To Seek Immortality, Start by Taking Care of the Loli Boss

It's the first time I've seen this style. It's quite interesting. Good luck to the author [Sending my heart] Is this book not allowed as a gift? Oh, I was blind and didn't see it

This is the first book about immortality that I've seen with a female protagonist. It's pretty good.

It looks good, but it's a pity that there are not many people. Come on, the author. If it were sweeter, more people might read it. The style is very unique. I hope the next one will be even better [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Like]

Not bad, the plot is not exciting, and there is not much intrigue. It may not make people's emotions fluctuate too much with the plot, but it is quite good to watch for leisure. It's a bit like Shen Congwen's prose novel style, but it is an online novel after all, and there is still a plot. In fact, the author's style is more suitable for writing rural short stories. Writing two seriously and submitting them to those short fiction publications can also be used as a practice for writing. Of course, not many people write online novels in this style, and it is true that half of the novels in this prose style are short and medium stories. If the author wants to bury a deep main line and write a full-length novel, it is not easy to grasp. I hope the author can work hard, if there is an opportunity, there will be a chance to become popular. I also like to use this style of writing when I write short stories. I would like to support the author with some gifts [smile]

The style is quite unique and looks quite comfortable. Moreover, does the author really not consider writing something sweeter? [Eating Melon]

It's pretty good, although the writing feels a bit immature. But be careful of all kinds of criticism, have a good attitude, and understand that it is impossible for everyone to like a book, just write it according to your own ideas.

Great, come on author, this is the heroine... Reject childish aesthetics, start with you and him

It can be seen that this is the first time for the author to write a novel, and he still doesn't know how to use swordsmanship, so everyone can follow it with confidence. If his writing skills improve in the next year and he learns to use swordsmanship, just pretend that I didn't say anything. In short, author, work hard and try not to end the story, no matter you choose swordsmanship or sweetness (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

After reading it for a while, I feel it is good. The writing style is a bit green and the logic is still flawed, but overall it is good. If you keep it for a while, it can be used as a book.

There are very few books of this style. Come on, don't go into the palace to serve your master [laughing evilly][laughing][face covering]

It's really worth reading, it's very ordinary, but also very exciting. Unlike the heroines in other books, who just mindlessly send the male protagonist a favor when they see it. The love here is the love of a simple and normal person, just like the love you like someone, it is pure love, very good Don't write so sweetly, just keep it like this. It's not bad to have a knife once in a while [laughing]

Personally I think it's well written, that's why the protagonist is not interested in the loli heroine [laughing evilly] [almost crying]

The book is a good book, and the pen is very new (the writing is not very good. I was interested at first, but it turned out to be boring). If you use this theme to write about the end of the world, the traffic will definitely be more than this book [face covering]

Come on, author, the book is very good, please update it quickly (no), add it to the bookshelf and prepare to keep it for a while

A very novel style, please continue to work hard [thinking]

This is better than some lonely cultivators, with fewer regrets and more free and easy. That is, when the heroine can grow taller, reject the childish aesthetic, start from you, me and him [Chigua]

This is the first time I've seen a female protagonist in Chang Sheng. Good luck!

Good book, other books like Tang Monk are very good

The writing is good. This is the first time I have read this type of novel. The main reason is that the pace is a bit slow and it is difficult to guess the plot behind it. Is there an outline of the novel that the author has made? I am definitely following this book.

Five stars, the writing is okay. I haven't been able to find a new book for a long time. At least this one meets the requirements. I don't have high requirements. It's good writing. It just needs to be readable and not too toxic.

It's not bad. It's a pretty relaxing story. I haven't read much about Changshengwen. It feels like multiple short stories tied together. Overall, it's a bit messy. It's a pity that some chapters that could be described in more depth are ended hastily.

One thing to say, this book may not currently have a high rating (7.3) Among longevity novels, but the plot is quite unique, highlighting the daily and ordinary aspects. This is an advantage and of course a disadvantage. I don't recommend everyone to read this novel. Why? Because judging from the more than 60 chapters so far, the plot is very bland and the rhythm is very slow. If you read it for a long time, you will easily stop reading it. Overall it's pretty good, give it four stars. Seeing that the rating has increased to 8.0, I will add one star and give it five stars. Well, I still don't recommend it. This is a very daily longevity novel. It can be said that there are not many ups and downs. The description of the supporting characters is not enough, so that the supporting characters' exit does not show the appearance of the knife at all. Of course, this has both advantages and disadvantages. So after a long time, it will become boring, but reading two chapters a day is quite soothing.

It's a very good book. The plot is not too twisty and twisty, but it is more reasonable. It can insert some funny clips from time to time, which is quite interesting. The longevity novel is slow to develop, and I personally feel that it is better among the longevity novel series. It's the heroine. What should a lolicon do if she finds out that she is not a lolicon [laughing and crying], now I feel that if I time travel, I might regard Zhao Ling'er as my sister or daughter [face covering]

It's okay, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists in the early stage before the showdown is actually more interesting than later after the two express their feelings to each other. After reading it, the later author should have let himself go. It can be said that it was okay until the male and female protagonists cooperated to rob. After that, you can really say that you can see it all at a glance. To put it bluntly, this immortal, that immortal, this emperor, this emperor, this saint, that saint are not as good as the original Great Spirit Immortal Sect.

It's okay. Overall, it's pretty good so far. I haven't read much of the longevity novels. This is the first time I've seen an longevity novel with a female protagonist. And it's also a single female protagonist, [eating melon].

Five stars. I haven't seen such a good-looking novel in a long time. Although the pace is a bit fast in the later stages, in general, it satisfies all my fantasies about cultivating immortals. Half farming, traveling around mountains and rivers, not a virgin, two funny comparisons, and the heroine is really good at giving birth [laughter]

Well, from a general rational point of view, this article has a little smile in daily life, is embellished with the storyline, the shaping of the characters, and the description of some scenes are also wonderful, so it can be considered a good one.

Personally, I think this book is well written. As long as there are no major poisonous points later, the score should be above 8 points.

It looks good, but it doesn't have a knife. It's just because of its longevity that it's a bit cruel. The plot of becoming an immortal later was a bit outrageous [crying]

This book perfectly suits my taste and perfectly explains the different paths of mortal immortals. However, the more it goes like this, the more difficult it is to follow. But I still like it very much, and I hope the author can concentrate on writing every day and not finish it. Happy New Year to the author!