I Told You to Die, but I Didn't Let You Survive

The content is okay. Many of the plots are very funny combined with the commentary. However, I would like to warn those who want to read the harem. This book has only one female protagonist. The other girls are just friends with the protagonist. Those who want to read the harem should check out as soon as possible.

A very good book. I think this book deserves 9 points. The rating is a bit low now.

I really like it. Although the first few pictures have the feeling of being a cliche in the Internet, I really got through it. The relaxed and interesting style is true. Don't talk about cultivating immortals and not writing about cruelty. This one focuses on humor and humor to write those truths, just like comparing Su Qing and re0. As for whether the relaxed and humorous style can be accepted by others, I really like it. (This is just my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it) Big cheers for the author!

I really like it. This book is really good and interesting. I think every day when I read it, I think "Can you break off your limbs and be reborn again?". There are really many humorous places in the book. I like to read it when I am in a bad mood.

The beginning is indeed a bit cliche, but after the fourth film it becomes interesting, and the more you watch it, the more addictive it becomes. Without him, the single word is 6

The setting is quite new, the style is funny, and the plot is okay. Chapter 108 is very interesting. I hope it won't collapse later. I also hope the author will speed up the update, otherwise I will forget the plot after a long time.

Not a robot, this book is really good. I am willing to give a good review simply because I found this book interesting and willing to continue reading, nothing more. But to be honest, this kind of subject seems to be a good selling point, but in fact it is difficult to write. Because it is a relaxed and happy style, and it is a Dihua subject, it is still very imaginative. It is similar to the Dragon King novel about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. If there is no good idea, once the writing is long, the Dihua plot will appear like a matryoshka doll, and it is not possible to come up with fresh content all the time in terms of laughter. I have read many similar books, and they all have a fairly attractive beginning, but then I find that I can't continue writing, so I start to drag it out or simply end it. But this book has at least so many chapters, and the overall impression is still very good. Even when it is obviously more enjoyable, it makes me feel happy instead. I hope the author can continue writing and look forward to seeing the follow-up plot.

Well written, very interesting, rewarded I accidentally sprained my foot when I was reading your book on the overpass. How can you compensate me?

It is an anti-routine book. It writes down all the common routines and then does the opposite. It is very interesting. There are a lot of foreshadowings, and the overall plot is also very enjoyable. Lao Deng is also an intensive Internet surfer and wrote this novel specifically for fun. The only drawback is that the update is a bit slow. I can't help but want to watch more every day. I miss Lao Deng's Jiba [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry]

It's very good, the writing is funny, and it goes against the grain. I just got a little bored after reading more than a hundred chapters in a row, all thanks to the author's writing style and skillful jokes. Realm skills and so on are not very important in this book, and the connection with the Son of Destiny is actually not very close later on. Except when there is a bug, you may forget that there is such a person. You won't feel anything about the protagonist's improvement in strength. What the protagonist does can make you laugh, but after you laugh, you'll be at a loss, and there's nothing impressive about it. The author should sort out the outline and find ways to deepen the main line. Overall, you can read it, the writing style is funny, the first chapters are eye-catching, and it's a good way to pass the time.

In order not to affect the book recommendation score, the reviews are all five-star reviews. This review ends at the update of Chapter 413. It is a masterpiece, with both traditional and anti-routine plots, and belongs to the master of villain (?) Cool writing style (this refers to the genre, not the content). However, the description of the characters is very flesh-and-blood, the writing is smooth and humorous, and the logic is normal. It is interesting to see a lot of funny jokes and complaints around the protagonist. The author's emotional drama is well written. Comfortable and refreshing: It has a climax, a refreshing point, sensationalism, a plot, and can create a plot; the characters are flesh-and-blood, humorous, and anti-routine. Compared with similar traditional anti-routine refreshing works, it is more outstanding. Poison point avoidance: Although the logic is normal and the content is rich, there is no big poison point so far (the emotional scenes in the early stage are a bit sudden, and some people may feel uncomfortable. But they can be taken over in the middle and later stages), but there will always be some people who have high laughs and have no interest in the emotional dramas, and some ghosts who are cultivators of fairy tales will substitute other works to make outrageous remarks. However, such excellent works are rare. It is recommended that you read the entire text carefully before discussing, so as not to cause unnecessary misunderstandings and disturb the mood of reading. Recommended wave: ★★★★ (enduring and good product) Let me reiterate: My personal four-star recommendation does not affect book recommendations. Pretending to be a five-star review, this review is updated as of Chapter 413

