Everyone in the Magic World Is So Strange

Don't write the protagonist so weak. In the beginning of the 70th chapter, you have to fight with one skill and I have one skill. Later, it is difficult to win. There are too few details and the scene is monotonous. Although this is a heroine, the protagonist has all attributes and only needs to be proficient in all magic in the advancement system. Just don't write about this setting. If you write, write about something strong, otherwise it will feel frustrating. The previous level is not high? Can't write strong points? Can't write battle scenes? Don't say you haven't learned physics, otherwise you can just copy the original God. I won't be sorry for my five-star rating.

After reading a few chapters, it was very confusing and there was no complete system. It didn't match up with the two series mentioned earlier for promotion. The protagonist of this third family goes to get engaged. First he talks about the government, and later he talks about the aristocratic family. There is no priority. There is also the random name change, which is really, really uncomfortable to watch. You can write about the academy well. If the aristocratic families are so bad, then the top combat power belongs to the aristocratic families. What is the use of the existence of the government? What is the use of schools? It was really sudden to suddenly switch to engagement. Rely on the defense.

I wrote this Samsung for you. The male protagonist started poisoning after his death, right? That Zhang Siyu really can't be fixed by me. Doesn't the male protagonist disagree with the writing method to recruit a bride? If you don't get married until you are in your 20s, you can delay it for as long as you want. A few days after Zhang Siyu won the battle, she and the male protagonist went to the hotel to eat soup and medicine, and then almost had sex with the male protagonist. This male protagonist was so close to this woman later on, and you, the author, forcibly cleared him up. What do you think? Everyone looked at me and felt numb for half a circle. Whether your male lead is a villain or a cool writer, you can't be so submissive and have a completely flattering personality 🙂

In Chapter 17, I died from poison. The more I thought about it, the more angry I became, so I decided not to read it. [Sad] The idea is good, but the writing is not good. The protagonist is too frustrated. It can be said that it is the same as nothing. A lot of time is wasted. I can only meditate for an hour every day. I don't have to learn magic. Why don't I know how to match my own magic routine?

Really, I am particularly annoyed by this book about female heroes. You don't know what's going on. The more I read this book about female heroes, the more annoyed I am. I have read a few books before and they were all good. But when I look at this one, I don't know why it is getting more and more annoying the more I read it.

The plot is too convoluted. I guess there is no outline. The protagonist looks like a mentally retarded child. The system is too sloppy. There is some creativity. I hope the author will work hard. The writing still needs more practice.

If the author is confident of writing a long novel, I will give it five stars. If you are done with just a few hundred articles, then you are a little out of touch. There is nothing wrong with the overall outline, and the content is also very exciting, but I haven't seen the exciting parts in a short period of time. Author, please update quickly. What's wrong with updating every day?

Why should such a good idea be coupled with such poor writing?

Very good, but why are there so few people watching it? It's getting weirder and weirder, the plot is completely disconnected, but the subject matter is still good

It stands to reason that this book is well-written, but there is no protagonist in one-third of the plot. There is no heroine in the story. You also added the content of a full-time mage. The update speed is still slow, so there is no reason for it to become popular.