A Hellish Love Triangle: They All Became Yanderes

The writing is okay. You say he is abusive but he is not abusive. Even if you say he is not abusive, he is quite abusive. It is worth recommending. The author can grasp the size and respects women. He is not the kind of person who can just play with it and get over it. Unlike some authors who casually play with the emotions of their female characters, which makes me very upset. Since you wrote this female character, you also let that female character develop feelings, and in the end you just played with it casually. I don't like this kind of thing. Maybe the perfect ending I pursue in reading novels is just the perfection of the protagonist. I don't have a problem with the male characters who abuse and play with them casually.

It's very beautiful and the subject matter is very novel. In most novels, the male protagonist acts as a master and harms the female apprentices, and then the female apprentices are reborn. It is rare to see this kind of unrebirth. I am very annoyed by the kind of formulaic articles that are about rebirth and clearing up misunderstandings. Very few authors write this kind of articles. Don't be born again. Don't eliminate misunderstandings or anything, just be honest. Sweet.

The third best novel I have ever read

Personally, I think it's good to write about past events. Some people may think it's a bit watery? After all, two chapters a day can be read by most people in less than eight minutes. People who read without main progress are very anxious, and it will make people want to read books. You can try writing in Kawen.

The image of the female protagonist is well portrayed. Each female protagonist has her own personality and characteristics. The male protagonist is very gentle and kind. This should be the reason why all the female protagonists still like him after being hurt by him [Blowing Kiss] I originally thought that Lan Shiyun in front of me would also accept it, but it turned out to be a passerby. What a pity.

It's great. It's even better three days a day. I haven't seen such a diligent author in a long time. Come on!

Let's talk about the good points first. The reason why most harem literature is serious is that the emotional line is explained too hastily. The author's writing style here avoids this problem very well. At least it doesn't read too wildly, and the main line is relatively clear. Although it is meaningless, it can be seen that there is a main line. Then let's talk about writing style. This is an unavoidable problem. Novel with good writing style, delicate emotional description, and well-drawn plot will not appear on novel software with a low threshold like Tomato. Therefore, it is understandable that poor writing style of emotional novels can easily affect the perception, which will affect the readership. Finally, there is the routine, which is basically a template. It feels like it was added on the assembly line. It is not immune to the routine. It can only be said that there is room for improvement. Generally speaking, it is easy to kill time by watching it when you have nothing to do, but the boring main plot will lead to insufficient retention rate. In short, it is not easy for the author. I give it 5 stars. Please keep working hard.

No novel can match it, and it is also unmatched by other novels.

It's a very good book, and the writing is also very good. However, the author is busy, so there are a few minor pitfalls, but it does not affect the overall quality of the book. Overall, Death is a very good book, and I hope the author will make a side story [Like]

Alas, it is a very good book, but no one reads it. The author said that it has lost a lot of readers. It is a very good book, but it is a pity that the ending is rushed and unfinished. I feel that I can write another hundred or two hundred chapters in the future. What a pity.