Okay, okay🥰🥰🥰, it would be better if you could pay attention to the main plot rhythm. There is a plot in the middle of Dan Ranzong that drags on a bit. Maybe it's because of the author's first book, but the first few chapters didn't reach the level of excellence, which resulted in the beginning not being as exciting as the rest😡The author, you're doing yourself a disservice. (This can also be seen from the fact that many of the low-scoring reviews have a shorter reading time) It's rare that a funny article can also be logically self-consistent😘There are also a lot of laughs in the baggage. It's a book suitable for relaxing in your spare time.

Let's not talk about whether it's good or not. The plot is quite funny, isn't it? Everyone has their own things to do, and how can you have so much free time to read carefully? It's not easy for the author to be able to laugh at you in your spare time. Moreover, the writing style is not considered a master, it is still above average. In fact, the content settings are okay, it can be quickly accepted, and the writing is also very good. I would like to support the author here. It is still very good.

The writing is interesting and warm. I would like to call it one of the top three good books on Tomato. Tomato has not had such a good book in the past year [KISS] Tomato is indeed a very good book. It is much better than those books that are famous but are actually written by novices. It is very brain-burning and my CPU is dry.

It's great. The subject matter is novel and there are basically no loopholes. It can be highly recommended. However, the shortcomings are also obvious. The most important thing to pay attention to in a fairy tale is the passage of time. The author has written more than two hundred pictures like this for about a year and a half before the main character in the article. This is just my rough estimate. It may not be a year and a half. This will definitely lead to the feeling that the writing is perfunctory or the completion is hasty when it takes a lot of time later. At least if you follow the current plot. If I write it, I feel it will take at least two thousand chapters to complete, but although the timeline is slow, the content is substantial. It depends on personal preference. Some people think it is a lot of nonsense, but I personally think that these are all for shaping the character image. This is also a good point of this work. The character creation is perfect, and everyone has a distinct personality. Even if I read it after a hundred chapters, I can still remember the characteristics of each character. I am very optimistic about the author and hope that this book will not be eunuch.

In fact, the writing is quite good and quite interesting. There is no plot that suppresses the protagonist and makes him humiliate and be ridiculed and looked down upon by everyone. The plot is quite good, it is anti-conventional and interesting. I like it very much. There is a small highlight, that is, the description of women has all kinds of delicate bodies, coquettish drinks, and pretty faces. This makes me feel a little uncomfortable. Can't you just write it normally? In fact, other things are fine. There are both men and women who are strong in it, and the women are not the stereotyped delicate images in male-video novels. In fact, overall, there are no outstanding points in other places, and it is also very interesting. Except for this, when women are written, they have a pretty face, a slight blush, a slender body, and a coquettish shout. This is really a bit weird. If you emphasize that this man is strong and handsome every time you describe him, you will feel pretentious. Just a little suggestion, just write it normally. Really, there is no need to add the word "jiao" to highlight the softness of women, or in other words, you only need to describe it in specific situations, such as when dating, when this delicate state needs to be highlighted. Even the female general is described as "jiao". I really can't stand it. Especially Jiang, who uses such adjectives every time she appears, which makes people feel weird. In fact, it doesn't need to be described in this way to make people feel that Jiang is a very beautiful girl. She may also have an emotional scene with the male protagonist, so I focus on the description. However, in terms of my own reading experience, because every time I wrote about Jiang's face, there were all kinds of pretty faces and slender bodies, which made it a little uncomfortable to read, but the other plots were really interesting and interesting. As a result, after reading more than 300 chapters, I couldn't help but skip the book when it came to Jiang. As I read, I gradually missed a lot of the plot. So even though this book I thought was interesting and the plot was okay, after reading about 500 chapters, I reluctantly gave up the book. For me, this is actually a pity, but other people who don't mind this place still recommend reading this book. After all, it is really well written. I am also following another book of the author, and I am looking forward to that one growing up quickly. The other one is also very good. I came to read this one because I liked the writing style of the other one. As for this one, I may not read it anymore, so I will come back and continue reading.

