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The writing is okay. You say he is abusive but he is not abusive. Even if you say he is not abusive, he is quite abusive. It is worth recommending. The author can grasp the size and respects women. He is not the kind of person who can just play with it and get over it. Unlike some authors who casually play with the emotions of their female characters, which makes me very upset. Since you wrote this female character, you also let that female character develop feelings, and in the end you just played with it casually. I don't like this kind of thing. Maybe the perfect ending I pursue in reading novels is just the perfection of the protagonist. I don't have a problem with the male characters who abuse and play with them casually.

It's very beautiful and the subject matter is very novel. In most novels, the male protagonist acts as a master and harms the female apprentices, and then the female apprentices are reborn. It is rare to see this kind of unrebirth. I am very annoyed by the kind of formulaic articles that are about rebirth and clearing up misunderstandings. Very few authors write this kind of articles. Don't be born again. Don't eliminate misunderstandings or anything, just be honest. Sweet.

The third best novel I have ever read

Personally, I think it's good to write about past events. Some people may think it's a bit watery? After all, two chapters a day can be read by most people in less than eight minutes. People who read without main progress are very anxious, and it will make people want to read books. You can try writing in Kawen.

The image of the female protagonist is well portrayed. Each female protagonist has her own personality and characteristics. The male protagonist is very gentle and kind. This should be the reason why all the female protagonists still like him after being hurt by him [Blowing Kiss] I originally thought that Lan Shiyun in front of me would also accept it, but it turned out to be a passerby. What a pity.

It's great. It's even better three days a day. I haven't seen such a diligent author in a long time. Come on!

No novel can match it, and it is also unmatched by other novels.

Let's talk about the good points first. The reason why most harem literature is serious is that the emotional line is explained too hastily. The author's writing style here avoids this problem very well. At least it doesn't read too wildly, and the main line is relatively clear. Although it is meaningless, it can be seen that there is a main line. Then let's talk about writing style. This is an unavoidable problem. Novel with good writing style, delicate emotional description, and well-drawn plot will not appear on novel software with a low threshold like Tomato. Therefore, it is understandable that poor writing style of emotional novels can easily affect the perception, which will affect the readership. Finally, there is the routine, which is basically a template. It feels like it was added on the assembly line. It is not immune to the routine. It can only be said that there is room for improvement. Generally speaking, it is easy to kill time by watching it when you have nothing to do, but the boring main plot will lead to insufficient retention rate. In short, it is not easy for the author. I give it 5 stars. Please keep working hard.

It's a very good book, and the writing is also very good. However, the author is busy, so there are a few minor pitfalls, but it does not affect the overall quality of the book. Overall, Death is a very good book, and I hope the author will make a side story [Like]

Alas, it is a very good book, but no one reads it. The author said that it has lost a lot of readers. It is a very good book, but it is a pity that the ending is rushed and unfinished. I feel that I can write another hundred or two hundred chapters in the future. What a pity.

Good-looking, this is the kind of yandere I like (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ* I hope that each of the author's apprentices can be as vivid and special as the first two, with their own unique characters. I think it's good to write about their past experiences, which will enrich their emotional experiences. Just write them all, and don't lose them later. The story concept is really great, but the writing style could be improved. In some places, the narrative feels a bit like a novice.

Although except for the No. 1 Yandere novel in history, I find all other Yandere novels uninteresting, but I still give it five stars.

Okay, it's a clear cut. The author ran away without explaining anything. But there is one thing to say, the interspersed emotional scenes of the heroine in the past are really well described, and the plot unfolds slowly and has a pleasant feeling of changing the clouds. Unfortunately, the author arranged too many heroines, and it is not enough. No matter how generous it is, it is obviously not enough, and it seems that the protagonist has nothing to sympathize with.

It looks good. I hope I won't be banned again [face covering]

5⭐, After all, I am also chasing it, but the other apprentices haven't come out yet, maybe the author hasn't thought about it yet.

Very good, but isn't there the kind of apprentice who must kill the male protagonist? How many apprentices are there in total? [What][What][What]

Conversely A man took in 9 apprentices, then cruelly hurt them and abandoned them Many years later, nine apprentices and a man came to the door to crusade

Well, I think it's very good. The author will continue to work hard. I hope this novel will have at least 500 chapters.

It's very good, but I can't see too much of the H part in Tomato. Also, the ending is too hasty. The harem is very comfortable to watch. The knife is just right.

Disciples, when did you become yandere? Can anyone tell me?

Ahem, that author should start a group [laughing evilly]

It's okay, but I hope the author doesn't take revenge on society in the end. At the end, he stabs the apprentices together and lets the master experience their pain. Thank you for that. Come on! ❛‿˂̵✧

I don't know how many apprentices there are, hehehe, many of them are the protagonists who harm the apprentices, and then are exposed by God or the system, making them regret it, this is different, I hope the author can work harder [Thinking]

It's not bad, the amount of poison I can accept is not bad [laughing evilly]

Can there be more? It's not enough, and then it won't suddenly end again, right?

I don't know why, but my back molar hurts when I look at it.

The author's avatar looked familiar, but it turned out that I had also read the previous book. 2 Chapters a day? Let me tell you the number, one day! Chapter 200, just add two zeros

The update is so slow that even the production team members don't dare to rest like this! ! ! !

Goodbye, goodbye in the world, give that five stars

Author, author, you make it hard for me not to love you... I will ask my seventh aunt and eighth aunt to give you five stars! (｢･ω･)｢