful that I rolled on the bed. The water is not clear, but some links are shielded and the scale is just right. It's great. I love reading it. I'll wait until I finish this one before reading other books [Blow a kiss]

Anyway, the more I watched it, the more I enjoyed it, and the more I watched it, the more interesting it became. Although there is something wrong in the front, you can generally guess what it is. Generally speaking, this book is good. I have been anxious about reading for several months and searched and searched for it. Finally, I found this novel that I have finished (there is another one, but it has not been updated yet, so let's see if the finished one is good or not). The last time I finished reading a novel was last year... The novels I have read in the past ten months have all been abandoned after reading a little bit. I just finished reading this book. It's already good for me [blowing kiss]

It looks good, it looks good, some things happen naturally, like Shen Wen's emotional change when he found out that his senior brother had not completely left, and left a trace of his soul in the lower world. Alas, poor Wen, fortunately they are together after all.

Alas, the author. I am extremely lucky to come across such a wonderful novel. Well, it is very interesting and interesting. I believe that the people in the novel, You Changyu and his "Taoist couple" will be very happy. I wish them the best!

The writing is very good. I read Chapter 66 in one go. I originally wanted to read it before commenting, but I didn't expect that I haven't been found out after wearing my vest for so long [face covering]. Now that I see how vicious Gong is to his senior brother, I'm really curious about what Gong would think when he discovers that the person he likes the most is actually the person he hates the most [currently working on the manuscript]