People in Konoha, Early

It's a pretty good Naruto story, but it doesn't copy the original plot. I definitely support this kind of fanfic that has its own ideas and independent storyline! Another small suggestion: the text explaining the author's knowledge of Naruto can be placed separately outside the chapter, so that it will not affect the flow of the story.

Good-looking, good-looking, really good-looking

Very good, follow a few more chapters and use your smart brain.

It's really good. The author put his heart into it, but it's a little too short. The simple world of Naruto is more beautiful than the later ones, but the protagonist improves too quickly and lacks some difficulties and foreshadowing. Overall, it looks good, better than mainstream system streams.

What does Naruto mean? Just punch in and dig your way out with just one sentence Why is your combat effectiveness getting worse the further you go?

It is a relatively good-looking Naruto story. There is no problem with logical thinking and integration in the Hunter World. At the same time, it shows that the Naruto World is a secret realm or a small world. After all, the three major fairyland blessings are small secret realms. At the same time, the place where humans live in the Hunter World is only a small area. When you look at the panoramic view of the Hunter World, you can see how big the Dark Continent is.

Not bad! Just a little less! Fattening is watching! Come on, come on, come on!

Really good, keep up the hard work!

The author is really awesome

It's so well written, come on✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

Well written, keep it up! I just write too slowly, one page a day. Can you speed up the process? The author is great.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking The plot is good and very innovative

A belated five-star, the author should work hard to write more words [laughs]

Looks good, come on

It's so beautiful and the setting is novel.

Very cool novel

The concept is okay.

Come on, I hope you won't be a eunuch

Very nice and seems reasonable

Very nice, keep up the good work! ! !

Good looking, super exciting

Good. Excellent writing

Wonderful and imaginative

Although the number of words is small, it is interesting to read

It's really good, cheers for the author.

Nice! I hope the more I write, the better

Give a five-star review

Author, your writing is really good but you have found the reason why it is not very popular. One update a day is too little, at least 3 chapters a day

More than a dozen chapters have passed since the end, and the previous ones are very good.

The imagination is OK, but there are many typos and the sentences are not smooth. I like the author who has a lot of imagination [please update]