After the Divine Sound Trial, their soul power increased dramatically. While fighting the Wind Source King, they unexpectedly learned more of the secrets of this continent. Teria and Youming continued to fight side by side, tearing apart and scattering all the malice this world held for them, then hurling it into that unfathomably deep abyss.
Can you write more about Shenyin? I feel like she is really good. And Treya, her talent is really scary!!!
Thank you to all my friends for your support. My writing skills are limited. If you think it doesn't look good or there is something wrong with it, you can point it out. I will try my best to modify it [Blow kiss]
All chapters in the first volume have been re-polished and re-written.
It's a bit messy, the scenes change too quickly, and Treya's character feels a bit broken. In the original novel, she is always elegant and smart. There are a few chapters where she seems like a mischievous woman. Who is she asking in anger?
It doesn't feel good, and his combat power seems to have collapsed. For example, Gilgamesh's four-dimensional talent is at the limit. Even the Horcrux is made of the sword of the Silver Priest. He is the strongest existence. In order to imprison him, he used the White Hell. It feels weak and pitiful in it. It has no setting and strength in the original book. There is also the Ghost Mountain and Lotus Spring. Even the new fifth-degree kings are evenly matched. Didn't the original book say that her soul power might be the highest in Aslan? She is also pitifully weak here. There is also Qi Ling, isn't it said that he is the zero-degree king? There is also Fengjin. After Yin Chen died in the movie, the Shukawa Jizo he fought could only defend, and his strength was not reflected here. No matter how strong the kings of other countries are, Aslan's peak combat power will not be like this, right?
After looking at the first few pictures, I thought they were just average. The special relationship between the king and the apostle, the soul power level of the king and the apostle, the fifth-degree king Isa and Hill, Hill is not the eroder, it seems that the seal has never been given. Without the seal, there would be no knight's seal, and there would not be the same soul circuit. Before the apostle becomes the king, the soul path has not been copied, so he will be the opponent of the king. The reason why the king is the king is that the apostle will copy the soul path again after the king's death. The difference is here. The strength between the kings is reduced by 1-7. Guishan Lianquan and Qi Ling are special. Guishan Lianquan has two different sets of soul circuits and they are two sets of the king's circuits that are copied again. Their strength is not that of Gilgamesh, but it is much stronger than other kings. The many modifiers are too whitewashed and make people feel uncomfortable. Come on. I hope it can be improved. After all, Critical Jueji is the first love of many readers.
What the author wrote is still different from the original novel's story setting. Netherworld Treya has been wirelessly strengthened, Gilgamesh is extremely weak, and it doesn't have the flavor of the original version. Moreover, how could Lord Feng Yuan be killed so easily by Lord Shui Yuan? The original settings are gone.
Is this the original work or is it written by the author himself? When I read it before, I didn't know many people and things until I finished it 🤦
It's very interesting [heartfelt] but King Jiji's character is broken and his strength is too weak.
It's pretty cool, but I feel like the combat power is a bit broken.
Can you write more about Shenyin? I feel like she is really good. And Treya, her talent is really scary!!!
Thank you to all my friends for your support. My writing skills are limited. If you think it doesn't look good or there is something wrong with it, you can point it out. I will try my best to modify it [Blow kiss] All chapters in the first volume have been re-polished and re-written.
It's a bit messy, the scenes change too quickly, and Treya's character feels a bit broken. In the original novel, she is always elegant and smart. There are a few chapters where she seems like a mischievous woman. Who is she asking in anger?
It doesn't feel good, and his combat power seems to have collapsed. For example, Gilgamesh's four-dimensional talent is at the limit. Even the Horcrux is made of the sword of the Silver Priest. He is the strongest existence. In order to imprison him, he used the White Hell. It feels weak and pitiful in it. It has no setting and strength in the original book. There is also the Ghost Mountain and Lotus Spring. Even the new fifth-degree kings are evenly matched. Didn't the original book say that her soul power might be the highest in Aslan? She is also pitifully weak here. There is also Qi Ling, isn't it said that he is the zero-degree king? There is also Fengjin. After Yin Chen died in the movie, the Shukawa Jizo he fought could only defend, and his strength was not reflected here. No matter how strong the kings of other countries are, Aslan's peak combat power will not be like this, right?
After looking at the first few pictures, I thought they were just average. The special relationship between the king and the apostle, the soul power level of the king and the apostle, the fifth-degree king Isa and Hill, Hill is not the eroder, it seems that the seal has never been given. Without the seal, there would be no knight's seal, and there would not be the same soul circuit. Before the apostle becomes the king, the soul path has not been copied, so he will be the opponent of the king. The reason why the king is the king is that the apostle will copy the soul path again after the king's death. The difference is here. The strength between the kings is reduced by 1-7. Guishan Lianquan and Qi Ling are special. Guishan Lianquan has two different sets of soul circuits and they are two sets of the king's circuits that are copied again. Their strength is not that of Gilgamesh, but it is much stronger than other kings. The many modifiers are too whitewashed and make people feel uncomfortable. Come on. I hope it can be improved. After all, Critical Jueji is the first love of many readers.
What the author wrote is still different from the original novel's story setting. Netherworld Treya has been wirelessly strengthened, Gilgamesh is extremely weak, and it doesn't have the flavor of the original version. Moreover, how could Lord Feng Yuan be killed so easily by Lord Shui Yuan? The original settings are gone.
Is this the original work or is it written by the author himself? When I read it before, I didn't know many people and things until I finished it 🤦
It's very interesting [heartfelt] but King Jiji's character is broken and his strength is too weak.
It's pretty cool, but I feel like the combat power is a bit broken.
It's really beautiful