After Leaving the Brave Team, I Became Their Stepfather

Emmm When I woke up, I saw a lot of negative reviews from my friends. Indeed, I am still considered a newbie, so... If you scolded my book, you can't scold me again! ˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ )‧º·˚

It's really beautiful. Of course, the portrayal of those girls is not too disgusting. It's so satisfying to be taken care of by the protagonist [laughing] It's a great book. I urge you to read more.

Pretty good but no traffic. The author's route is different from that of that book

Come, the author read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I, Zhuang Ya, swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I am able to code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark, a guard on the Great Wall of Internet literature. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words, day by day, and night by night.

When I think of this female teammate, I can't help but think of the three guys in Hypnosis Revenge [smile][smile][smile]

I declare this to be the most complicated book I have ever seen in Western Persimmon. . One. Very interesting. And it looks like the backstage is very hard [whisper bb] I finished reading it in one day, and throughout the whole process I felt that this book repeatedly made me laugh at the weird points I already had. . Well, there are also cars rolling over my face from time to time. I understand it instantly🥀 Anyway, it's the boss's fault. At last. Coach, I want to learn to drive👉👈💦

How can I put it, I can't live without this book. It's not like the previous novels, which always follow the same old routine. It incorporates some new and interesting points, which makes the readers less boring. This is indeed a point worthy of praise. Although it is a bit evil, but It's just right for me who haven't read a new book for a long time. This book is one of the few I've read that I could read in one sitting (of course, it may be because the author is short and weak). All in all, this book is very good and I highly recommend it [sneaky smile] (I emphasize that I am not trusting you)

This book reminds me of a series in which a certain reply to a warlock [laughs crookedly][laughs crookedly][laughs crookedly]

It's good to read, and I also discovered the core of the novel: study hard and communicate more with others. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The beginning of the plot is similar to a certain episode. The Dragon King is kicked out of the team by his teammates, and then his teammates can't do anything, so the Dragon King just goes solo. It was quite fun at first, but... First, there is the issue of the female protagonist. There are many female supporting characters in it, and there is a lot of pornographic material. This is the reason for the 3 stars, which is inconsistent with the label (I don't know if there is a female protagonist in the end, I haven't finished watching it, but now it looks like a soft harem); The second is leaking secrets. The male protagonist has a technology that shocked the world, but the level of confidentiality is zero, and he uses it as a cool point. Passers-by are always shocked, and the male protagonist does not consider safety issues; The third is to add some strange things. For example, life and career can also shine, which makes it more enjoyable. This does not make sense. The male protagonist's golden finger cannot be copied, and it is not based on those single brushes. Anyone who has seen it knows that, so it is not enjoyable. The summary is that if you can tolerate pornographic material and do not consider logic, it can be considered a pleasure, but it is a low-level pleasure. Because there is no foreshadowing, just name it and say how precious and precious it is. For people like me who like to read cool articles, it is not cool enough. But things are also compared. 🍅There isn't much to see, so after thinking about it, I gave it 4 stars.

It's beautiful, it's beautiful Ten points, even nine points of excitement Every day I have to brush it three times, three times, three times, three times This book was recommended to me by the boss when I went to a members-only restaurant in Shimokitazawa. It's really good. It's beautiful and the writing is very clear. I have to thank Tokugawa-kun for it. Without him, I wouldn't have read this beautiful book.

Not bad, not bad. I don't want to prepare hundreds of chapters for revenge in other books. It's very enjoyable.

This book, so far, is really good. It's the first time I've found a book that makes me feel so comfortable [face covering] Okay, now I change my mind (ｰ̀εｰ́)

It starts with five stars, but it's a pity that there are no 6 stars. Just bring your brains with you

As someone who has read the first seventeen chapters and commented on it, I can only say that there are no good people in the book (including the protagonist), it is all about interests. How should I put it? There is no paragraph in the first seventeen chapters (I don't know about the rest) that says the protagonist is a pervert, but it is said everywhere that the protagonist is a pervert. Before, I thought the protagonist was a bit miserable, but after the author's advice, I found out that the protagonist had a purpose to pick up the three eldest ladies. Before, I thought they didn't trust the protagonist too much, but now I realized that he was a bit unruly, but he had a good sense of protection.