I think it's quite funny. I'm quite happy to see it. It's good with a little bit of jokes. I think it's quite good.

It is a rare masterpiece. The language of the novel is interesting and relaxed. It does not have the bitterness and hatred of classic novels. It is very suitable to my taste. The description of the characters in the novel is also rich and full. There is a female protagonist, and there is only one female protagonist. The emotional scenes are very sweet. For me, this is a bit of a negative point (personal taste), but objectively speaking, the emotional scenes in this novel are obviously not as awkward as those in other novels. Those who like emotional scenes can go for it. It doesn't matter if you don't like it. Apart from the emotional scenes, there is a lot worth watching.

High score, Humorous but not nonsensical (counterexample: a street stall guy who has no lower limit for a small amount of money). The protagonist has an IQ, it's not a forced drama (counterexample: the IQ of a time traveler in his 20s crushes a thousand-year-old monster, which is outrageous). There is no saint, no harem, no dog food. The emotional description is just right, and it doesn't look like it was written by a newbie. It can be said that the author is very talented in this aspect. The logic is rigorous, and every time you feel a loophole, there is a foreshadowing behind it. The details are in place, the words are correct, and there are no typos (this is a basic requirement, but some books have a lot of typos, and the author doesn't even remember what he wrote before) The supporting characters are also well described and all have their own characteristics. By the way, although I support the protagonist and Junior Sister Jiang rationally, the CP of Junior Brother is too annoying. It's finished. The novel is really good. It's worth pursuing me for so long. After watching the ending, I felt a sense of loss after a long time and didn't want it to end. But there are also shortcomings. The writing style of the novice author is indeed poor. I spend most of my time listening to novels, which are fine for storytelling, but when reading, they feel too wordy. The effective content of a whole chapter can be summarized in a few sentences. There is too much nonsensical humor, and large sections of text are just jokes. I guess many people cannot accept this. To sum up, although this book is not top-notch, it fully meets my preferences. I like the humor, foreshadowing, plot, protagonist group characters and emotional lines.

The content is pretty good, but a little short. The only pity is that I discovered it too early. If I had discovered it later, there might have been more content and it would have been more enjoyable to watch. But like this, I suddenly stopped reading halfway through, and I feel really bad. I really want to give a bad review, but I'll give it a bad review. I'm sorry, it's such a good-looking content. [Cover face]

It's finally tied. It's really good. The whole book feels more like a group portrait, a systematic cultivation of immortality in a non-traditional sense. The supporting characters such as Master Li Fu, A Yuan, Ling Gui, Yuan Sheng (no, we can't say they are supporting characters, they really have too many shining points, these characters are really charming). In the author's writing, every character has his or her own shining point, including the little villain. The only heroine, Jiang Jiang, and the protagonist's relationship and description are the type of mutual progress and help that I rarely see in immortality novels. The overall atmosphere of the whole text is quite relaxed, and there are a lot of abstractions, but when it's time to burst into tears, it's really uncomfortable for the viewer. The author's writing style is good, and the foreshadowing and details are well controlled (the foreshadowing will be specially marked, Lao Deng is so meticulous!)