Um! The author should also be a lolicon. Since they are all lolicon, then they are five stars! Are you sick? Chapter 66: Touch a crystal. It takes a long time to figure it out.

It's not poisonous, but the female protagonist's pretentiousness in the early stage made some people over-brained. It's a standard cool article, the author's story, a regular reader of the small book, and many veterans of the familiar settings will smile knowingly. Don't be a eunuch! Tomatoes are highly homogenized in novels. These seedlings must be well protected!

It's a very interesting book. I hope the author will work hard. Is it a single female protagonist?

Very nice, but too short. The heroine hopes to be a sword master. After all, who doesn't love a loli?

I have read Chapter 36 so far. I will give it five stars when the author replies to me. Let me talk about the current poisonous point, which is that the world view is not well described. For example, is there only one entrance to the God's Long Step? If there is only one, so many people in the whole continent will have to queue up to enter. The distribution mechanism of the dungeon has not been written. Is everyone able to enter the same floor or is there a limit on the number of people? The main thing is that the protagonist will not secretly develop, so I asked these questions. It would be fine if the protagonist ran away secretly, but if there is only one entrance to the God's Long Step, then I have nothing to say.

I really like this book. Compared with other wise books, it's really good.

The plot is really good. I hope the three brainless female characters will commit suicide because of their guilt. The main reason is that the author is too prolific. They need five stars [smile]

It's super good-looking. I stayed up late and read dozens of chapters and couldn't get enough of it. It was so satisfying to be slapped in the face. The protagonist is strong not because of his halo but because of himself. Moreover, the protagonist's personality is also great and the plot is also very good. It would have been better if it wasn't a harem story. The world view and plot are actually very good. However, it fell apart in the later stages and was too colloquial in some places. If I were to rate it again, it would be four stars.

Let's see what happens later [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua][Chigua] Pin it here with five stars first, and then comment later. There are a few things I would like to mention about the book. First, the pace may be due to the fact that I am a fast reader - I felt that in order to match the title, I was eager to move forward with the part about chasing my husband in the crematorium. The villains are indeed very vividly portrayed, but some of the things about the people around the protagonist are like pressing fast forward. The leader of the war fortress does not appear in many chapters [Chigua] The sword master's emotional line is also very fast. After staying together for a while, after downloading the dungeon, the goodwill is almost full [Chigua] I hope there are a little more descriptions like Xia Luo to make the entire protagonist group appear fuller. The second is about the world setting, character level setting and strength division. Now I am slowly starting to feel a little dizzy. Although there are not many forces that have come out so far, there does not seem to be a detailed introduction to the gods, powers, and various races [exploration]. In other words, based on the current information alone, I can't even think of a map of the world in the book [Thinking] Third, regarding the lack of a female protagonist [Chigua], I would like to ask whether you plan to have a harem or a sword?

Congratulations to the author for adding to the permanent collection. Although it was a bit broken, the author's decisiveness left everyone with an infinite rural ending, which is not bad [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

Overall plot: The setting is quite complete. The introduction says that the protagonist will be subversive, so I won't comment on it. Character evaluation: The psychological journeys of important characters are basically written, so it's pretty good. Disadvantages: The subsequent plot is basically covered in one stroke, which makes it really... A pity at the end. Personal evaluation—can recommend

I think it's good. Most people think that revenge is not satisfying enough. The protagonist's power is deliberately delayed. The author can improve it.

To be honest, it's very good. I don't know why the comment section always says that this book is copied from another one. This book is just similar in the front, but different in the back. The plot and development direction are different.

Please ask Murphy to be the heroine, and have a strong white-haired little lolita (I feel a little arrogant looking at it), that would be super cool, okay?

The subject matter is great. Although it is very poisonous, it also has a lot of fun points. There is a bit of bt in the content, but the protagonist may make many people dislike it (problems with character design). I really like Murphy the Little Sword Master! , I believe there will be many readers of this book, but the rating will not be too high, so I give it five stars [note]