For me personally, this routine of being a villain and pretending to be destiny is relatively new. The content is more light and funny rather than cultivation, exploration, etc. Although it is obvious that the writing style is not mature enough, the author's cultural level should be relatively high, and the words and sentences are very suitable; There are many flaws in the system settings. I hope the author can think better and not always use this method to develop and improve the protagonist.

This is the most comfortable novel I have read on Tomato. It may not be the best written, but it is indeed the most interesting. There are countless works on these themes, such as Funny Cultivation, System Rebirth, and Bug Master, but the author combines these materials Not only is it not blunt when we are together, but it makes you smile knowingly at the right time. As a comedy work, it does not go down three roads without peeing. As a system text, it is not full of fun, and the bug is not a cliché brain teaser, but It more reflects the author's ingenuity. Fang Chen obviously has some arduous missions and a secretive past, but the description is calm and free and easy. Through the crazy master and the funny Mahayana people, it reflects the difficulty and hardship of the protagonist. Against this background, In Fang Chen's whimsical and amusing daily life, there are also the selfless love of his parents for licking the calf, the youthfulness and haziness of Jiang Jiang, the harmony with the care of his friends, the warm but not empty daily life, and the anti-kingly way of cultivating immortals and saving the world. It is really an interesting novel.

The subject matter is relatively new, telling the story of the protagonist and a group of destiny's children. It is currently not popular probably because the number of words is still small and Tomato does not give much traffic and recommendations. As for the content, I think the protagonist will eventually meet the destiny's children. In the early stage, there is no need to hide [eat melon] if they don't meet. To say the least, the protagonist has to be Kill the Sons of Destiny, but as long as you die in the hands of one of the Sons of Destiny, then in the early stage you can let go, let go of pretending, let go and feel good, there are many of them in small sects. In the later stage, when the protagonist grows up, he will always meet more Sons of Destiny, just pick one to kill, and he will not really die [eating melon] The plot of this book may be a little dull compared to other books of the same genre (not that it's not good to watch). Compared to other books, the protagonist Fang Chen is not as crazy as Gu Lao Mo, does not have Qin Feng Dog, does not have a harem, and his relationship with the heroine is not very exciting. Fang Chen's experience is also like a real "supporting character", without a very dazzling appearance or unlucky luck, and the book does not overly belittle or belittle the chosen ones. From the beginning to now, I think what attracts me is this "bland" feeling. This is also the charm of Fang Chen's personality, which is low-key but very... Dazzling. (If your Chinese literacy is not good enough, you may be lacking in expression [face covering])

The book is fun, and I really like the interaction between the protagonist and other characters. All the "people" around the protagonist are "talented", and the "people" around the protagonist are also "people". It has the same dialogue as a sitcom, and is not so deliberately funny and funny. It uses contrast and absurdity to create a sense of laughter. If you have read the cultivation chat group, you can try it. The structure of the laugh points is somewhat similar, using a new type of cultivation to create a sense of picture in the traditional cultivation. Of course, not all the plots are smooth, but overall it is very good. I like it very much. I would like to urge the author to update it. I also hope that the protagonist will finally be alive and playing with Jiang Jiang under the master's skills. If Jiang Jiang is left a widow, you will be unkind and I will be unjust. Just wait for the blade to be sent!

Rarely, I really like the setting inside! Heroine and heroine! (I really hate love-minded people) It's so everyday (it feels a bit watery), and there are so many children of luck? Some people just show up once. Also, maybe there are too many details, time passes so slowly in the novel, only two months? Forget it, I can accept it. I seriously thought about the reason why I felt tired when I saw the back, and it should be these two. However, I would rather spend more time reading this novel than not finishing it because you are anxious about progress! I'm optimistic about you~

I listened to most of it. I think the heroine setting is very good. I think those who like to read without a heroine can also accept it. Of course, you can just throw away some parts. This book is very smooth, so I won't like it very much, but it is good for daily comfort. There are also some funny plots in it. The comment section is also okay, there is no poisonous fog. Then, I only spent 3 nights to listen to it. You can't do it, author, it's too short and weak. Support! Update soon. Sometimes the author will interact in the comment area. If you are not confused, come and ask me. Also, I won't specify whether it's a single female lead author. It's just that I like single female protagonists, and my personal opinions are different. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] This script definitely can't be about a harem. There's only one that stands out. I guess it's Yi Ji or that ginger guy. I'll add more updates. I've finished reading it. It's so boring.

Please, two men are ambiguous [smile][smile][smile][smile] The male protagonist is step by step, curved,, that kind of, refer to the scumbag~∑~~∑This way, it is great, very cool! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I read this book five times and never got tired of it. Really nice. To be honest, one review said that 99% of the books on Beyond Tomato are good, while many of the books are well-known and highly rated but of poor quality. The writing is very good, it doesn't feel like writing a book for the first time at all. The plot is interesting and there is a lot of fun. It's not the kind of embarrassing fun, it's the fun part that really makes you laugh and keep you awake. And he is very good at foreshadowing. A funny line in chapter 100 will be dug up for you in chapter 1000. Can you believe it? ? As for the procrastinating reviews, I still think that reading a book is all about a sense of immersion and detailed descriptions. The book is definitely recommended. Below are some spoilers for the mid-review content. Spoilers, spoilers, read with caution! ! ! In addition, if you have not seen it and want to know more, you can comment and I will answer it. . About love lines It's hard to say whether it's a single female lead. There is a single female protagonist, but there isn't much of an emotional arc to be honest. It is more like a group portrait novel. The emotional line is more about the protagonist and other characters redeeming each other rather than falling in love. Just talking about falling in love, everyone has different views on this aspect. I felt that the writing was well-written and the reading experience was very good. It was not the type where a lot of lame love scenes were inserted in the middle of the text. [About the protagonist always dying at the beginning] It's obvious that the author was lazy in using the template at first. But the subsequent plot is slowly coming back to full circle. Judging from the current foreshadowing, it may involve the inheritance of some ancient bloodline, and the possibility of always dying is probably the path paved by the protagonist himself. In addition, it's not that the author made the character brainless. The protagonist's crazy master said to the protagonist when he was awake, don't always think about sacrificing yourself. It was quite touching. He was very good at shaping characters. [The plot logic is not smooth] Again, if you follow it for a long time, you can clearly see that the author's ability to shape the world is constantly improving. The logic problems that were obvious in the early stage slowly began to be solved around chapter 800, and they were all solved, which I didn't expect. Imagine a sentence is introduced in Chapter 1100, and then there is a (100) in brackets, saying that this sentence has foreshadowing in Chapter 100. Pure and pure. [Writing becomes worse in the mid-term] It's most likely because I'm tired. I have nothing to say when criticizing. However, there was a period of time in the middle where it could be seen that he was adjusting his condition, and then he got better again. It belongs to the kind of person who is very culturally literate but is writing a novel for the first time. Rhythm In the early stage, the rhythm is relatively easy to control, because the book has just started and the world has not yet spread out. The early and middle stages are very slow, suitable for slow-paced lovers. There are many details written and the jokes are also very interesting. There was a period of time in the middle and late stages when I was obviously tired of writing. We are working hard to revise the updated chapters, and the pace is pretty good, but the change is a bit too fast. I think it is because there are too many people who dislike the slow pace, and the author himself is impatient.

The author is very good at foreshadowing. The foreshadowing in this book, the battle of wits between Emperor Li Xian, Emperor Ling, Emperor Fang and Jie Jie is an indispensable part. At first, I thought Dao Dao was just a simple madness, but he turned out to be the number one figure in the fairy world with a super high IQ. Yu Qi seemed to think he was just a simple madness, but he also concealed it, and the character was full of charm. In this book, the friendship between Li Fu and Fang Chen, and Fang Chen and everyone around him is sincere and touching. In my opinion, this book can be said to have an extremely serious main line on top of the typical slow-paced comedy novels about immortality, but it does not appear to be fragmented, which shows the author's level.